Humsafars! FF part 9 updated pg 31 7 feb 2015 - Page 17

Originally posted by: lourel24

Nice update

Thank You. But a little more needed. Itni words ki kanjoosi achhi nahi.

Originally posted by: Sagi.

Ok Di.
Do you want me to pm you the next time I post?

Helloji
superb update Allah knows u r one of the best writer's I have read stories of and Allah also knows aap awwal darje ke writerbaaz hai keep writing dearji 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Sagi.

Thank you. May I know your name?

One small explanation. When Sarfaraz put that treacherous proposal to her, she was not an employee at Saiyyara. Infact, Sahir walked in later and urged her to complete her internship.

And that too only for 3 months. Aarzoo (of this FF) is well aware that her internship stipend cannot help her Ammi much. But that is the only option available right now.

Shame on me if you had this doubt (so much for my writing skills?)
Sagi.

My name is Sabia Khan.

And, hey, when you said 'shame on me'. Then I really felt like I seriously offended you. But believe me, I never had such intentions.

And, I do know the fact that when Arzoo agreed to the proposal of Sarfraz, she wasn't an employee of Saiyaara. But, after that, she rejoined, so she could have rejected Sarfraz later after she rejoined. It was not like that she signed any paper with Sarfraz in the waiting room.


As far as internship and earning concern, their life did go on while she wasn't even employed totally. Her mother did run the family without a single help from Sarfraz, didn't she?

So, now, at least Arzoo is working...that also in Saiyaara. So, why this Arzoo is so less confident???

Why so less believe in herself which compels her to take money from Sarfraz by being a traitor to that company which itself is the big career opportunity for her?


Anyways dear, I really don't mean to offend you. I liked your FF really, that's why I expressed my views. Otherwise, I don't even write dear...

Allah knows, what are you thinking!

But, do continue soon dear!!

Originally posted by: -Amri-

Thanks yaar, that'd be delightful. But I don't want to add to your burden. I will be stalking your post every once in a while, so expect me to swoop in right after you update😉

As for Ch 6, another good piece of writing from you. Poor Sahir is building castles in the air while Aarzoo is forced to further Sarfaraz's agenda. Wonder who the spy is😕Loving the suspence😃

So nice of you Di.

If the last chapter was romance, this chapter is suspense. And the next chapter will be the peak and end of the suspense.

You can guess who the spy is: but I am glad that Aarzoo is in clear.

Just wait and watch for the next one.
Sagi

Originally posted by: humsafars_ky2

Helloji
superb update Allah knows u r one of the best writer's I have read stories of and Allah also knows aap awwal darje ke writerbaaz hai keep writing dearji 👍🏼

Hello Ji

Kya hum aapka naam jaan sakte hain ji?

Thank You Ji hume writerbaaz banane keliye.
Sagi.

story sure is interesting Sagi. read all the updates in one shot. gripping.

Originally posted by: BDCTG

My name is Sabia Khan.

And, hey, when you said 'shame on me'. Then I really felt like I seriously offended you. But believe me, I never had such intentions.

And, I do know the fact that when Arzoo agreed to the proposal of Sarfraz, she wasn't an employee of Saiyaara. But, after that, she rejoined, so she could have rejected Sarfraz later after she rejoined. It was not like that she signed any paper with Sarfraz in the waiting room.


As far as internship and earning concern, their life did go on while she wasn't even employed totally. Her mother did run the family without a single help from Sarfraz, didn't she?

So, now, at least Arzoo is working...that also in Saiyaara. So, why this Arzoo is so less confident???

Why so less believe in herself which compels her to take money from Sarfraz by being a traitor to that company which itself is the big career opportunity for her?


Anyways dear, I really don't mean to offend you. I liked your FF really, that's why I expressed my views. Otherwise, I don't even write dear...

Allah knows, what are you thinking!

But, do continue soon dear!!

Hi Sabia,

No your post didn't offend me at all. On the other hand, such views are welcome. Let me clarify further.

Nausheen and her family are not in their own house now (thrown out on the streets, this has been shown in the past episodes) Nausheen is quite sick and cant work anymore. Again not specified explicitly, their financial condition is pretty kharab. When Aarzoo resigned in a huff, she had no idea of all this (her mother's condition she knew, but as long as they had their house, it was fine with her) Hence the financial deal. Someoen like Sarfaraz is offereing to take care of the needs then she is going to take it. Also remember that her job at Saiyyara is only for 3months.

Aarzoo is working towards an uncertain future...she doesn't know whats going to be the scene after these 3 months. Will Sarfaraz continue to give financial help? her Job at Saiyyara being over means she cant help him anymore.

Hope this helps. Your views are more than welcome.
Sagi.

Nice update.

Originally posted by: Sagi.

My name is Sabia Khan.

And, hey, when you said 'shame on me'. Then I really felt like I seriously offended you. But believe me, I never had such intentions.

And, I do know the fact that when Arzoo agreed to the proposal of Sarfraz, she wasn't an employee of Saiyaara. But, after that, she rejoined, so she could have rejected Sarfraz later after she rejoined. It was not like that she signed any paper with Sarfraz in the waiting room.


As far as internship and earning concern, their life did go on while she wasn't even employed totally. Her mother did run the family without a single help from Sarfraz, didn't she?

So, now, at least Arzoo is working...that also in Saiyaara. So, why this Arzoo is so less confident???

Why so less believe in herself which compels her to take money from Sarfraz by being a traitor to that company which itself is the big career opportunity for her?


Anyways dear, I really don't mean to offend you. I liked your FF really, that's why I expressed my views. Otherwise, I don't even write dear...

Allah knows, what are you thinking!

But, do continue soon dear!!

Hi Sabia,

No your post didn't offend me at all. On the other hand, such views are welcome. Let me clarify further.

Nausheen and her family are not in their own house now (thrown out on the streets, this has been shown in the past episodes) Nausheen is quite sick and cant work anymore. Again not specified explicitly, their financial condition is pretty kharab. When Aarzoo resigned in a huff, she had no idea of all this (her mother's condition she knew, but as long as they had their house, it was fine with her) Hence the financial deal. Someoen like Sarfaraz is offereing to take care of the needs then she is going to take it. Also remember that her job at Saiyyara is only for 3months.

Aarzoo is working towards an uncertain future...she doesn't know whats going to be the scene after these 3 months. Will Sarfaraz continue to give financial help? her Job at Saiyyara being over means she cant help him anymore.

Hope this helps. Your views are more than welcome.
Sagi.

Hey appii...that does clarify certain things... Hmm... Arzoo is actually in the middle of nothing...
She can't be confident about what will happen after 3 months...

Hm...that clarifies things nicely...

But, it actually doesn't suit Arzoo to be a traitor...while she accepted such good bringing up lessons from her mother Naushin...

*fingers crossed* Hope Sahir will understand her helplessness...


Anyways, Thank you appi!

Continue sooon!!