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Originally posted by: Live-life
First of all Thanks for the PM you sent me, And really sorry I didn't comment on the first chapter. Been tight on time lately as school has started.
But nonetheless I am here! phew!😆You have a really unique and joyful writing style. I mean each one of your chapters was just captivating to a very extreme extent. Both the Arzoo's and Sahir's characters, you portray explicitly it makes me feel like I am reading an actual novel. Their friendship, their nom jhoks and especially Sahir's walking out on everything😛 and Arzoo's love for him...amazes me. I mean they have a very very strong bond considering they both have seen a lot together, some good and some bad moments. But when they are together everything seems so easy...know what I mean...I mean not to mention they always end up teasing each other and then being sarcastic and you know the usual way we are with our really close friends. plus the fact that they are teenagers in this one is why I connect to both of them so much...Cause I am one too So...it seems like I reading how i am myself when I am around my friends haha😆😆 I mean the amount of time me and my friends have verbally teased each other...is about...infinity...yeah that's about right 😉 But then it comes naturally!But I appreciate Sahir's quality of knowing when something is going to turn our wrong..like it did with the tree thing. But of course Arzooo just had to do it because when you are a teenager you want to try new things...no matter that it may lead to you hurting yourself...I say this because I am guilty as charged hehe *laughs nervously* 😛. And I have done these kids of things as well...whre..the outcome was not at all "fun" but you can't help it YOLO... haha. {I am such a teenager} 😆.And THEN sAHIR is there for her...saving her... guiding her...protecting her...and then...he walks away. Just like that but then I realize after a while that he did the right thing in a way. Gave Arzoo the time to thin over what she did and how to apologize to Sahir. And the lake scene was an important one as well. Sahir goes all hay wire on Arzoo and then she initially bursts into tears and then Sahir melts and then the skipping stones...and then little intimate scene between them...it was all too cute..and then of course they are badk to their usual sarcastic verbal war. 😆 Gawd! I love their talks!And the Dhaba scene was awesome too. Like Sahir i am a foodie as well. Hehe. :PHmmm...I wonder why he got all serious on the fact that Arzoo called him selfish..though se didn't really mean it...ooo! mysterryyy! I am loving ittt!This is an awesomeee story! And the fact that it's dart from their teenage age. just makes it all the more easy for me to relate to it..Hayeee! I love being a teenager and reading aboue my fellow peers! 😆Continue soon!This is a golden piece of writing!And Thanks for the PM!Love Nabi!❤️
Hello Nabi 😃
School can be hectic. Its okay I understand 😃 Plus this huge comment more than made up for it 😳
And OMG did I love your comment or what! And this they both have seen a lot together, some good and some bad moments. But when they are together everything seems so easy...know what I mean... this couldn't have been put more aptly 👍🏼
Oh yes! Definitely. When you're teenagers and best friends at that, your conversation is like a sarcastic fight 😆 The one who teases the other more and comes up with better insulting retorts wins 🤣 Plus when you're friends with a boy, sentimental stuff rarely happens. Most boys end up making fun of the most serious of situations. And yahan tou Sahir hai 😆 He'll quietly bottle everything inside him and then explode on some small thing 😆
Awwwieee you really are a teenager then aren't you? CUTEEE 😳 Well I'm practically a bhuddi now so I'm more like Sahir. Not that I won't want to scale a tree... I'll just be careful about it. Like asking my friend to try it first and if its safe then I follow 🤣
I'm glad you love their verbal fights. I love writing them! They're so meaningless and fun!! 😆 And yes there's a reason why Sahir is touchy about being called Selfish and it will unravel soon 😃
Thank you for loving the story so far and giving such an awesome comment that made me smile like a goofball 😃
I feel like I know so much already with just one comment 😆
Stay blessed!
