Arylie TS: Chapter 2 Graduation, 16+ updated Pg 15

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Posted: 3 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: SundariP

i think it's obvious 🤣

Iska har din vrat hota hai! Ye BHI koi koschin hai? 🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: mltr16

Iska har din vrat hota hai! Ye BHI koi koschin hai? 🤣

jabse aryan life me aya hai... only penduluming b/w vrat and tharak 😛

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Posted: 3 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: mltr16
Awww @reginalsecret. You totally made my day. Comments like these make all the late nights spent revising, editing, rewriting - completely worth it.
Seeing as I am still a novice at writing stories, a full fledged chapter dedicated to - 😳 I'll just say it an erotic lovemaking scene 😳 ack!! 😳😳 - felt daunting. I knew what I had in mind (because of course, I know how I visualize Aryan and Imlie). But so often in the past, pages and pages describing body parts, proportions, foreplay, the act, etc etc...you get the drift, stopped being - I can't believe I am saying this either- titillating and veered towards, oh whatever, let's move on.

I knew for sure, that was not going to be me. So, discovering what was going to be my style has consumed a good bit of my quiet time. Then of course wondering how the readers would respond - too tame? Too much? Too little?

I think while Aryan is a natural Dom, he wants to make sure he weaves trust into every aspect of their relationship. He has slowly built that over the last few stories but especially more so in the carnal sense, since Imlie moved to the US. The culmination had to be a significant step towards cementing trust in this aspect of their relationship too.

Words can get repetitive in a long story like this one or any novel, the challenge is holding the reader's interest and grabbing their minds enough to force their imagination.

So, a review like this, makes it all worth it. I had told @Sarcy in the beginning of my writing journey, if I find even 1 or 2 people who truly enjoy reading what I write, would be willing to talk to me about the writing, I would continue as long as the ideas form and the words manifest.

I am still learning to be secure in my new identity as a writer, I guess, of sorts. Even if it is shortlived. So my apologies if I ever sound self deprecating in my comments. My lens is a lot different than yours. So thank you.

Thanks for taking the time to write me a wonderful review ❤️🤗

I also want to take a moment to thank @SheldonCooperr, MeetPremeer, Chanchal, Potterhead, egle, Juwii29, happiness1, nmurali and others who have commented.

Pro quid quo, right? You make my day, I make yours and so it goes.. And I've said this before but I'll say it again, writing a review is the least I can do when I personally know the amount of time publishing a chapter that is versatile, grammatically accurate and enticing at the same time, takes. I'm glad you took your time figuring out what kinda writer you wanna be.. the introspection really shows.. Tbh, hard-core erotica and B*S* isn't really my cup of tea either.. For me its more about subtlety....

And please don't apologise for something like that.. I choose to view it as you being a humble human being.. makes you all the more close to my heart❤️