Originally posted by: prettypri
You covered all the issues pretty well!
I think the main issue is lack of screen space for Sahir...and little interaction between Sahir and Arzoo...that's the death knell for a show promoted as a love story! And in this scenario airing promos where Sahir suddenly questions his feelings and even better...suddenly asks himself if he is in love...just don't cut it..they just confuse the viewers more!
Monday episodes need to be more like what we had last week...atleast the leads were seen...the editing was better...yesterday's episode would likely put off people from watching the show...!
Too too many side characters...side according to the definition of the show,...but they are taking up most of the episode time! And none of them make any sense...
Anam...she hates Arzoo and wants her out as Alvira brought her...but the credit she gives herself is too much...and the acting is bad! However she probably is the only villain I understand as a villain for now... besides Alvira who may or may not be totally bad!
Besides these I don't see why there are so many characters..
Kurti is the worst... bad acting.. Doesn't make sense.. Repetitive... All negative.. Unnecessary melodrama! They haven't established why alvira tolerates her so it's really difficult to watch her!
Zara... why bring in her angle so soon... If at all then it should have been wrt zaki... not an am...too much time wasted!
I don't like Nausheen... especially as she is also repetitive.. Character not explained... Why is she this way.. Why lie about the rent... Why meet sarfaraz... why why
Sarfaraz and his wife... Looks like they will also get more screen time and that's not something to look forward to!
Over all Arzoos character falls flat for me... I don't feel any sympathy or empathy for her.. Because her actions are contrary to her great claims! If there is an attempt to make her look good by butchering sahir there will be even less empathy!
Mainly they need to start focusing on the leads! Get a start to the story... Decide if you are going to show love... Work towards it...
This is really choppy right now!
kurti should be kicked out of the show with immediate effect😳
we just need one villain in the show...let anam be there...BUT...a villain does not need so much screen presence...anam seems to be plotting day n night!
show her as a professional villain...who just has vice against aarzoo...only in office...coz sahir needs to be be there to protect aarzoo...esp now wen he'll know that anam can stoop to the lowest degree against aarzoo...
sahir is a designer...show saaz together where both work together professionally...
he can't give crappy challenges to aarzoo..its just wasting screen time...
if sahir wants to punish aarzoo for creating a ruckus abt the stolen designs...he should give her a night's dealine to finish the jannat collection's designs...that'll be more logical!
keep aarzoo's family out of her professional life...i seriously can't tolerate her family's melodrama every single day!...they should be shown only if they have a contribution to a saaz scene...otherwise we do not need them on screen
aarzoo's character😳
its like u know...modern jhansi ki rani-cum kiran bedi- cum sonia gandhi- cum mamta banerjee- cum-every other female nautanki baaz we have in india right now!
too much screen time is being wasted on making her jack of all trades!
yesterday they wasted time on showing her searching for the dupatta again...wen that scene could've been cut short with zara immediately saying she sold the dupatta and then aarzoo telling her point to her family!
these team huddle's are becoming a pain in the neck!
every action in this show is reptative...be it aarzoo's family, aapa , alvira, nausheen or anybody else
the makers did a huge mistake ...they should've never shown aarzoo as a strong character if they wanted to show this nonsense...the low trps point towards thccepted well with the audience coz the first promos kept on shouting "nayi soch..nayi ummeed ke saath aa rahi hai aarzoo nausheen khan"
where is the nayi soch?
if she is chasing her dreams...the focus should be on her dreams...and...sahir being the catalyst of her dreams...its sahir who is going to identify the designer in her...groom her...
but sadly aarzoo is lost in the knots of her dupatta!
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