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Eliza_D

@Eliza_D

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

Based on my friends and me the main cause of people not watching HD is ke show relateable nahi hai.

My beti says us ke problem yeh hai ke PH characters ke motivation "tell, not show" kar rahey hain

kisi ke character growth nahi hai Ek hi jagah atkey hain.

Kidnapping sey pehle, Inshi interest rakh rakha tha. Then Indira ki smile ka issue tha.

Phir najane kyon they decided to quickly make them marry and make Indira smile quickly and then change the hero. Bas tab sey show barbaad ho gaya hai

Mandira ka rape hua. Use pey koi asar nahi. Make Mandira selfish. Have her make Indira's life hell. Per usme koi change to leykar aaoo. She cannot remain flirty, fashionable ladki

Munna aur Sunaina ki bhi story dikhao. Pehley wo dekhatey the. They used to show Munna gettiunbg a job, failing, gettting into trouble for money, Sunaina seeing it, sometimes pareshaan etc. Now they are just cartoon characters caring only about money. Sunaina kam akal hai. But se had some zamir. She rebelled couple of times. took Indira's side. Cared about her son

Now she does not care whether her son is fallinf under spell of Munna's bad habits like gambling...There is no worry about where money is going to come from for her daughter. No fights with Munna

Kutumb was shown getting hurt by Inder before...Per ab na hi use Vidith ka fikr hai, na kisi aur cheez ka. Bas Inder key sath romance kar rahi hai cartoon ke tarah.

Indira bahut damage hua Indira key character ko during the kidnapping track...Koi bhi wife or girfriend ussey relate nahi kar pa rahee the during that track...Most people did not feel sympathy for her becuase of her actions...This broke the critical connection viewers with her. Nafrat se hone lagi the Indira sey.

Phir "show not tell" ki baat thi...Why she does not leave SN? Kya attachment hai...Yeh Cvs ne Indira ke ek chote se dialog se baat katam kar di... that was bad. Unhey yeh dikhana chahiye tha. Jaisey Indira ready to leave with Rishi...Munna ki koi harkat Ishaan aur Seher damage karne wali hai...Indira torn...decides that she has to stay with them for a bit.

Isse track ko ley lo...they could have shown Inder thinking ki usne deal kar le hai...he and Sunaina throw everybody out... Sharmas ko dukh hota hai...Indira aur Rishi key pas jatey hain...aur phir Indira aur Rishi get the house back...

Kuch be ho magar Indira ko age chalna chahiye...kuch akal sey kam lena chahiye...kuch growth honi chahiye...

Rishi pehle wo gum tha...ab wo joker ban gaya hai...kon kerega aisey hero sey pyaar?
Pehley uske life me goal tha...it was to repent and make Indira's life easy...but he did not loose himself...per ab he has become a attachment to Indira...koi wajud nahi...koi self-respect nahi...koi apne issues nahi...jitney der wo apne baap sey baat nahi karta, he will not be complete...phir he has to do something in his life that is not "saving Indira or Sharmas"

Main problem hai that na Indira aur na Rishi mey koi major baat hai jo viewers ko apne taraf kinchey...make them feel for them...feel their struggles, their emotions...aur na hi koi sekhney wali baat hai...that will make people admire them.

Kidnapping track mey Indira could have become a lady to admire...to learn from...kitney himat wali hai...kya baat hai! Magar wo track bilkul opposite tha. Bahut nuksan kiya

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Eliza_D

@Eliza_D

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

First CVs should rid of bogus characters like Sumer Singh, Munaina etc

Second, Indira aur Rishi key characters aisey ho ki viewers relate to their struggles...like Rishi with gaining respect from his father...Indira Sharmas ko apney pairon pey kardha karney ki koshish kartee hai but they fail...wo us key married life mey problems create kartey hain...even jab Indira SN chod kar Rishi key saath apna jivan shuru kar rahee hai...Rishi aur Indira ka pyaar...how it faces tests...struggles...wins...deepens

Indira aur Amma ka rishta...Amma samjhatee hai...usey apne galtiyian dikhatee hai...magar Indira apnee adat sey majhboor hai...Indira key liye badalna kitna difficult hai...just like every human being etc

Kitnee stories ban saktee hai Indira, Rishi aur Sharams ki growth stories mein

Third, make the viewers admire Rishi and Indira...learn lessons from their struggles,...get inspired...bhashan nahi...actions

Yeh thappad, gussa aur meaningless bhashans without actions nahi...t

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mahkutty

@mahkutty

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

I agree with you the last two paragraphs you have written about Rishi and the conclusion...

As you said, Rishi in the past had motivation in life to repent for his sins and be part of Indu's life and save her from her miseries, but now he has so much at stake with his self respect and the reason for not wanting to be a diwan and INdu's justification for tirelessly going about living for sharmas and dedicating her life to them, which needs to be justified better.

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rajh

@rajh

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

at least in india ghar jamai concept not going to work.

so don't make him rishi sharma and don't keep him in SN.

now story should move forward--

at least now its time for indira to change her identity.--now she should become indira rickey diwan.

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p.s--one thing cvs need to keep in mind always--

viewers are always right.
never disappoint them.

PH is there because of viewers.--not vice versa.

Edited by 100raj - 13 years ago

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synic

@synic

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

@100raj i second u👏

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rajh

@rajh

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: synic
@100raj i second u👏

thanks.

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Anju.

@ALUJNA21

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 100raj
at least in india ghar jamai concept not going to work.

so don't make him rishi sharma and don't keep him in SN.

now story should move forward--

at least now its time for indira to change her identity.--now she should become indira rickey diwan.

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p.s--one thing cvs need to keep in mind always--

viewers are always right.
never disappoint them.

PH is there because of viewers.--not vice versa.

exactly Raj why this Ghar jamaai track BUT Indira also said she'll not leave SN this is a bit weird hope they bring the situation that she does leave after marriage otherwise it is not difficult but Impossible for Indira to leave.

Like in other serials two families are shown but here only one family and they are always in the barsaati or in the sort of open varandah where I think it never rains also.very very weird.

hope lots of changes is brought in,to give it a real touch.

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