Arylie TS: Chapter 2 Graduation, 16+ updated Pg 15 - Page 13

Oh My GOD!!!!

Girl! This is amazing, honestly you captured everything so beautifully. I doubt anyone could write such beautiful erotic love making scene. Most stories are like wham bam and done. This, there was foreplay, teasing, he really made her hot and comfortable at the same time.

Please do write more, the story is shaping up so nicely, the past and present interspersed beautifully and I love how he suggested safe words and her consent on having children, not many men do that so again ummm Sigh

Originally posted by: nmurali

Oh My GOD!!!!

Girl! This is amazing, honestly you captured everything so beautifully. I doubt anyone could write such beautiful erotic love making scene. Most stories are like wham bam and done. This, there was foreplay, teasing, he really made her hot and comfortable at the same time.

Please do write more, the story is shaping up so nicely, the past and present interspersed beautifully and I love how he suggested safe words and her consent on having children, not many men do that so again ummm Sigh

Thank you @nmurali for following example and giving sansakari version of comment. I am so glad you liked it!! More interweaving of past and present to come 😉

Originally posted by: mltr16

@bold: What a visual 🤣🤣

You generously shared your vision. Its only fair that I share mine.

Originally posted by: egle

You generously shared your vision. Its only fair that I shared mine.

🤣🤣🤣 Indeed. The glimpse was quite.....appealing.

Hey can I hv the 2nd version as well. 😋

Originally posted by: jhankarbeats87

Hey can I hv the 2nd version as well. 😋

Yes madam, you can.

M, girlfriend. Wow. Woow. Wooooooow.

Spice level was 🌶🔥 to the max!!! I swear the style of your writing is absolutely beautiful. The characters you have built bring so much to the table it’s unbelievable. I reread BOTH twice. Cuz I needed time to process what I read becuz damn 🥵 the heat was there. No doubt the heat was definitely there. I can’t wait for more pyaasi stories…..the sansakari versions too. But wow. 👀🥵

Sizzling, hot, and what not!!❤️☺️keep wanting more

☺️😊☺️😊 what an amazing update! Loved how you mentioned Amma feeling kinda out of place but still enjoying herself and SK being proud of his Imlie!

And the emotions she felt knowing that she has a little time left with her American family!

Now coming to the bedroom scene... You've written the emotional moments for both so well!(trying to keep this very sanskari 😉)

The reward they both received for the years of waiting was definitely well described.

Wishful thinking if we get 10% of this in the actual show itself!

Can't believe aryan like man exist in the world... So much respect he have for his ladylove n respect her like n dislike.. Want she wants or not.. Masterpeice it is in one word i will say to this graduation part