SaAz OS : Of the Moons and The Woods 13/11 (Index on pg12) - Page 7

Originally posted by: gowtu

haha yes I gt it ;-)
Waise r u going to write more on them !?

Originally posted by: sona_naksh

hello baby 🤗

u know i dont follow humsafars or any show at this time for the reason known to u ..but i m happy dat u wrote sth and i absolutely loved it ❤️

keep writing and pming me 😊 🤗

Originally posted by: AmbroseFever

Mine! 😊

Unres.

It has been so long since I read some of your works and Allah knows why I am so damn in love with them. Absolute perfection Ankie! Loved it to the core. The fact that the dialogues were minimal was fab. That just added to the beauty of the couple itself. I loved how it was from Sahir's POV and how he reflects on the life he had until she came into his life. The worsd exchanged at the end were simply amazing and then yes, the "passion overboard" had me going gaga. Lol.

The moment I started reading I couldn't stop. My eyes were glued to the screen, simply soaking up every single word, period, comma, exclamation that you wrote. Naturally, when it ended I was on the verge of crying because I wanted to read more and more. Girl, I missed your writing. If time had been lenient on me I would've continued reading all your works but it didn't. I'm so glad I took some time off to read this. Reminded me what I have been missing out on and specially what a fool I am.

Awestruck, amazed, and SaAzified. Thanks so much and please write more on SaAz. Dying to read more of your works. Drats, it's time I hunt down your index again. I remember those AsYa works and gosh they are calling out to me😃.

Love ya!

❤️

Akira (or better known by my middle name: Raz)

i ll try baby but abhi to i dont have time ...jab hoga to i ll surely watch

Hey 😊

Loved the start..was poetic...and then the entire is was mesmerizing ...
Allah knows hum abi bhi aapae kafa hai..cute it was
And the end was awesome 😉

Lovely os...thanks for the pm...loved it

Love
Sara

very beautifully written ...love it...😃 keep writing😳

Awww...Ankie jani🤗...finally I read it 😃

Originally posted by: smj7

firstly sorry for unressing so dam late ..

it was a fab ,cutie shutie os❤️👏

you described his routine so well..an her innocent antics

i loved nick names gabbar chaudharyan and design baaz

he confessed his love for her and in a wink of an eye they had exchanged their wows

past memories were described flawlessly

ankie i loved your passion overboard😳 and the tittle too🤗

p.s though i'm late i'm still at first place

Originally posted by: swapno

Awww...Ankie jani🤗...finally I read it 😃

Amazing as always!!👏

Simplicity is the specialty here ...their moves their synchronization reminds me some others ( I am not comparing but really how it would also suit with them)

Well the "Baaz queen met the gabbar chowdhury!!

Honestly after Zeenzt revelation I am now more interested how will be they ended up with each other!!

I wish cv's too will show this type of simple yet enchanting scenes!!

Love ya ❤️

Swapno