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seriously...we need to just sum up everything that has gone wrong with this show!
this is my first 4 lions show and i had a lot of expectations from it...but i am seriously disappointed!
first things first...gul khan not being a part of this show is definitely not working in favour of this show! She has to be at the helm of humsafars
her absence is stamped on each scene...each shot...each track... i had to watch her earlier shows on yt...and could make out the differences. why is gul not working on this show? is it that she's simply not interested? if yes...then y create a show for god's sake!
the editing team! it needs to be changed! period!
the editing team sucks...there is not smooth flow of scenes...and as ppl r pointing out...the shots seems to abrupt badly wen leads feature...and then...wherever there is kitchen politics...it just goes on and on!
u need to priortise
sahir...his absence...no establishing of his character...
seeing the epis...it just seems that scenes are not even being written for him...his presence is a mere eye candy kind of thing for the show...the basic idea being...keep showing a glimpse of him here n there...and ppl will watch it!
no...ppl r giving up on it
i have no idea why the cvs r doing this...they need to write out proper scenes where they establish his character...scenes where u throw an insight into him...he's the HERO of your show damnit! respect that atleast!
SaAz...No scenes between them
there has been zero effort on the part of creatives to establish SaAz as a couple...to develop their romantic chemistry
wen was the last time we saw a shot where um? dargah shot? and before that that chand scene...
u got to be kidding...esp wen u show is called "humsafars" and what is show is totally opposite of it...there is a dearth of scenes between the lead pair...
OTT melodrama
aarzoo's family is just😳
they keep repeating the same dialogues...frankly nobody is interested in the seekh's which dadi and nausheen give!
first they were shifted to mumbai too soon in the show...and if u guys r planning to make them permanent part of mumbai...cut down their scenes...one scene a week..is enough..esp wen none of them r part of the actual storyline of the show"a story of 2 imperfect ppl..coming together"
melodrama simply has no place in this storyline!
KUrti-Anam-Nausheen-Alvira-Zara
do u even realise how much nonsense u have in this show?
ek story toh properly dikha nahi sakte...u added zara proving herself to anam in this circus?😳
like really?
who exactly is writing the story? does the person even know what the actual planned storyline of this show ws? the show was marketted as "a passionate romantic saga" and all we get is "pessimist aapa with rondu nausheen and anam's nonsensical saga"
and...mellow down ur OTT villains...
the female playing anam can't act ...please don't kill ur screen time with her😳
priorities r things which are missing here!
a love triangle will not work..nor appeal the audience...ifatall the makers r aiming towards it...u first need to focus on the actual leads first...the triangle comes in later!
this is what i felt...incase u guys have anything more to add...plzzz comment! coz i'm sure each one of us has lots to add!
Arjun
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