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Posted: 17 years ago
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ur FFs r wonderful...
why dont u write somethiing....on......

"how james feels wenever he sees lily and snap togeather doing fun...... he felt jealous...and he can see dat snap has romantic feelings for lily...and he wonder how can a slydrin love a grifindor muggal-born...cozz slydrens r famous for disliking muggals and muggal-borns.... ...

he hates snap......not cozz he is slydryine but cozz he is close to lily.....he is jealous of him.........why lily toks to snap and not him...he is more popular....and he thinks he is more handsome den snap........thinking dis his heat fills wid hatered waves for snap...."look at snap's oilly hairs...ewwww...how cud lilly bear him....."he thought...and he cud feel his face turning red....he wanted to go to someother place......he dont want to see dem togeather... "may be snap is only playing wid lily's emotions....lilly is very sweet grl...she can bilieve anyone"...he thought...

after an hour.....marry came and take lilly away....he thanked to marry frm heart...and he take a look to snap's face...snap was looking to the door frm where lilly went........

"hi snap...howzz u?"...said another slydrien ...snap's frnd Avery ....

"hi" replied snap.....james took place near snap's table...so dat he cud hear watever snap toking....he was determined to curse snap if he wud tok anything against lilly in absesce of her......

"why u tok to dat grl.....she is frm grffindor..."...said Avery

and james cud see aver's scared face...as if he had done a blunder.....but immdiatelly he tried to sound kool.."i mean....u know...we slydriens dont like griffindors...dey r brainless...dey think dey r brave...but we know wat dey can do is put demselvs in some troubles by breaking some rules and sayig demselves as brave.........hun!"......snap said nothing.....but continued to look at avery in most dangerous look.........

"avery....she is my friend....my best friend....and u better dont say anything against her ....otherwise ...."...said snap in deadly voice.....First time in life james admired snap...but he cudnt help to jealous him........

"i dont mean to offend u .......she is just a Mud.....i mean a muggal-born"

"Levoicorpus" shouted snap pointing his wand towards arvey......and to james horror Arvery was now floting in air upside down and all students were looking from snap to avery wid horror...and snap was soo firious on avery dat james thought he might curse avery once more.........."

"Wats alll dis happening??".....dumbaldore suddendely appeared frm the front door looking at avery and snap.......he pointed his wand towards avery and made him stand on ground...to much relief for avery..

"Severus you come to mu office" said dumbaldore .dere was no anger in his voice.but james felt sorry for severus first time in life...and happy as he is caught first time ....."may be he gets detention" thought james happily.....

"hey wat r u thinking james??" asked sirius...."why was dat snap so angry on avery...i thought dey r good frndz..." said sirius and he winked.....

"sirius, i wud luv to hang snap like dat ...dont u think he knows soo many curses"...said james

"yea! dats why i dont like him...dat severus" said sirius

but now james was thinking something else....

"Levoicorpus...is a nice spell" thought james....and he wondered how snap knows dis spell and he doesnt.

PS: @shellytt : i am poor writer......wud u plzz make a good story of watever i wrote above.....i wud love to read it wid good words..and proper scenes....(i mean in ur words)😳

Edited by anuradhasharma - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
Thanks for the idea anuradhasharama.😊

I'll work on it and post it here (full credit going to you of course 😃 ), since it will be written in James's POV.

I'm also going to try and write something from Sirius's POV as another FF- wish me luck! 😕 😳 😆
Edited by shellytt - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: shellytt

Thanks for the idea anuradhasharama.😊

I'll work on it and post it here (full credit going to you of course 😃 ), since it will be written in James's POV.

I'm also going to try and write something from Sirius's POV as another FF- wish me luck! 😕 😳 😆

good luck! and i'd love to read one from sirius's point of view.... hes such an interesting character! i also PMed you with some ideas... maybe you can ask our fellow Gryffindors for more ideas!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: shellytt

Thanks for the idea anuradhasharama.😊

I'll work on it and post it here (full credit going to you of course 😃 ), since it will be written in James's POV.

I'm also going to try and write something from Sirius's POV as another FF- wish me luck! 😕 😳 😆

🤗..awww...thankuu dear!....but credit to make it worth reading wud go to u!....i can only give ideas!...😊...

i wud love to read sirius's POV!......keep it up...!😳..i love reading ur FFs

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi everyone, This installment is from anuradhasharma's idea. I just tweeked it a little for her (as per her request). Credit goes to her on this one! oh Anuradha, I changed some of the details a little (nothing major), mostly, I did it so I wouldn't have too much dialogue (which I try to avoid writting as much as possible, because I don't like writing it! 😆 )

Enjoy!

That's just not right, James thought to himself as he stared intently at Lily and Snape. Engrossed in conversation, oblivious to everything else. They were both sitting together in the courtyard, in what was unofficially the Slytherin section. Fraternizing with the enemy, as Sirius would say if he saw Lily, a Gryffindor, speaking with that greasy haired, conniving git, she insisted on calling her friend. What has he got that I don't? James wondered to himself.

Sirius would torment him endlessly, if he knew that at this moment he would have given his place on the Quidditch team, to be in Snape's shoes right now. And that, thought James, was saying a lot, for there was little else he despised more that the look of Snivelius. James continued to stare as nonchalantly as he possibly could at the pair. Lily seemed to be worked up about something James thought. Maybe she was trying to convince the nosy idiot, and what a large nose that was, to leave Hogwarts and enroll in Drumstrang instead. Now, that would be a great idea. James smiled at that thought.

Suddenly, Mary, Lily's best friend beckoned her over to their table. Lily bid goodbye to a somewhat disappointed looking, Snape and started to walk towards Mary and her friends. Passing by James' table she cast him a look of utter disgust, that, had James been an insecure lad, he would have cowered under that gaze. Instead, he returned her gaze with a wide, and to his mind genuine, smile, but to Snape's eye (and Lily's too for that matter) the smile seemed more arrogant than real.

Why is she even friends with that oily haired, dark arts worshipping puppet from Slytherin? Didn't she realize that Slytherin was the mortal enemy of Gryffindor, regardless of what Dumbledore said about putting differences aside and uniting. How could she not even like me? James thought. I'm popular, everyone else seemed to like me, I'm on the House team, I don't think I'm bad-looking?! Bad temperedly James threw aside his parchment where he was pretending to write an essay.

In frustration, he started to gather his things together to leave when he caught sight of the troll Avery heading towards Snape's table. Now this might be interesting, thought James. It had been rumored that the seventh year Avery was a Death Eater in training. What would he have to say to Snape, a seeming nobody from the fifth year?

Curious now, James moved to a table closer to Snape to hear what they were saying. Avery looked a little bit anxious as he approached Snape and sat across from him. Snape's attention was diverted away from Lily across the courtyard at Avery's voice.

"Hey Severus, why to you talk to that Evans girl?" Avery asked with a look of disgust on his face, as though saying the name Evans left a bitter taste in his mouth. If James wasn't so intent on hearing Snape's reply, he would have immediately jinxed Avery, Death Eater or not, for the obvious disregard he held for Lily.

Snape turned his head and gave Avery a stare that had the older boy fidgeting a little. "She's my best friend." He replied in a quiet voice that dared Avery to say anything else. Unperturbed, by the threat in Snape's voice, he continued, rather stupidly, James thought to press the subject.

" She's not even in Slytherin! I don't understand why everyone thinks she so pretty!"

"She's my friend Avery, and I suggest you don't say anything else or you may regret it!" Snape continued in a low deadly voice.

" She's nothing but a Mud…….. AHHHHHHHHH!!" At Avery's statement, James had pulled out his wand to jinx Avery, but found that Avery was suddenly hanging upside down in the air, from a spell cast by Snape.

" LET ME DOWN! I'M SORRY!" he bellowed.

" Be more careful with what you say to me Avery, or things could get a lot worse for you." Snape warned, as he muttered an incantation and Avery thumped to the ground.

James looked around the courtyard, to see if Lily had noticed the commotion, but she was nowhere to be seen. She must have gone into the castle before, James thought. Snape gathered his books and started to walk into the castle, when he noticed James sitting nearby. With a look of understanding on his face, Snape hurried into the castle after giving James a disgusted look. What was that spell that Snape had used! It looked like a non-verbal spell because James didn't hear an incantation.

Determined now to find out the spell, James started to walk back into the castle for afternoon classes. I wonder if Lily would be impressed if I used that spell, James smiled to himself. Must find Sirius, James thought, there's mischief to be managed!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow! cool shelly! and great idea anuradha! 👏 credit goes to both of you! 👏 👏 👍🏼
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wonderful....wonderful....wonderful......

luv ya shellytt🤗🤗.............and
aaaaa BIIIGGGG Thankkkksssssss to u dear!....🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: anuradhasharma

wonderful....wonderful....wonderful......

luv ya shellytt🤗🤗.............and
aaaaa BIIIGGGG Thankkkksssssss to u dear!....🤗

No problem😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: chhilt

wow! cool shelly! and great idea anuradha! 👏 credit goes to both of you! 👏 👏 👍🏼

Thank you from both of us!😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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so... when's your next FF coming out? the one with Sirius's POV? 😳

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