Humsafars! FF part 9 updated pg 31 7 feb 2015

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ArmaanShilpaFan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#141

I read your FF.
It is just awesome.
Do update soon.
Do PM me.

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Sagi97

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Posted: 10 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: -zainab
Wow ! Awessome update !
Would really luv to c this leaning scene in the show !!
Great work sagi.
Thnks for pming me ! 😆

Thanks Di. You liked it? First time I am writing (or attempting to) erotica. I don't know how good or bad it has come out.

Sagi

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nagma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#143

read all parts in one go... loved it!!!!
do continue soon. 👏

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Sagi97

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Posted: 10 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: Jyo_Veebafan
Well it was one lovely update. Seems your SaAz have started going wild all over the places 😆
I really like your narration, it's so neat and well detailed. So happy that your Sahir is a bachelor 😳 Loved the last part, the very thoughts about him is erotic 😉 good going, Sagi! Continue sooner 😊

Yes Di, the Sahir of this FF is without the bitter baggage of the past.
This FF is going to continue post their marriage. Maybe the chapter 7-8 will be their marriage.
Now that's a spoiler.

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Sagi97

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Posted: 10 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
awesome update
the cockroach scene was hilarious

Thanks Di...you liked it?

Actually I wanted to write a scene wherein Aarzoo thrashed Sahir with a broom (with the sole intention of getting the cockroach) and Sahir is totally unaware of the cockroach, and the surprised look he can give "Ab maine aisa kya kiya jo jhadu se maar rahi ho?" But it didn't come out well. So trimmed it.

But glad you liked the trimmed version.
Sagi