What exactly is going wrong with Humsafars? - Page 4

Originally posted by: prettypri

Yes...you are right...cut all the side characters and espeialy totally eliminate KA...then you will have more of HC!

Unless they all come free😆

Actually seeing the SBB..SBS etc he seems to be shooting alright...are they deliberately showing less of him then😕

Originally posted by: prettypri

I agree completely Vandy on the brand being important.. Especially for things like designer clothes.. You can't sell them for peanuts and if they are expensive they need a brand name!

Doesn't make any sense whatsoever..

And the challenge is totally against whatever we have seen of Sahir so far... He didn't do anything even when she hit him.. Why would he bother about her words now... No justification for why he would mind her words now.. Are they trying to say her opinion matters so he is reacting?

Why?

Originally posted by: Lily30

Lovely posts 👏

Well at least they are spoiling it from the beginning 🤣 instead of creating magic then trying to remain consistent with the created magic and instead spoling it 😆

Yes..I saw SBS..

Agar inn ko ideas nahi mil rahey tou hum se ley lien rofl

I think most of the pts have been raised butjust reiterating a few bits ...

1)Editing - Can we pls have the flow and continuity in Saaz scenes please ,I mean they are yr leads and not Anam ,KA etc

2)Less Focus on the leads :Humsafars are essentially Arzoo and Saahir and not the extra baggage baraat of villians.

3)Less Focus on Saahir - he is the deal clincher for them and they dont seem to realise whats the pt of promoting him on fb etc when u dont want to show him where it matters.

4) The lack of chemistry which is a hall mark of 4L and the chars here have that potential which is going waste.

5)..whats the aim and pt really of this show ..its all very vague at the moment ...whats the usp ? I dont know ,do they makers know ?


Two strong confused leads someone ask CV's to watch Zindagi gulzar hai and lift of some ideas please ...bec they r making a hotch potch here & give these two leads and this show to SP and they will show you how to make a brand out of them and make them a hit 😆😆

Being an ardent HCian, I am unable to give up on watching this show but believe me it has been a nightmare... I had a lot of expectations from this show and none seems to be fulfilled. To me the following should be fixed - story & screenplay:

Originally posted by: -RD-

I think most of the pts have been raised butjust reiterating a few bits ...

1)Editing - Can we pls have the flow and continuity in Saaz scenes please ,I mean they are yr leads and not Anam ,KA etc

2)Less Focus on the leads :Humsafars are essentially Arzoo and Saahir and not the extra baggage baraat of villians.

3)Less Focus on Saahir - he is the deal clincher for them and they dont seem to realise whats the pt of promoting him on fb etc when u dont want to show him where it matters.

4) The lack of chemistry which is a hall mark of 4L and the chars here have that potential which is going waste.

5)..whats the aim and pt really of this show ..its all very vague at the moment ...whats the usp ? I dont know ,do they makers know ?


Two strong confused leads someone ask CV's to watch Zindagi gulzar hai and lift of some ideas please ...bec they r making a hotch potch here & give these two leads and this show to SP and they will show you how to make a brand out of them and make them a hit 😆😆

too much focus on bugs bunny witch and anam...negative issues
less scenes of sahir...he seems like a guest...a veteran actor like harshad doesn't deserve such treatment
chemistry is not propery develop b/w Saaz as they have less scenes together
the focus is on each and every people in the show except for the main leads Saaz...especially Sahir...the show title is Humsafars...the show and title have no link with each other

Originally posted by: prettypri

You covered all the issues pretty well!

I think the main issue is lack of screen space for Sahir...and little interaction between Sahir and Arzoo...that's the death knell for a show promoted as a love story! And in this scenario airing promos where Sahir suddenly questions his feelings and even better...suddenly asks himself if he is in love...just don't cut it..they just confuse the viewers more!

Monday episodes need to be more like what we had last week...atleast the leads were seen...the editing was better...yesterday's episode would likely put off people from watching the show...!

Too too many side characters...side according to the definition of the show,...but they are taking up most of the episode time! And none of them make any sense...

Anam...she hates Arzoo and wants her out as Alvira brought her...but the credit she gives herself is too much...and the acting is bad! However she probably is the only villain I understand as a villain for now... besides Alvira who may or may not be totally bad!

Besides these I don't see why there are so many characters..

Kurti is the worst... bad acting.. Doesn't make sense.. Repetitive... All negative.. Unnecessary melodrama! They haven't established why alvira tolerates her so it's really difficult to watch her!

Zara... why bring in her angle so soon... If at all then it should have been wrt zaki... not an am...too much time wasted!

I don't like Nausheen... especially as she is also repetitive.. Character not explained... Why is she this way.. Why lie about the rent... Why meet sarfaraz... why why

Sarfaraz and his wife... Looks like they will also get more screen time and that's not something to look forward to!

Over all Arzoos character falls flat for me... I don't feel any sympathy or empathy for her.. Because her actions are contrary to her great claims! If there is an attempt to make her look good by butchering sahir there will be even less empathy!

Mainly they need to start focusing on the leads! Get a start to the story... Decide if you are going to show love... Work towards it...

This is really choppy right now!