SaAz SS: Selfish and Selfless [Chap 6, Page 30] New! :) - Page 13

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

Thank u for a fun read. This was a long update that I thoroughly enjoyed.

"Yes it'll only take what... A century or two of practice? No problem. I can wait that long." He completed her sentence nodding solemnly.
"Of course you will. You'll have to." She told him .

I found the above lines being very powerful.. It seems they were more than a sentence or two..

"You'll kill me? How? By falling on top of me?" He chortled and Arzoo felt her face going red slightly as she imagined herself lying on top of him.
Wow at 16 Arzoo is quite the imaginative one

Sahir calls her zoo. I have seen people calling Arzoo by the nick name "aarz" n it kinda looks very cute.
So instead of using the later half they use the first half.

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Salaam Fari... 😃
Well as you have posted this 2'o clock in the morning and i read this around 4'o clock in the morning... 😆
So Sahir's hates when somebody calls him SELFISH...so this is interesting...but you know it was like a revelation update for me...that i thought Sahir to be a little selfish here...but as i also said i have to know him better before finally concluding it...and this update has given us a chance at that...insight into Sahir's personality...he is a little complexed here...like a slightly boyish making fun about Aarzoo's weight , then a mature boy who easily read Aarzoo's train of thoughts and bang on...true to her words...he was right...then a cold and harsh boy also who was angry being called as SELFISH...so many things...it must be a treat as a writer when you get to write about a character with so many facades...
Aarzoo's pain and hurt is clearly visible to us but she is also a sensible girl...and i really appreciate the fact when she said if its not on her integrity or major thing...she would always initiate the first move to solve the problem btw her and Sahir...
I really admire your writng skills and now it is increasing update by update...
This update was flawless...and brilliant ...
Continue soon...

Originally posted by: AnjumP

A great update! Their friendship is so sweet :) but you made a typo! you put "Zoya" instead of Arzoo! But that is a tiny tiny slip-up. Otherwise the update was wonderful!!

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Fari!!!

Hey love! How're you? It's so great to read something new from you! Imagine stumbling upon this on a quiet Tuesday evening! Fantastic read this has been!

Love the title! And it's juxtaposition in the story. They both play a great part, selflessness and selfishness. Yet, what we see isn't always what is, is it? For I from my plain reading would say Arzoo is the selfless one and Sahir the selfish.

But I know better than to think just that. The cornetto incident. She had cold right. And he was shown to be the one to eat it. The weather was cold too.

Just saying.

Absolutely love what I've read. And I wasn't surprise that I would. You're excellent, I already know this.

Looking forward to more!

Mwahh.

Originally posted by: -Fedex-

really nice update! please study missy! exams are important but I guess when we had exams in college, we used to sit around in the caf and eat pizza lol..

Originally posted by: sweety003

Hola fari😉

I was like this 😃 😃 😃 looking at your name in my inbox

I don't know anything about this characters Arzoo and Sahir fari ...but still I would read because you wrote this

I really really miss DI 😒

Waiting fah epilogue

You're an awesome writer fari...keep it up👍🏼

Originally posted by: lovesick23

Compliments coming from such an amazing writer! Ok I am blushing now 😳

And 2nd chapter is even better specially how sahir's behaviour from earlier was justified. I get sahir is quite mature always behaving like a grown up so maybe you wont understand the reason for his actions but there always is one while arzoo is quite a kid so she understands the things the way they are never looking for a deeper meaning or reason!

Just like in the serial I must say specially sahir😊

Awesome pls continue 👏

Originally posted by: -Keerthi-

i love it.. i m quiet busy right now but when i saw pm is from u i couldn't help myself.. nd i m glad i read it..

it was awesome..

looking forward to more updates.. do pm me..

Originally posted by: swapno

The best thing is YOU are with a new ss wow Fari!!!

Welcome!!

Arzoo love her!! that she does not bring ego in friendship so selfless!!

And Sahir!! well he is a mysterious man!!
Ahhaaan enjoying!!

Originally posted by: HCDeewani

Your story is an absolute treat! Loved the update.

you've developed Arzoo and Sahir's characters so beautifully! desperately waiting for the next update.

Thank you for the PM as well :)

tc

Nikki