AryLie SS -First love's first Hug - Part 2 @pg1 end post - Page 3

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: SundariP

sooo fast... you weren't kidding about brain in overdrive mode...😆

i read in FF mode @work will give detailed comment aaram se❤️

lol.. i am in a Fast Forward mode for last whole week.. now need to calm down.... not enough sleep.. m literally a zombie these days..

thanks again.. waiting for ur feedback..

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: -tellyaddict-

lol.. i am in a Fast Forward mode for last whole week.. now need to calm down.... not enough sleep.. m literally a zombie these days..

thanks again.. waiting for ur feedback..


tell me about no sleep i get hardly 3 hrs...

the most toxic relation ryt now in my life is me and my mobile 🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: SundariP


tell me about no sleep i get hardly 3 hrs...

the most toxic relation ryt now in my life is me and my mobile 🤣

lol i am same...my bermuda triangle has laptop in it too..


@preetd tagging you too so that you too can read this 2nd installment of my crazy imagination 😜

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Oh plse it will be pleasure to have part3,4,5,6, will love to read its awesome... That hug can't get over it dear

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priti1610

Oh plse it will be pleasure to have part3,4,5,6, will love to read its awesome... That hug can't get over it dear

thank you so much...motivation from you all made mh brain thinking abt 3rd part already and it looks like fun so far to me..

ill post once it finalizes..

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Happy for upcoming part3

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: -tellyaddict-

thank you sooo very much dear..your word means a lot.. ill try to continue this one as i love 2nd part so very much myself.. and i can imagine all sort if things My Aryan would do for his lady love without making her burdened by his love..

jusy hoping ill get the time to do so.. still ill try.

thanks again..😊

Welcome... dont take stress.. Take your time to write.... .. We will wait.... U write nicely so the wait will be worth it....😊❤️
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: hurrom

Welcome... dont take stress.. Take your time to write.... .. We will wait.... U write nicely so the wait will be worth it....😊❤️

thats means a lot for a person like me.. who considers herself as an average writer.. when i start writing I just forget when to stop.. and it gets difficult for me to stop once my brain starts imagination and thinking.. but it really really a very big compliment.

thank you soo much..

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Aw, I really liked this. Well done! I think you’ve captured the first hug perfectly here. It might be this week or it might still be a few weeks away but it’ll definitely be because Aryan is worried for Imlie, perhaps blaming himself, and when he finds her he’s just running on emotion and there’s a hug.


Look forward to reading whatever else you decide to write!! ♥️♥️


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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hello there,

What a lovely story you have started, really enjoyed both parts.👍🏼

So glad that Imlie heard Aditya's words, she needs to know how he really thinks and feels about her. It will be hurtful but necessary for her to move on.

Conversation between Aryan and Mithi is sweet, nice for Aryan to become familiar with Imlie's family dynamics. The payal !!! Yesss, I was smiling when the payal made an entry to the story. Hoping for something similar and memorable in the show too.

Aryan's reaction at Aditya's words and concern for Imlie are so sweet. We get a chance to see his protective side.

Loved the temple interaction, his hug, his realisation, Imlie was still processing, this was very much in character.

Thank you for sharing x

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