The Diary of a loner ; Sahir Azim Chaudhary ; updated check page:7 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's really good...especially loved the description of the feelings when he sees her crying and relates it to himself and wants to protect her..👏.
Also the jail part was told very nicely😊..

Lovely shayari Komal😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Lubz.TaAnu

Beautifully written Chutki.

Love the fact that he feels her pain & the sympathy

& kudos to Komal for the shayari! ;) <3

thank you didu 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: prettypri

It's really good...especially loved the description of the feelings when he sees her crying and relates it to himself and wants to protect her..👏.

Also the jail part was told very nicely😊..

Lovely shayari Komal😳

aapne padha 😲😲😲😲 thank you Embarrassed
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: minaz296

Awesome..loved it 😊

thanku minu di 😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: silky_harshad

aapne padha 😲 thank you 😳


Haan kyun??😲
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Posted: 10 years ago
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ainvayi 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Silky...that's lovely!!😳
The way you put his each emotion...just awesome👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Komal ki shayari...kya baat kya baat kya baat😃🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: .HarshRutu.

Silky...that's lovely!!😳

The way you put his each emotion...just awesome👏

thanks kiddo Embarrassed
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
silky!!!!
u put it soo beautifully
simply loved sahir's thought process during the jail scene...

and the way u made sahir relate to aarzoo's pain

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