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Posted: 17 years ago
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this FF is awesome plz cont.
i like the concept very much
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@madu..sure...thanx a lottt....i have exams bnxtw eek for 3 days
and i promsie afta tht i will
or mayeb b4 tht😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Okay guys i;ve updated the next part.

Hope you'll like it.

Though i wanted to elaborate the makeover thing...i cudnt , cause

my tiem did not permit me to.

I wrote very fasht. so sorry for any grmatic mistakes

or boring parts.

I hope u like it. dnt forget to review pleaaase.

here it goes:

'Oh My God Ted!' Rose exclaimed looking at Ted standing at the door of Hogs head with Victoire.

'Hey Rosie!' he said half hugging her.

'How come you're here?'

'I was about to die….wanted my medicine' he said with a wink.

'And hows the medicine?' she asked playfully.

'Very sweet' he said looking fondly at Victoire.

Victoire rolled her eyes, and pinched his cheeks.

'Aww…Now my cheeks start looking good' he said grinning.

'Sha up Ted….anyways go now!'

'What? I just came!'

'Yeah but we are leaving now'

'Wait….'

'No..i;ve got to poack ym bags…and anwyays im meeting you after three days…so whats the rush?'

'Oh My Goodness! Three whole days without you?..!'

'Yes Mr. Ted…'

'Aww im gonna miss you'

'Im not' she said smiling at him and then walked out of hogs head with Rose.

'Buh-bye' she said on her way out.

In the girls room.

'Wow rose I've made so many cool plans for your personality and physical makeover' Victoire said.

'Please Tory don't go to that topic again!'

'Come on Rose….' But she was cut short, when she heard someone scream, they bothr an out of their room only to see Paolo slipping down the stairs which turned into a slide.

'Paolo honey….i thought you'd know by now, guys cannot enter the girls rooms!' Neha said smirking at him.

PAOLO: A very handsome, flirtious, dumb-witted French guy also James best friend and neighbor!

Neha: Rose's gorgeous, smart, religious and a free-spirited friend!

Paolo was behind Neha since ages, but she wasn't the least interested. But this poor chap never stopped trying,

He had made the record of slipping down the highest number of times. But He never gave up, hoping one day the stairs would remained stairs!

'Paolo….you need to stop' Rose said laughing.

'Sha up rose…you should be helping me!'

'For what joy?' she asked running down to him and giving her hand.

He got up.

'For being my friend!'

'I've been helping our since ages…you're last 18 girlfriends obliged to go out with you cause of me!'

James entered the common room and was watching all this happen.

'And none for my friends oblige to go out with you.' he said with a smirk.

James started laughing with the others.

Now that hurt Rose.

Otherwise she wouldn't mind, Paolo always spoke like that, not that he wanted to hurt her feelings. Just got something smart to say, he'll flaunt it…not considering the fact who is standing in front of him.

But James, he was quite sane.

'Sorry' Paolo said. {Sorry that no one obliged to go with her, that is!}

'Am not!' Victoire said cursing a spell under her breath.

His hair turned green and slimy.

James laughed again.

He looked disgusted, but dint have any words to say!
'Next time Paolo honey you say anything against her…ill punch you down…actually I wont..i mean why should I improve your looks?' Everyone at the common room watching this sniggered. Victoire threw back her hair and pulled her from there.

Three days later

Victoire, Lily and Rose entered their compartment in the train.

After a few minutes, the guys joined them too.

'Hey Tory, Hey Lils hey Rose….' Albus said.

The girls smiled at him.

'Hey Rose do you have my charms notes?' James asked.

Rose ignored him.

He was trying to star a conversation with her since the [ast three days,. But she dint speak to him.

At first he knew things would be better. But Rose was seriously angry. The next five minutes James tried talking o her. At last she took her things and walked out of the compartment.

'Hey where are you going?' he asked,

'Victoire im sitting with Neha' she said and left.

At the burrow.

The burrow over the years had been built bigger. And all of their houses were near by, excepting for Bills and Fleurs.

James got up the next morning and wen to the breakfast table but saw that Rose and Victoire weren't there and Ted was suling.

'Morning people' he said stifling back a yawn.

'Where are the girls?' Albus asked.

'Im here' Lily said with a smile.

'Not you I mean the girls!'.

'EXCUSE ME!'

'Whatever….where's Rose and tory?'

'They have gone to Fleurs house'

'WHEN?' Albus and James asked together?

'Last night….' Ted said angrily.

'But why?'

'Rosie wanted to stay away from you' Lily said innocently.

Ouch. Now James knew this was serious!

Rose and Victoire entered a posh boutique.

The whole place was down in pink and there were mirrors everywhere and many accessories.

A stylish and a funky looking women came out from on of the doors.

'Hellllooooo Vicccktoire!' The lady said sending flying kisses at her way and prnoucnign each word with a lot of uhh….style and strength.

Rose giggled. But Victoire returned the favour.

'Aww its been a long tiem isn't it?' she asked.

'Yeah…quite long..anyways….what do you want to do this time?'

'Not for me. for my cousin….Rose. Rose meet 'nicholetta Anabril Delorismy very good friend…!'

They shook hands.

''nicholetta Anabril Deloris?....Uhh cross breed?' Lily joked.

Nicollet wasn't offended, in fact she smiled and replied 'Yeah Spanish Dad Italian Mom'.

'Okay so a complete makeover I suppose?' she asked.

'Yeah..'

'Okay lets start with your hair…sinceYour hair speaks a lot about personality' she said.

'So now…..lets see….do you want it to be short?'

'Anything. as long as it looks good' Lily said.

'No…it has to speak about you darling……'

Lily rolled her eyes.

'Okay so what speaks for what?' she asked.

'Umm….brainy? ' she asked.

She waved her wand: next minute she had huge ugly hideous curls.

'Not working!' Victoire said.

'Okay sorry…Lets see…if you want it short and if you 're a carefree youth, who really don't have the time to fuss around and are always munching on burgers while rushing to school… In other words, short hairstyles are easy to maintain and are fuss-free and give youa cool, chic, reckless look!'

'Uhh that's definitely not me…anything else?' Lily said.

'Okay…lets see…A emo look?' she asked.

Victoire and Lily glared at her.

'That's a no right?' she asked nervously.

They both nodded at her still glaring.

The next 30 minutes Lily tried all kinds of hairstyles: From layered double colored hair to Mohawk! And from bobbed hair to pompadour!

'Okay enough…do you have any normal and stylish cut?' Victoire asked.

'excuse me?' she said getting offended.

But Victoire just gave her a side glance so she continued..

'You've got sharp features so…..The pixie cut would be perfect. It lays emphasis on your features. For this hairstyle, your hair is cut short but in different lengths. The bottom line is to have an uneven look….lets check'she said, waving her wand and muttering some spell.

Lilys hairstyle changed. Dint suit her much!

'Ok next!' Victoire ordered.

She was wondering if there was any hairstyle that suited her!

'You see im a very borin personality. maybe just bangs!'

'DO NO INSULT BANGS' the lady say getting hyper.

'Bangs are in full style now…Everyoen ahs bangs'

She was right…Kaira for one had bangs!

And she was one fo the prettiest girls in school, not to mention fashionable too.

'See you've got a nice long pretty face and your hair is curly…but you could straighten it since Straight long hair can be further glamorized with some bangs. Bangs especially go well with long shaped faces. The edges of the bangs can be fringed so that it looks more flattering…what say?' She asked?

'But I don't wanna straighten my hair!'

'Okay then Go in for a medium curled-out Bob where the hair can be worn at shoulder length. You can add some layers and bangs and tousle the edges that would look fantastic' she said waving her wand again.

It suited lily, but it wasn't what she wanted!

'You know what….you;ve got lovely curls….Lets just soften it, wash, condition and shine it..' Victoire said.

'No that's boring' nicholetta said.

'Try it nicholetta' Victoire said,

And she did.

And voila! She looked ….BEAUTIFUL!

It wasn't very much, but it looked cute, simple innocent and chic!

'wow!' the three of them said together.

Rose was getting excited.

'Okay now with your nails…can I see them?'

'No'

'Huh?'

'Of Course!' Rose said giving her hands.

'You bite your naisl don't you? Signs of nervousness, anyways how long do you want to your nails to be?'

'I dunno…'

They tried different sizes but settled for a medium sized nail, she then polished and cleaned it.

Nails looked better.

The next 45 minutes she was plucked, combed, cleaned, polished!

By the end of the hour, she looked gorgeous!

'I haven't seen an angel but am sure shes like you' nicholetta said.

'Aww that's so sweet. thanks' Rose said,

'Am not that sweet after all' nicholettea said handing her over her bill!

'Oh My God!' was all that she could say after reading the bill.

'Where were you 'll?' Fleur demanded, when the girls showed up at 4:30, you'll left at 9:00!...lets have lunch, im hungry!'

'Mom….wait…' Victoire said.

But Fleur went on. 'I was so worried, couldn't you'll inform me?. and where is rose?'.

'Mom…mom…MOM!...wait…iv gota friend' she said, getting rose inside.

Fleur did not recognize her.

'This is Maria' she said.

'Oh Hi Maria…am really sorry….well come inside oney!'

'Thank You Misses Weasley' Rose said changing her voice.

She was trying hard not to laugh.

'You're very pretty!' She said,.

'Aw thank you…Are you hungry, what do you want?' she said.

'If your banana pancakes are ready…youw ere supposed to make them today right!'

'yeah sure…hey how do you know?'

'Cause you told me yesterday; Rose said hugging her from back getting her old voice back.

'OH MY GOD. ROSE!' she exclaimed.

They all started laughing and jumping excitedly, Victoire explained about the whole makeover.

'Oh wow that's awesome…to complete this. lets go shopping!' Fleur said.

'But weren't you hungry?' Rose asked.

'Hunger? What's that?' she asked.

AT the mall.

'How much money do you have?' Victoire asked rose.

'shut up Victoire, I'll pay for her…don't be silly…'

'Am Justas asking mom'

'Not much just 400 galleons'. Rose said.

'400?' Victoire exclaimed.

'Okay you pay your bills' fleur said.

'But how?' Victoire asked.

'I;ve been collecting to buy the developed charms set'.

'Sha up. your spending your money on clothes' Victoire said.

Rose did not bother arguing,. She knew it wiuldnt not do any good.

James, Albus and Ted were walking in the magic mall.

Ted had to meet Victoire so he went to her town, but she nobodyw as at home, so he thought he;d spend some tiem in the mall, until she comes back. He even bought James and Albus for company. When they were just walking around, James saw Fleur, Victorie and a very pretty girl with them.

Ted noticed them too, he grinned and the guys marched towards them.

He deliberately bumped into Victoire.

'Ouch. sorry…Ohh…Tory!' he said acting surprised.

Victoire blushed.

'Hii Aunty…hi Tory…..' James said.

The girls looked shocked. Except for Fleur she looked surprised.

'What are you'll doing here' Tory asked.

Oh God, please let them not notice rose, this was upposed to be a surprise. Tory prayed.

'Uh Albus had some work here' Ted lied.

Albus raised his eyebrows, Albus opened his mouth to argue, but Ted closed it.

'Hey Tory, not introducing me to your lovely friend?' Jaames asked giving Rose his best smile.

Rose gulped.

Thank God he did not recognize her.

James looked at the girl again: She was dressed in a Black flutter sleeve empire waist tunic

and cropped rolled up dark jeans pants complimeting

her tunic and She had many silver bracelets in her hands. Very little makeup had been done, just a bit of touch up. Her hair was very cutely curled and she had gorgeous eyes. She looked familiar to him.

'She is..uh….Maria ….Maria…uhh Maria Peron!' Victoire stammered.

'Nice meeting you Maria…' James said giving out his hand.

Rose slowly took it, not knowing how to escape.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#44
its awsome... 👏
thanks for updating....m waiting for more! 😳 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#45
hey zoya its tremendous mind blowing superb awsm... 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46
wowwwwwwww..........
tht was wonderful zoya...... 👏 👍🏼 🤗
thts all i can say 😳 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#47
@ Nishttha
thanx a alotttt nishittha.
and @ cezzurockz and anuradha sharma..
thanx a lott guys...seriously, the way ull commebnt as if the srtory is thaat good..
lol....i know it isnt...im just updatignf ro teh sake..
anyways a thanx a lottt...totally appreciate it...
will update the nxt chap..,aybe tomorrow....since my exams r over!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#48
hey gr8 ff plz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey gr8 ff plz cont soon
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btw soz bout the double post
Edited by nyla_193 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@nyla_193
thanx a lott..will update soon....thanx a lottttt again!

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