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Posted: 10 years ago
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Today when?? Morning, afternoon, evening, night?? You need to be a little more specific than that lady 😡😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Suvika.

Today when?? Morning, afternoon, evening, night?? You need to be a little more specific than that lady 😡😆


ROFL... my lovely lady... before 2:00 it will be up ...😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Romanticfreak


ROFL... my lovely lady... before 2:00 it will be up ...😉



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Romanticfreak


ROFL... my lovely lady... before 2:00 it will be up ...😉



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Suvi yaar lol Tu ghoor rahi ho... Allah knows aj toh humtwitter PE sony walon PE charas bodhrahe the lol will update it before u it bed jani pakka
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OHMYYYGOSSHHH
why oh why didnt i read this sooner

shakti this is beautiful. the concept is so cute ❤️ and the saaz scene was awwdorable.

as i;ve said u write and describe stuff so well...if i m able to do half as well as u do it...i'll think my life as a writer has become safal 🤣

the chocolate scene was too cute ❤️ i could so imagine HC gulping down all the chocolate before the scene 🤣

But u cant leave it at such a cliff hanger...agli update chaiye
chaiye matlab chaiye :P
i wanna see what sensible aarzoo does next...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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P.s now that aarzoo and sahir are at this crucial point..
u shud deffo use sme of ur poetic works...will definitely blend well with htier state of mind...

p.p.s i fogot to stay...really good job with the chapeter...next update kab?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Ari--

OHMYYYGOSSHHH

why oh why didnt i read this sooner

shakti this is beautiful. the concept is so cute ❤️ and the saaz scene was awwdorable.

as i;ve said u write and describe stuff so well...if i m able to do half as well as u do it...i'll think my life as a writer has become safal🤣

the chocolate scene was too cute ❤️ i could so imagine HC gulping down all the chocolate before the scene🤣

But u cant leave it at such a cliff hanger...agli update chaiye
chaiye matlab chaiye :P
i wanna see what sensible aarzoo does next...



Hahaha thanks Ari... Actually my arzoo here os bit diff from the arzoo shown in show... The way she think the way she irks sahir irritates him challenges him is completely diff... Sure sista will update it today else Suvi too will kill me today lolol
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice OS shakti...that hot chocolate scene was yum 😉 ...waiting for the next update...jaldi kar 😊
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PART -4


Sahir: Seriously? Lemme check ...and he sips it from the part of rim where she sipped...feeling the very fragrance of her lipstick feeling her lips under his lips as though having chocolate directly from her lips... Looking at her straight... In her eyes... The tension between them is increasing... Arzoo noticed his look on her her cheeks sensed his stare on her his presence around her with such proximity is clenching her abdomen with hot flashes across her thigh's... She looks away composing herself and is about to leave...

Sahir: Ruko...( Her heart stops there wondering if he noticed change in her...)

Looking at the cup... Continues sahir...
Ehhh.I mean whatever its name is its...nice...
From tomorrow evening time I want this and now, can you tell me what's the schedule for the day???

Arzoo : Oho.just now you were throwing your so called principles at me that o shouldn't be changing your tastes and so on and now you liked my choice for you???Any ways you have a meeting wth Malaysian clients and they are in Pune. You have to start by 4:00pm. Shall I book the driver?

Sahir: Ok. So head to Pune ... Rolling his fingers...wittily stands up and turns to arzoo saying "you have to be in your senses when you tend to suggest me something.when we already have an acclaimed driver with us why hire new one??

Arzoo: We already have driver? Who's that sir? Allah knows I never knew there's one here...
Sahir: Tilting his head slightly looking at her diagonally says... This driver accompanied me to panchghani ...
Arzoo: Wide opens her mouth and eyes 'sssir u mean me? I have to come with you to Pune???
Sahir: Do you have any option left? Coz during the meeting I want someone to take the notes and send an MOM so that we can forecast the report to the client and get approvals for further procedures for coming up new designs. So... I wan... I mean you have to come.
Arzoo: Butterflies flying in her tummy .. Hot flashes running through her feminine instincts... Composing her self says that if she has to accompany him he needs to behave like a normal man ...like talking to her allowing her to play music ...
Sahir knowing all this is going to come says "shut up and out "
Arzoo gives him a deadly look and leaves.

Call from Alvira to Sahir: Asking him to come home as some disturbance with the property mortgaged for Singapore deal...

Sahir rushes assigning some task to Arzoo worriedly...
Arzoo gets disturbed with his worried face...and prays to Allah that everything should be fine with him... And heads to her work assigned.

At Niyamat House:
Alvira, lawyer waiting for sahir...

Sahir enters the house and hurriedly goes to study where Alvira and lawyer are wating asks what's the matter...
Alvira says that you have taken a hasty decision in the marathon of winning challenge sahir. He visited us for signatures. Do you even have idea of what you are going go do??? Hum sab road pe ajayenge Sahir...

Sahir: Ammi , all these years I seemed only one thing form this family it's trust only trust. And I think I never failed in making upto it. I today request you again seeking your trust... Can you trust me once again???

Alvira: Sahir beta, look I always trust you and believe in you. I am a mother of three kids. Your brother, you and zaki. He is Dubai sis making his living so no issues. You are struggling to make us stand in top stack of society and you are undoubtedly successful. But have you thought of zaki who is still immature in his thoughts? He does nothing other than freaking out. He doesn't realize his responsibilities yet. Considering him I am really worried. If we stake our property now, Allah kare I always wish you to come out with flying colours. But, if something wrong goes... What about all of us... I am not being selfish beta, I am being protective of all of us as a mother. I hope you understand and I cant ask zaki Ro sign on property papers for mortgaging and neither I would prefer. Its better for all of us. Laweyer ji, do we have any other choice of making money for the Singapore deal??

Sahir taken aback with Alviras words... Disheartened... Says can we have this discussion continued once am back from Pune please lawyer Saab.

Lawyer: Ji sahir sir. Once you are back let me know will catch up for another discussion.

Alvura: Sahir beta, considering Rehamans threats its better you decide now. I asked wakeel Saab to prepare a will where the property is divided in to 2parts. One in mine and other in yours while power of attorney will be me for yours too as I fear that you may harm yourself in the rage of winning your challenge ... mine will be shared to your elder bro and zaki and the remaining all yours. Coz, if something goes wrong I can be of help to you. As a back up I wanted to do this. Please share your thought on this.

Sahir: Eyes filled in pain, tears tiding wildly in his heart not knowing when the tremor of his lonliness bursts out as a volcano clenching his fists... Repeats " Ammi everything will be fine. You can do it as you feel like doing it. I don't want any %of property. Keep everything on yours name. While I will be the operating person"

Alvira asks lawyer to go ahead. Lawyers and Alvira both leave the place , Sahir stands alone looking at the vacuum left in skies dlfr the window...while a total shocked Arzoo stands behind him with her grounds shaken at the bitter reality of selfishness in relations when it comes to money... She wants to forget everything that happened and wants to run into his arms console him... But as its purely a family matter she refrains from doing that. She goes to outhouse and from her baggage she takes out a file and leaves.
Sahir too is ready...they are about to leave in sometime at dining table all are gathered for dinner. Farah storms in NH shouting nausheens name... Horrified Arzoo looks on from the other side of hall while Sahir looks on. Nausheen asks her to stop shouting. While Zara asks to reveal the matter.
Farah: "How shameless a woman can be... And how low one can stoop for begging money from a man who already moved on in his life... How can nausheen even think of meeting her husband in darkness of the day for money... Is she so desperate to sell her feminity even after having kids with him???"

An insulted nausheen feels as though she is getting openly stripped and her respect is crashed into pieces and feels as though the death bed is the only solution left for her instead of gulping the blame that Farah just throwed at her says
" Enough Farah, neither I am interested in selling my body to your husband nor I interested in him. He is father of three daughters wh Io deserted them for a woman like you. I wanted to make sure the kids get an ounce of justice from him at least in the form of financial support for their education. Arzoo though was able to do her fashion designing diploma ..she discontinued college in the final year of her degree for which she slogged in night college. I didn't want same t o happen with Myra hence I have taken help as per which I still have time to repay. Request you not to create a fuss and leave"

Farah clapping says wah wah nausheen you are such an opportunist and a double standard lady... You allowed your elder daughter to sacrifice her education for your other kids and yourself now cant do same with your younger one??? If you approached my husband now then why didn't you do then? It's just coz now he is handy for you. You made your elder daughter play the cheap game with sons of thus house and so you don't worry. By making her go under the quilt of a son of this house, you can get hell of money then why the hell are you ...

A tight fierce slap hits the cheeks of Farah getting a tooth blown out in parabolic shape and fell in hands of kurtiapa.. And her jhumka in anams hand...

It took a while for her to regain the sense as her eardrum is still numb with nothing that she could hear... The hall went silent with an echoing sound of tight slap...and all stunned at the sight and anger flooding in the hall...Farah turned to face the person who slapped and for the shock of her lords it's none other than Arzoo.

Sahir stood like a wall looking this side of Arzoo. Alvira with her palm against her mouth...nausheeen hands covering her cheeks with eyes open in shock.. Zara Myra shivering looking at their appis Sakti...

Arzoo: Khabardaaar dare you not utter an another word Farah!!! A straight blow of warning to you and yes where is your shameless characterless husband who knows to throw his genes to a woman for bearing his offspring's but doesn't even care to look at them...a pest... Where the hell is he... Call him right now ..catching the sides of Farah's hand shaking asks her to call...she takes the phone calls sarfraz asking him to come to NH he immediately jumps in ...
Arzoo continues... "Oh so the shameless stud is waiting outside for his second sack to collect money and throw at him... I think this lady might have put a condition to share moments with him to night... Isn't it??

Sarfraz: Arzooo control your tongue...

Arzoo: Stay away Mr Sarfraaz. Stay right there and dare you not open your filthy mouth. So you've helped my ammi money for myras education and your so called wife is here shouting at this time at some one else's house. Ideally legally you should be soliciting the welfare of your daughter though you left the lady who entered your hopeless life and bought us to this earth. You know what during my childhood when I needed my moth the most she was busy earning struggling to make the ends meet for our livelihood...so inspite of having mother I am an orphan... I looked at dadi she was busy helping mom... Looked at my sisters...who were crying desperately for attention... I was forced to tend to them as I didn't want them to be like me. O gave up my childhood for my sisters for the injustice you have done to us. When mom and dadi use to be at factory slogging night shifts it use to be me who took care of my sisters... Nights raining lightening... Thunderstorms everything though I am shot scared I had to hide my fears and had to stand boldly for my little sisters only to make sure that they don't see the wild face of mother nature...( sahir almost in tears with his blood boiling to strangle sarfraaz to death for injustice done to arzoo...half of his heart paralysed not knowing how to react what to say to his designbaaz love of life... Thinking what good did he do for her... Crashing her world in the name of love... Hated himself bitterly )

Arzoo continued:: "To remind you, I believe you are a son of a right father who is nit a mixed genital product from your mom...- "

sarfraaz: Arzooo ...calling out her name raised his hand...

Arzoo: Though little feared inside...said " Awaaaz neeche Mr. Sarfraaz... You went to the extent of rising your hand on this unfortunate mistake of yours whom you left just coz she is not a boy... Coz she gave you back pointing your mothers conduct... Then what about us what do you expect us to do when you and your second wife keep on torturing us, pinpointing at our mothers conduct ???? Enough is enough ...now you guys are here for money right??

Zara can you give me your savings and gold pls i will give them back from my earnings..i want to make these pests mouth shut for ever???
Sahir looks admiringly at arzoo for her self confidence and the way she comes to the rescue of her mothers respect... Her image in his heart reaches a new level...

Zara hesitantly " am sorry di...aapke zimmedari aapko Mubarak Mein nahi dungi... I mean If I give away everything that I earned then what will I have for my further career and life?? I cant be a sacrificing lamb like you its you who decided to take up responsibilities... We never asked you to be our virtual mom being sister... But we are grateful to Allah that you are our sister and proud of you for giving us much needed attention at time of need. Apart from a heartful thanks and joyful cheer on your happienss and a shoulder for you to support at times of need I cant help you in financial aspects di"

Arzoos world crashed on millions of pieces her confidence her pride got dismantled dug deep in graves where there's is no hope of return. Farah's wicked Victorious smile at her insulting her every word.

Arzoo is determined not to loose infront of Farah... Gathering some remaining strength in her heart without looking anywhere making sure she ignores sahirs look on her which was so concerned... For her... She leaves and gets a bag ...

Opens it ots filled with gold. She throws the bag on her face... Turns to Zara...says " don't you worry Zara..this is gold that's bought for my marriage yours haven't touched which was a silent slap on zaras face infront of all...zara lowered her eyes"

Turns to Farah says " this bag has got two gold chains and some little things of jewellery which might not be upto 5lakhs but for sure they cost 2.0 lakhs. Remaining 3lakhs I will throw on your face with interest. And now I want you to get lost from my sight and to warn you don't you dare to step here..."

Farah: Wah what an anger...and self respect... Wish if your mom too had this... I think both sons of this family fell for you looking at this triumphant behavior. Have you had moments with one or two... By the way you were.. Talking so many things to my husband but tell me why shouldn't I point out at your character?? what right you have to stay here with someone else../?? What are you offering them towards rent?? "

"With the authority of being my future wife she is staying here Farah ji and I think this will make you step out of this house else I have my security turned on to throw you out" says Sahir who couldn't keep quite... Continues "So please and shows his hand to her directing them towards the exit."

Farah: Oh now listen to this announcement so Arzoo nausheen khan will be second wife of Sahur Azim Cahudary woah...

Shut up...and neither arzoo is Farah nor Sahir Azeem Chaudary is characterless Saefraaz hence dare you not raise your tone at Arzoo. She will be my wife in no time and with that authority she will stay here and you all please out of my place enough of the mess created else have to call police for the mess here... Sarfaraaz scared at roaring voice of Sahir and his grounds going weak at sahirs ferocious stare at him he takes farahs hand and leaves.

Zaki completely shocked with the sudden announcement and arzoo follows sahir to his room... fuming at the announcement confronts Sahir right away ...

"Why did you say that. Am least Interested in marrying a man who is a liar. Who is already married. I agree even today I love you but am not ready for this marriage and any relation with you other than professional relation of boss and employee".

Sahirs hand on the knife is not went unnoticed by arzoo... His eyes at the verge of screaming asking her to shut up. She understands that and is about to leave...

Sahir catches her hand pulls her close pins her to his body with his hand supporting her spine looks into her eyes saying I challenge you today ... You will become Arzoo Sahir Azeem Chaudary come what may...

Arzoo lost in his eyes and says that next to impossible as she will not be a second wife.

Sahir: Making her feel him ...asks even if the man in front of her whose wife is nothing ?? Who is not with him for last 7years? Arzoo listen you are not taking or snatching anybodys right or life...

Arzoo: Really...you confessed that you hate me right they why hell bent on marrying me..?

Sahir: Yes I said I hate you..amd that's why I want to marry you..okay...

Arzoo: Oh really... So you hated your first wife too and that's why you married her?
Sahir: Arzoo shut up just stop... For god sake
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Arzoo: True sir... You hated her too and to tale make her mouth shut you be married her... Once you won on her you left her right sir??? Why why such sadistic behavior...sir..m answer me... You owe me an explanation... If I have to marry you..why why there's not even a single pic of hers in this house..are leave the house in your room too why its not there..is she living now or dead? If she is living where is she ...

Sahir clenching his fists closed his eyes...fuming inside saying ARZOOO PLEASE...LETS LEAVE FOR PUNE...stop it...

Arzoo: Her ears couldn't catch his words... Still continuing her questions... I want to see how she looks..what happened exactly..


Sahirs patience saturated... He with a quick reaction grabbed arzoo oh his arms... Arzoos world went blind...nothing is visible...she went numb for sometime...not able to breath... As though she is in a dark tunnel ...her heartbeat picked up rapidly fast ...knees totally weakened...all that she could realize os Sahir's hand supported her head...while other hand sensibly was caressing her neck... With him only him all over her face... His eyes closed... Her lips completely numbed against his...with a little cut she left a little moan... And they broke a side to breath some air... After they broke it she realized how passionately angrily with full right sahir was kissing her and after a minutes protest Arzoo unknowingly acknowledged his initiative gave in and her lips welcomed him... In a state of trans they felt for each other...their hearts bodies senses souls craved to be in each other arms that wanting made them stick to each other for 10minutes in that blissful eternity of pleasure ... She meant world to him but he never accepts... He meant world to him though she accepts she can't move on with him in a marriage till she knows the truth...

Tension brewing...the hot flush on her cheeks... The euphoria of his kiss is making her giddy...he looked at poolside the door side... Said " why the he don't you listen and follow my words...? Why you didn't stop when I asked you to? Is it needed for you to know about her??? Okay fine... She she ...is she is a gold digger...she is a mistake of my life... Whom I thought to be love but turned out to be a deceit. What else you want to know...ha? You want to know how she dumped me? You want to know that every insult I went through for the sake of love?? You want to know how she preferred money over me??? You want to know how she challenged me that I can never become something where the world looks high on me?? Tell me...what you wanna know???

Arzoo horrified at his confessions though not om detailed couldn't dare to ask him to brief them could feel his every pain his ruptured state of mind and heart...went close...with shivering hands...touched his shoulder but he gave a scream...asking her to leave him alone.

But Arzoo was reluctant on not going away or leaving him alone..tries to take situation under control...
Gives him a glass of water...

He throws I will kill u sort of looks...but she doesn't care... With her actions she makes him have some water...she says..

It's time to start for Pune.. I hope you can continue your hissing and screaming business in car too as you will not be the one driving...
"Allah knows sir...hum eh nahi jaante Ki aap itne romanticbaaz hai..." pointing her lips a little curve on her lips shyly with her cheeks turning pink she runs from the room...

Sahir just looks on...repeats..."romanticbaaz..." and smiles...touching his lips...says " allah knows Hume bhi nahi pata tha Ki tum itni dramebaaz Ho...mujhse mera ateet ugalwadi... I hate you bolke ghoom raha tha...aaj mujh se hi ...:-) ...Zidddi... And gets up to leave...

So here ends the update dearies... Yezs their travel to Pune their stay has got lot to do with saazilicious moments... Wanna know?? Stay tuned...

feedback and views welcome pls...

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Please excuse for typos and grammar not proofread... Updated from mobile.. Samajlo yaron...



With love

Shakti
Edited by Romanticfreak - 10 years ago

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