Arylie TS: Chapter 2 Graduation, 16+ updated Pg 15 - Page 14

Took me 5 whole minutes to calm down and type this after reading the unsanskari version. My overactive imagination is still running all those images in my mind and Oh My God.

I think Aryan and Imlie discussing safe words is both very erotic and very cute at the same time ❤️

It takes a certain grit to write such parts, so beautifully and kudos is writing such a gorgeous one

My my girl

You made my day

This was 🔥

Loved it so much

The chemistry that you depicted between them

The way Aryan Singh Rathore always thinks things through before venturing into anything be it professional or personal has my heart

And the way Imlie get's to be with him, so comfortable in her own skin and still encouraged to learn more is refreshing

O to the M to the G!!!

What did I just read!!...*breathing heavily*

Maannnn!! You are amazinggg!!

See...I usually dont write paragraphs...but since u love to hear and you deserve it...i'd write one.!

Soo...I dont know where to start! It was a mild version of 50 shades! Aryan...ahhh...he..he is such a hottie! Whatta man!...talking about the story...there were many or rather almost every other line that i re read a thousand times...only to be awed everytime!...beautifully written man!

Every line had me awstruck!!..The vocabs..the tone..the expressions...everything were spot on!!👏👏👏

Ahh...*thinking hard*

*think think think*

*Gives up*

I guess thats all I can write for now...coz I had to read the sanskari wala too😂

Also agar isi me saari taarife kar dii toh aage walo me kya bolungi sooo!!

And that's how a lovemaking is done. This is so classy but sizzling hot that makes you feel those bunch of butterfly in your stomach. 🤪

It was not only Imlie that have to practice breathing, we all were there too.☺️It is very diffucult to show love and lust together and you made that blend so perfect. This was just awesome.

Now that you have just raised our expectations to sky,we will be expecting, demanding and coercing you for more of these in future.

Be prepared.

so beautifully you write mannn!!! i loved loved loved it but i want to read its 2nd unsanskari version also! 😅 but i'm unable to send you PM! so now can i get it or not ?

Disclaimer: Cuss words comin' up cuz after reading something like that, how can I not?

Ohhhhhh boyyyy! What the fu*k did I just read? I wanna do a para by para description of the unsanskaari version but I can't...

Girl, I've read a lot of sm*t but this one takes the cake... Safe s*x education never felt so erotic before.. There's something about your words that makes me comfortable but hot and bothered at the same time... A lot of times, the talking is a turn off for me but you struck the balance and how!

I knew alpha Aryan would never be a disappointment, especially in your capable hands but this just blew my expectations out of the park... How am I expected to read PG stuff when I know that you weave magic with the M?

But all that aside, the best part of it for me was how you didn't have to make them OOC.. they're so much in-character that none of it feels forced.. The one-of-a-kind partner thing was a wonderful addition, so much so that this chapter would've felt incomplete without it...

Aryan's generous and responsible nature once again came out to play and while it wasn't unprecedented, having it come out in the bed room just elevated him so high, I don't think I'll ever be able to get married lol (tho marriage is a loong way off).. Then you had Imlie being the model student, once again, only her medium and her classroom had changed..

Another thing that I loved is the fact that despite having read different and sometimes even more explicit versions of the same you-and-me-under-the-sheets-frolicking-upto-climax sh*t over and over again, I never felt like this was cliche in anyway despite the potential tropes incorporated..

It was a bit too much of a dreamy first-time *sigh* so beautiful

Thanks for makin me fall in love with these too over and over again...lookin forward to more❤️

P.S.: Have you seen the new bts that bhau posted yet?

Before I forget commenting, M, that was good. Both versions, in my opinion was absolutely on point. It was classy with zero sleaze to it. Great writing👏

Okieee.

imlie is exactly and more than I would want her to be at this point .The trust they have built up for everything ,especially in their marital bed is 👏🔥Aryan. Tho is Aryan -Full on in control slipping(I don’t blame him) alpha peeked . I just see them in Shiddat dance mode mood when ever I read your stories

@M, Very classy love making scene! even the non sanskari version. I would say it was semi sansksari to quote S.

On a side note, I was right about Aryan liking more 'sophisticated' food items! Was I not.

Cupcakes and truffle! 😀

Originally posted by: GenMed

@M, Very classy love making scene! even the non sanskari version. I would say it was semi sansksari to quote S.

On a side note, I was right about Aryan liking more 'sophisticated' food items! Was I not.

Cupcakes and truffle! 😀

he has no carbs rule....

so imlie gets to eat in is place 😆