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Posted: 13 years ago
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As today is Valentines Day,am posting this self composed poem of mine about my feelings for him...😳. This poem is just just just for him.Tell me if u like it😛😃😃


(Suggest me a title too😆)


filmon ke hero ab lubhate nahi hai;
sapnon ke rajkumar ji behlate nahi hai,
jab se dil mein mere tera khayal hai aaya;
tere siva kuch aur khayal mujhe aate nahi hai.


time pass ke zariye ab ubau ho gaye;
aisa laga bekhayali ke bhi paon ho gaye,
dost kehne lage ki tum ab humari sunti nahi;
aur hame laga ki dost hamare pakau ho gaye.


computer to jaise apna dharma ho gaya hai;
tere post padna jaise niyam ho gaya hai,
tere lafzon ne is kadar baandh diya mujhko;
apne man ki sunna bhi ab kam ho gaya hai.


tujhe dekhne ki hasrat mein yeh nain jagte hai;
teri taraf hi mere man ke teer bhagte hai,
jab meri baton ka nahi milta koi jawab;
to har pal baichani se bas screen taakte hai.


jane anjaane tu ek taakat, ek hasin ehsaas hai;
mere dil ki baichani ka kya tumhe andaaz hai,
kya tere liye bhi hungi main utni hi zaroori;
meri is zindagi mein tu jitna khas hai.


hai bharosa zaroor milenge, waqt ke kisi galiyare me;
tab tak tera aks khojungi, sundar chand-sitaron me,
tujhe milne ki rahengi hasrat zindagi bhar mere man mein;
aur yahin dua karungi har tuthte tare mein.😍

Thank u😆😛



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Naiina-



filmon ke hero ab lubhate nahi hai;
sapnon ke rajkumar ji behlate nahi hai,
jab se dil mein mere tera khayal hai aaya;

tere siva kuch aur khayal mujhe aate nahi hai.

Dis para is really awww one 😆



time pass ke zariye ab ubau ho gaye;
aisa laga bekhayali ke bhi paon ho gaye,
dost kehne lage ki tum ab humari sunti nahi;

aur hame laga ki dost hamare pakau ho gaye.

paon n pakau🤣 🤣 its hilarious


computer to jaise apna dharma ho gaya hai;😆
tere post padna jaise niyam ho gaya hai,☺️
tere lafzon ne is kadar baandh diya mujhko;☺️

apne man ki sunna bhi ab kam ho gaya hai.

hawww 😲 itni paagal hogayi ho 😆



tujhe dekhne ki hasrat mein yeh nain jagte hai;
teri taraf hi mere man ke teer bhagte hai,
jab meri baton ka nahi milta koi jawab;

to har pal baichani se bas screen taakte hai.

🤣



jane anjaane tu ek taakat, ek hasin ehsaas hai;☺️
mere dil ki baichani ka kya tumhe andaaz hai,☺️
kya tere liye bhi hungi main utni hi zaroori;
meri is zindagi mein tu jitna khas hai.


hai bharosa zaroor milenge, waqt ke kisi galiyare me;
tab tak tera aks khojungi, sundar chand-sitaron me,
tujhe milne ki rahengi hasrat zindagi bhar mere man mein;
aur yahin dua karungi har tuthte tare mein.😍

Thank u😆😛



Thnk u naina for sharin the poem with us if u have an fb account den post it on Hasan's wall na

wait i wil do it

n it seems like u r madlessly n hopelessly in luv wd Gautam 😆

but great job luvd d poem 👏 👏

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww so shweet. Naina you's the best. This is so beautiful and I couldn't agree more with you. I wish I could write so well, but I make up for it by making siggies.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow!! loved it!!

m Soooper happy today...

will share my views tomorrow pakka..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: arsh4life

Thnk u naina for sharin the poem with us if u have an fb account den post it on Hasan's wall na

wait i wil do it

n it seems like u r madlessly n hopelessly in luv wd Gautam 😆

but great job luvd d poem 👏 👏



Thank u Thank u😆
And I think I am in love with Hasan😳 rather than Gautam...and yes hopelessly,bt still😆😆😆
I have written this poem jst thinking about Hasan☺️😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: khota_sikka_sri

Aww so shweet. Naina you's the best. This is so beautiful and I couldn't agree more with you. I wish I could write so well, but I make up for it by making siggies.



Awesome siggy yaar...woww..its so beautiful
And if u can't write,I cant make siggies as well😆
Aur har ek fan jaruri hota hai...so u and me,both are needed😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminedayal

wow!! loved it!!

m Soooper happy today...

will share my views tomorrow pakka..



Thank u😛
Teri raai bahut maayne rakhti hai coz u r a real writer na..
Tujhe pasand aa gayi to achi hi likhi hogi😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey naina

you know hasan has liked d poem i asked my friend to post this link on his wall he posted it

n now when i checked it hasan has liked the link maybe he has read d poem n has liked it😛

You lucky gal 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: -Naiina-



Awesome siggy yaar...woww..its so beautiful
And if u can't write,I cant make siggies as well😆
Aur har ek fan jaruri hota hai...so u and me,both are needed😃

That's true. We both need each other and we're both needed as fans. 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ok...I will paste his reply here -

58 minutes ago

  • naina...naina...naina...!

    ur soo sweet...
    thanks..
    i do sometimes read ur posts...you and sri khota sikka...
    makes me smile...god bless u...

    feel free to share gautam pics on the forum ..
    tc..
    hasan..


Edited by -Naiina- - 13 years ago

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