FF- Sirf Tum!!! UPDATED PART 4 - PG-7 - Page 6

Originally posted by: TaanuDeewani

Whoa...what was that...Sahir and Arzoo seem to be bindaas... 😆 ...eagerly waiting for the next update 😉

Originally posted by: Bujee09

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Just caught up with all parts of this story tday😉...good writing ...fab thoughts ...keep going shakti !!👍🏼</font>

Originally posted by: HCDeewani

Shaktiii!!!!

Hai hai, just read the whole thing, and its awesome!

I am absolutely LOVING this strong, free, no nonsense Arzoo. Not taking a 'no' from Sahir. She fought back and she is winning.

I love this Sahir too😉.

Arzoo is very smart, she got all the details out of him. And Sahir bechara didn't even see it coming😆.

Waiting for more Saazilicious moments in Pine. Wonderful concept.

Keep it up!

Love,

Nikki <3

Originally posted by: true2heart

Wow! This is such a fabulous piece of fiction Shakti.😊 I so wish the Cvs had made Arzoo's character the way you have described her. I really like this strong, sensuous and confident Arzoo. Sahir doesn't leave one single mauka of touching or feeling Arzoo, bina shadi kiye yeh haal hai aapke fiction mein to after the nuptials bhagwaan jaane kya hoga😳

<font color="#333333" face="Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif">I love the way you have kept the backdrop to be Saiyara, somehow office romance is always so much more fun to read and watch, N now they are going to Pune ? With Arzoo driving ? So should we expect some romance on the expressway, you know dark tunnels and stuff ...?</font>

<font color="#333333" face="Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif">I am already eagerly waiting to read the part 5 of this fantastic love story that you have brought alive with your writing. My humble request ? don't make us wait too long for it!! You are truly talented and now I have become a pankha of your writing.👍🏼</font>

Lolol Madhu glad you really enjoyed the update... Sayyara somehow I liked the name... And the way the image of sayyara arzoo n Sahir was fixed... I liked it...

And yes I don't want pheeka sukha arzoo yar... I want her with full life standing for her right voicing strict no f thing's r going against her... And Sahir in changing mode...

I planned to write it today itself as we will be starving for SAAZ today till tomorrow... Will do it today itself... A saaziliciois sizzling wala update...

Originally posted by: Suvika.

First... fab news that you have decided to turn this into a FF. Awesome!!

Update... once again very SHAKTI-like... bold..strong and forceful.

No tentativeness from this Arzoo. In fact Sahir is coming across as milder than her. Reminds me of the title "Lady Singham"

And all her provoking finally snapped Sahir... and how!! Now they are off together to Pune too. LOL Looking fwd to that.

Alvira... the greyness came out quite well.

So next chapter Pune trip or nikah or both??