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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#491

nice part

i liked ricky's pov

hmm so indira's gonna talk to him now?! cant wait

but hey, she shouldnt hold herself responsible for what happened...she reacted like that coz of what she saw!

eagerly waiting for the next part

thanks for the pm

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@twila

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#492

Shruti and Mithsi...

Mithsii ... Loved the Title and the Banner ... The Heading is really Apt . 😊👏

Shruti ... Loved the Thinking ... Reflective mode of the entire chapter...Superb Update once again . 😊👏

So finally both have started to go over what happenned, ...Ruminate ... Reflect.

Are they ready to let their hearts decide once again ??

Thanks a lot for the Wonderful Update . 🤗

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Dhanya

@samrudhi.r

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#493

I liked the title and a the banner matches the title very well.

Very nice update. Nice decision that now indu will talk to ricky and try to clear all the clouds of MU.

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Aakanxa

@simplelife

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#494

Very nice update & banner too.👏.❤️
loved their realisation.😊
thanks for the pm.🤗

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shalini

@ushali

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#495

Nice chapter as usual...Hope all the misunderstandings will be cleared soon...😊.Thanks for the pm...

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Earnshaw09

@Earnshaw09

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#496

Mitshi and Shruti you've done a brilliant job once again.What I most like about your writing is the detailing of emotion that you bring out,which even writers like Illa Bedi lack;and the way you maintain the unity of action,which is a very important characteristic in drama.BRAVO!!!!!!!!
I really hope we can get this intense anger and tension between Rishi and Indira in the upcoming storyline,which will set the scene into fire,believe me.

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JSA18

@JSA18

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#497

Thanks for the PM, Mithila!😊

Now, my reacton at the end of this chapter: 'Eeekkk...!!!! Why does it have 2 end sooo...soon???!!!! Aaaggghhh...!!!!" 😆

As u can see, I was so very engrossed in Ricky and Indira's world that coming back to mine was sort of a shock!😛

Oh! The pain...doubt...regret...everthing felt so v.real...

Poor they...Both caught in the quagmire of their Pride and Prejudice...😔

IF ONLY they had bestowed on each other greater trust and 'power'...IF ONLY they had given each other a chance to clarify the matter...they would not have to live in perpetual hell for an entire year...!!! (But they didn't and so we got this wonderful FF! So, am not complaining!😛😉)

And IF ONLY this chapter had continued and contained their attempt to understand the entire scenario, my stomach won't have been aching for more!!!!😆😆😆

Anyways, fantastic banner and title and killer description and imagination!!!👏👏👏

Hopefully u gals will put an early ennd to my stomach-ache!!! Am eagarly waiting for my medicine!!!😃

👏👏

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AnkitalovesHD

@AnkitalovesHD

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#498

Loving the story more and more. Beautifully written. We are rational and emotional fools aren't we!? I love the pace and the characterization. Thanks a lot Shruti and Mithsi for gifting us with such a wonderful FF. The scene where Rishi has his feet dipped in the pool in the night and Indu with her hair open looking out of the window gave me chills, literally. I was imagining Sumit and Rati in that scene. They looked so beautiful in my mind. The soft glow of romance emanating throughout the writing and rebounding on Indira and Ricky's face. Two characters with so much flesh and blood. Marvelously done. So hard to establish two characters with their respective idiosyncrasies and make them seem alive, jumping of the pages right into our lives. The writing makes visualizing the characters and the situations easy. Kudos.

Love Anki.

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sravaran

@sravaran

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#499

Originally posted by: iolahardy

She had to talk with him. Not knowing the facts would kill her otherwise!

My sentiments exactly!! They both need to talk to each other. And you said it wasn't happening...at least not so fast. So, waiting for your twist in the tale.

Unless it is time for them to talk...is it time??

Edited by knownturk - 13 years ago