SaAz SS: Selfish and Selfless [Chap 6, Page 30] New! :) - Page 11

Your story is an absolute treat! Loved the update.

So sorry for the late appreciation, thank goodness it's Friday! Thanks for the pm.
Ah procrastination...anything to avoid studying lol but what a wonderful chapter to have come out from it..
You're right Sahir is an old man in a young guy's body...but there's a reason for that...he seems as though all the fun has seeped out of him due to his life and being called selfish and the look he gives, it makes you wonder what other connotations that brings up in his mind...
and Arzoo...was she being selfish in trying to do something risky er no not in my mind, risks are part of life...but was she selfish of not thinking of the consequences then yes...she gets upset that she can't bear not to talk to Sahir but doesn't seem to want to delve deeper into the reasons of why Sahir was upset and angry...hopefully it was the immaturity speaking...I'm glad you've shown that she puts her ego aside for Sahir...and the developing feelings interesting indeed...just wish we could hear from Sahir's pov...
Hope we won't be waiting long for the next update...

lovely update!!
i like how the story is progressing...very insightful for both characters!

Hey!!! 🤗
I'm soo so sorry!!!😳
School got me so busy!!😭
Chapter One:
Was fab!!!❤️ Enjoyable to read!!😃
😆Sahir is just too cuteee!!!!❤️ "zoo!"🤣
what a nickname for Arzoo😉
Awww how Sahir compromises
for the work than Arzoo did aswell aww Soo cutee!!❤️
How sweet!xx I love the two already in the storyy!!! They are so adorable!
Chapter Two:
Loved this updated!!!❤️ ⭐️ I love how the story is progressing!😉
I want to read moree
Sahir n him changing his emotions at times😆
To the mocking Sahir to the caring n serious Sahir. Aw!xx❤️
Can't wait to read moree!!! Please Do Update Soon!xx

Loved it...Arzoo..is not understanding Sahir...and for sahir Arzoo is his world and therefore he us always stern with her as far as her safety goes ...

And fari just loving yoyr story you write very well

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

I'm so sorry for disappearing off like that people but my exams started and my prep was a little worse than bad so yeah I had to study

And the worst part is that they aren't over yet 😭 My last exam will be on next Friday and I'll be back to writing from then Insha'Allah! Meanwhile you all sit and pray that my exams go well 😆

Love you all and sorry for not replying to your comments yet 😳

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All the very best Fari... 😃
Do prepare well... 😃 ⭐️

Hi, I've just caught up with all the updates!! You're Aweesome!! Do update soon! And I must say, the last chapter was quite an emotional one and you have amazing writing skills! :)

Hi Farri!

I just read all the chapters of your story and it's certainly endearing to read possible childhood adventures of our aarzoo madam and sahir miyaa! 😃 I'm sure people from this forum must be showering you with love coz your writing is marvellous! Hoping to catch your next update soon and please do include me in your pm list thanks 😳

- sanaya