|| History repeats itself|UPDATED PG 6!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi guys...

Im in process of writing a fan fic on the next generation of the

potters and the weasleys {James,Albus,Lily,Rose, Hugo, Victoire and Ted}

It isnt very big, adn thsi is the first part of it.

Please read it if your free.

here it goes:

? || Does History repeat itself?? ||

Disclaimer*
I do not own any of the characters you recognize. {though I wish I did}

Nuff said!

'Is anything more boring than Charms?' James Potter asked his best friend Edmund.

'Rose' he joked and both for them laughed.

But Rose Weasley who was sitting in front of them couldn't hear them, she was too busy getting her notes right.

'Hey Rosie' he whispered leaning forward near her ears.

'What?' she muttered back.

'Am bored'

'So?'

'I want to go out….'

'Doors at your right Jamie'

'Come on. you know what I mean'

'No, I don't'

'Pleaase cuppy cake!'

'DON'T CALL ME THAT'

'Okay Rose pleaaase….'

'Fine' she said.

'Excuse me Professor Grimaric, in page 462 the second part, that charm isn't working right for me' she lied.

Professor Grimaric carried his old body to Rose, Happy to help someone who was actually awake and having a doubt!

He couldn't ask for anything better.

Slowly turning their backs to professor Grimaric, James and Edmund ran out of their class.

When the charms classes finally left, Rose walked to the gryffendor common room to leave her back pack there before heading for lunch.

Just then Hugo, a cute little second year ran towards his older sister.

'Rose …..Albus…..' he said between his gasps for breath.

'Where ?' she asked knowing what was on.

'Outside the library' he said.

Rose ran to the library.

'Experlliarmus' Albus screamed pointing his wand at a white haired boy of his own age.

'Lemmingus!' Scorpius screamed now pointing his wand at Albus.

Rose stopped at a halt, when she saw the two of them dueling, she went to stop Albus but before that James came, disarmed both of them, and dragged Albus to the great hall, As if nothing had happened.

Rose walked faster to catch up with them.

'Al whats wrong with you? You cant duel with him ALL THE TIME!' she said.

Albus grunted for a reply.

'And james you are his older brother, cant you tell him!' she asked.

'Okay, al don't fight' he said coolly without meaning it of course.

Rose was getting tired of all this.

'Why don't you'll get it? Scorpios and his group are pure evil…'

'News to me' James replied sarcastically.

'See just don't get into fights!' she said.

Albus rolled his eyes.

'Oh yeah I forgot….James Where did you go during charms?'

'Common room' he replied with a smirk.

'Why?'

'You want me to tell you?'

' Kyra was with you right?' she asked, hoping her worst nightmare wouldn't come true.

And he smiled naughtily.

Rose turned red.

'Im not letting you bunk any classes again'

'That's what you said last week'

'But I mean it now'

'You said the same thing last time too'

And then Rose walked away.

At lunch.

'Wheres Rose?' Lily asked her older brother at lunch that day.

'I dunno maybe at the library' James replied.

Just then a very attractive girl came and sat next to James.

She flipped her beautiful blonde hair back and smiled gorgeously at James, Albus, Lily, Hugo, Atif and Serah.

They smiled back at her.

'Hey victoire, someone by the name Ted sent you an owl'

Albus said mischievously.

Victoire tried to grab the latter he was holding.

'Please give it to me' she begged.

'Nah….what will I get in return?'

'Whaddya want?'

'Hmmm…..lemme think…..your cuzin Isabella….is she still single?' he asked smiling impishly.

'Ohhh I should have known you dirty little creature!'

'Dirty little creature? Fine…..forget the letter'

'Sorry sorry Ill hook you up with her promise'

'Pinky promise?'

'Since when did you start pinky promise? You always teased em about it' Lily asked.

'Well for girls pinky promise means a lot right…?' he teased her.

'Whatever'. Victoire said snachign the letter from his hand.

I hope you guys liked it...Anyways heres

A bit on the next part :

She knew it was time to move on.

James did not feel the same way she felt towards him.

He was just her good friend.

And nothign else.

Plus he was so cute, she was sure any girl would

be flast over him.

And such a cute guy would never fall for a nerd like her.

Victoire was waiting behidn Hogs head.

She got a letter from soemoen asking her to wait for him there.

who was it? she wondered.

It was kind fo creepy.

No on was around.

She decided she was going to wait for only another 5 minutes..she had waited logn enough.

Just then someone from back pulled her,

she tried to scream.......

But hsi ahdn was too strong.

he covered her mouth with a cloth.....

and carried her away...

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Zoya! This seems pretty interesting actually! A total reminder of James and Lily, which is probably why i'm liking it!

Some things to keep in mind while writing:
1. Get it proofread... The small spelling mistakes can be easily removed and will make reading much more enjoyable!
2. Give some lines of introduction or background to the scene!

Other than that, i think you have the potential to be a pretty good writer! Continue writing though, don't abandon the story!

Good job! 🤗
-Sam
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@ sam, thanx a lotttt....will keep em in mind.
thanx....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Has potential to become a great adventure. Very good! Love the interaction between James and Rose. 😆 ⭐️
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Zoya... this seems to be pretty good actually! I agree with Sam about the spelling errors but i think it's definitely going to be a great story! update soon! 😃 👏 👏
Edited by chhilt - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@ chhilt and shellytt sure..ill update ASAP
sorry abotu the spelling guys..i just started writing like that.
i did nto double check it before psoting...sorry!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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fantastic wrk ozya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 i jst loved it.....superb.......my god i srsly ;luv ur james....muah 2 him...... do cont......if u dont i iwl kil u......do it asap 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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supercool 👏 👏 pls pls pls pls...ud ASAP 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@bitasta and Nishttha
thanx. 🤗 ..ill start typing right away!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: zoya24

@bitasta and Nishttha
thanx. 🤗 ..ill start typing right away!

welcome dost..we'll be waiting😳

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