SecretSanta UPDATED LAST CHAPTER!!!! - Page 5

the best part in this fanfic zoya!! 😃
Keep up the BRILLIANT work Zoya. 👏
Loved it. 😳 😳
And I can tell the last part will be Fantastic. 😳 😃

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Originally posted by: sumera siddiqui

the best part in this fanfic zoya!! 😃
Keep up the BRILLIANT work Zoya. 👏
Loved it. 😳 😳
And I can tell the last part will be Fantastic. 😳 😃

thanx a lottt....even i like this aprt..

am so glad u guys luved it..

i thot u'll wudnt liek it much..

plus i made so many gramatic mistakes!!!!! n spealling mistakes...

sorry diint get time to double chck..will dit now!
thanx..

im updating the last part today!

@ chhilt and tani
Thanx a lottttttttttt!!!!!!
am so glad u guys liked it!!! 🤗

This is the last chapter of Secret Santa!

Am sorry it is a bit short.

And i really hope you'll like it!

Christmas fever everywhere!

People were so excited about the Christmas ball.

And on the eve of Christmas….mistletoes hung everywhere, snow flakes rained over everybody, Huge Christmas tree's were decorated, cute little cherubs were ,moving around the corridors and

An old fat Santa clause was already in the castle.

And hogsemeade looked better than ever!
The whole place was white with snow!
And wonderful music played.

The shops had discounts and sales.

Lily and her friends went shopping for the next day's ball.

They all blew up their money buying stuffs.

And at last all tired in the night they went back to their dorms.

Lily was excited, but not as excited as the others were.

She really hoped, that things would get better between James and her.

Well it did.

But not as much as she hoped.

That night Lily, Isabella, Hannah and Zaara {their other roommate}sat in their beds talking.

'Zaara are you sure you wont be able to celebrate Christmas with us tomorrow?' Isabella asked.

Zaara shook her head. 'Its Eid after two days. Cant miss that!'

'Who's asking you to miss Eid cant you stay for just another day?'

'I'll try….but I hope you remember you all have

To come to my house for Eid'

They all smiled and said that they wouldn't miss it for the world!

'Anyways…who are you guys going out with?' Zaara

Asked, playing with her silky dark hair.

'Please don't go to that topic….Hannah has cribbing since morning that she doesn't have a date' Lily said.

'I am going with Sirius' Hannah said.

And everyone stared at her.

'Why dint you tell us?' Isabella demanded.

'Well he asked me out some time back'.

'Still...well how did it go?' Lily asked excitedly.

Even Lily had to admit, though she dint like Sirius much, he wasn't such a bad guy. He wouldn't cheat on her friend. Plus she knew Hannah always had something for him.

'Okaaaaay fine…..umm….when you guys were entering the whole, I dropped my bags down

And ….

*Flashback*
someone helped her pick up the bags.

It was Sirius.

'Thanks' she said grinning.

'My pleasure….'

He helped pout the things back into the bag.

'Loads of shopping huh? Your wedding o something?'

'Ha-ha. Not funny….no, tomorrow is the ball right?'

'So?'

'well had to get stuffs….'

'Yeah…Gown, stilettos, cologne gel, lipstick perfume, blush…' he said, looking at all the things that had fallen down.

She laughed.

'So who are you going with…..Tashika??' she asked.

'No. not Tashika. No one actually. Dint get a date yet'

'Yeah right'

'No seriously'

'I don't think the girls have lost interest in you yet. Wait……did they find out you like lollypop?'

'Maybe they lost interest. And heyyy who told you I like lollypop?'

'I saw you eating it…'

'Sha up. You dint!'

'Uh-huh..i did!. And there's a wrapper hanging in your robes!' she pointed out.

He blushed with embarrassment.

'Don't worry. I wouldn't tell that to anyone' she said with a smile.

Just then a pretty girl looked at sirus and asked him 'Sirius would you like to be my date for tomorrow?'

Hannah grinned. 'Talk about losing interest'she muttered.

'I am sorry. I cant'

'Why?' the girl asked. It did nto look like she was going to cry, but it surely looked like she would punch him if he said no.

'Cause….I….uh…already have a date!'

'No. you don't. I found out through the girls. We were discussing today…and you did not ask anyone out!'

'Well…..I did…'

'Who's that?'

'Um….umm….well….its….'

Hannah was laughing.

'Its Hannah!' he continued.

And Hannah looked at him.

'Yup its Hannah' he said with a malicious grin.

The girl looked at Hannah.

'Are you his date?'

'No'

'She is. She doesn't want to hurt your feelings' Sirius said.

'whatever!' she said angrily and walked off .

At last Hannah managed to get her bags together.

'Thanks Sirius….bye!'

'Bye….see you tomorrow …at the common room don't be late! I hate it when my dates are late' he said and walked off.

*present*

'Wow…..that's so cool' Zaara cooed.

'That guy has style' Isabella remarked.

Everyone looked at Lily for some comment.

And she said with a confused expression 'Sirius Black loves Lollypop?'

And everyone burst out laughing.

'Okay you guys shut your mouth about it' Hannah warned them.

'Okhay Lils you got a date?' Zaara asked.

Lily nodded.

'Who?' she asked.

And Lily shrugged her shoulders!
'What? You don't know who you are going out with, And you have a date? What it is this some kind of blind date?'

'Kind of.. .' she said.

'Actually her secret Santa asked her out….and since James asked Tashika out she needed someone…so she said okay' Isabella explained.

'How did he ask you out?' Zaara asked eagerly.

'He gave her the communication diary' Hannah said excitedly.

'Cool…they are very rare to get. Show me. Maybe

We get to talk to him like now!'

And then they took out the diary.

And Lily wrote: Hey! R u there?
Nope. Came the reply.

'I'll manage this' Hannah said.

And the Isabella and Zaara helped her with the answers, leaving Lily totally out of it.

Okay then since ur not there. Ciao!

No its okay. I'm there now.

J So…..wotcher doing?

This is not Lily. Hannah I suppose?

'Oh My God! How did he understand?'

Nope. Am Lily. Say that you like me and don't even know whose chatting with you rite now?
I like you that why I know its Hannah. Lily never uses such words. Hannah you're the one with 'Wotchr', 'ssup?'……

Fine! Caught me!

So y r u using Lily's diary?

She gave us permission. N y u so bothered?

Well diaries r supposed to be personal.

Anyways who r u? we wont tell Lily.

That desperate to know me?

Not desperate. Just wondering….

Well come go 2 ur common room…am there…don get Lily along with u'll…..

You are a griffy?

Yup.

They all ran down to the common room.

And no one was there.

Angrily they went up again.

I can't believe you. U akchelli went down. 2 c if I was there? Girls…I say!
So u were down. U saw us dincha?
Yup.

Anyways at least tell me do I noe u?

Maybe.

Are you good looking?

Whaddya mean? Ur friend shd date only good looking guys? Well…she h admitted that looks doesn't matter much to her.

She's insane. We noe it does. She just said tht to b polite.

We'll see. I hope she isn't disappointed when she c's me.

She better not!

Heyy Almighty God gives us our Looks…it isn't within us.

Well….luck does matter doesn't it?

Sure it does. Anyways don't u think u sud go n sleep now? Its 2:00…don't u need ur so called beauty sleep.

Well we r beautiful enuf without our beauty sleep.

Yeah. But don u have to look ur best for black?
HOW DID U FIND OUT?

*muhahahah* if you'll speak so loudly outside your common room. Any deaf also would b able to hear u both.

Well…wa'eva! Good night. Go n sleep.Maybe u will luk better drowsy….;)

Haha. Lets c. gn…

And then the girls went to bed.

Sirius Black was laughing!

'They will be surprised to see you tomorrow prongs'he said.

James grinned.

'Hannah is smart. Isn't she?' Sirius asked.

'Not as smart as Evans' was James reply.

'Oh please….any time smarter and cooler!'

'No. all the time she is like ''Wotcher potter?''…that's so lame'.

'Whatever lets go to bed now'

Peter who was trying to set his alarm asked James the time.

'2:05' he said.

'sometime back you said 2:03….decide!'

'Shut up. Pete. The time NORMALLY changes…..unlike your brain, which hasn't changed since you were a baby' Sirius joked.

And everyone laughed and went to bed.

Next day after a snowball match the marauders were very tired and went to the common room to get ready. It was 4:00 pm. They had to get ready for the party.

Sirius just had bath and was getting ready, when he saw Peter wearing his ugly tailcoat.

'Eww worm tail. You're not wearing that!' Sirius said.

Peter looked miserable.

'I don't have a better one' he said.

Sirius then removed a cover from under his bed and gave it to Peter.

'What?' Peter asked.

'You're last gift' Sirius said.

'Huh? You were my santa?'

'Yeah…'

'So you gave me those appalling gifts?'

'Yeaah' he said with a grin. 'This one aint that bad. Honest'.

Peter unpacked the gift and he saw an expensive suit inside.

'for…….uhh…me?' he asked searching for words.

He was overwhelmed with joy.

'Yeah' Sirius said. 'How Much ever I tease you. You're still a marauder'.

Peter hugged him.

'Man! I have to have bath again!' he groaned.

Hannah had gone to have bath.

And Zaara was just helping the other girls get ready.

Isabella wore her beautiful pink gown. When she was doing her hair, Lily who was drying her hair said 'Remus will be gaga over you. You look gorgeous!'

Isabella blushed. Isabella was pretty, one of the prettiest French girls lily had seen.

When Isabella was almost done, she saw her reflection in the mirror:

A tall and slender girl with an elegant Pink gown.

Her long straight black hair was just left straight.

Only her eyes were done heavily with eye definer and mascara.

She looked almost perfect. But then she looked a bit too plain.

'You look great! This will make you look even better' Lily said handing her a small gift.

She took the box and the card said 'From your secret santa!.

'You're my Santa?' she asked happily?

Lilly nodded.

'Thanks a lot for those gifts! They are wonderful!' She said.

Lily smiled.

When Isabella opened the box she saw a very pretty pink necklace, which went very well with her gown.

She hugged her friend!

Sirius was dressed up completely. And he looked very much handsome, in his tuxedo.

He had the looks any teenager would die to have.

Even Peter looked loads better. In fact he hardly looked like him. The three marauders gave him a makeover!

Remus looked less shabby and quite attractive.

In fact, he looked more cheerful and more handsome.

James looked dead-drop gorgeous!

In his black tuxedo, and hair gelled up and slid back.

Any girl who'd see him then would fade.

'She won't be disappointed right?' James asked like for the thousandth time that day.

'No!' all of them said together.

And they went down.

Lily got ready. She was wearing an off-the-shoulder white gown. She straightened her hair for a change, and gave bouncy curls to the tip of her hair.

She applied very little blush and transparent lip gloss, which shimmered.

She looked mesmerizing.

'MaashaAllah! You look ….wonderful!' Zaara said, with her Pakistani accent.

Lily blushed.

After sometime with everyone's help even Hannah got ready and she too looked gorgeous in her white and red gown. In fact she looked very appealing and pretty.

When they were all ready to go, Zaara hugged them and wished them best of luck and then with her luggage went out.

They were so going to Miss Zaara.

She was one of the nicest people they knew and was almost a part of their group.

Glancing last time at the mirror they went down.

In the common room.

'Where are these girls?' Sirius asked impatiently.

Just then he saw Hannah getting down the stairs.

'Oh.My.God. She looks stunning' Sirius said out aloud. And you could even read that from his expressions.

Hannah caught his eye.

Did he look dead-drop-gorgeous or what?
Blushing furiously she went up to the boys.

James saw Lily coming down with her friends looking totally angelic! He was awestruck by her beauty. He couldn't just take his eyes off her.

And when Lily realized that he was staring at her, she couldn't help but stare back. She hadn't seen anyone that handsome in the entire history of her life!

And when Remus saw Isabella and Isabella saw Remus, they both were blushing like crazy.

Isabella did not expect Remus to look that handsome and Remus did not know that Isabella was that pretty!

Sirius noticed Hannah heading towards them. She smiled at him and then turned towards James.

Puzzled he looked at her.

She gave James a gift.

'You were his secret Santa?' He asked.

Hannah smiled and said 'Yeah…sorry for not giving proper gifts well…heres one'.

'Oh puh-lease those notes meant a lot to him' Sirius said.

'What notes?' Lily asked.

She was already anxious to know who her secret Santa was plus she was feeling very jealous since James was Tashikas date. Not hers!

'Oh nothing …' Hannah lied.

And then Isballa gave remus another gift. Remus looked at her. She blushed.

'You're my secret Santa?'

'Yeah…hope you liked the gifts'

'I dint like the gifts- '

It looked as if Isabella would cry…

'I loved them' he continued.

And she blushed more.

Since everyone got into conversations on how wonderful the gifts were, Lily looked around anxiously.

Just then James asked her 'you're not disappointed are you goody-2-shoes?'

Lily looked surprised.

'You're my Santa?' she asked stunned.

'Yeah. I hope I dint disappoint you' he said, looking patched.

Maybe she is disappointed, he thought.

Then Lily grinned and said 'I couldn't have asked for anything better'

And James just looked at her.

'Stop staring at me and let's go. I don't want to waste even a second!'

And James felt like the luckiest person on this world!

'Hey this is for you' he said, giving her a cute punch.

she opened it and saw mascaras, eye shadow, cologne gel, bracelet et cetera what she thought,

he bought for tashika.

'Thank you' she said half hugging him!

And as they were going chatting continuously, many of them complimented them.

'You'll make the cutest of pairs!' Mia, a Ravenclaw said.

'We know' James said looking at Lily.

'Have a great time' she said and walked away.

Just then Remus stopped Mia.

'Merry Christmas Mia' he said.

Isabella felt some what jealous.

'Merry Christmas Remus..Looking good' she said.

'Thanks….it was fun being your secret Santa' he said giving her a gift.

'Oh you're my secret Santa?' She asked.

He nodded.

'I loved your gifts…apart from the novel. Im not much into reading. But I kept it for someone else. And that someone else is Sirius' she said and laughed.

Isabella and Remus also laughed.

'But just so that you know Sirius cannot stand books' Remus said.

'I know. But I have been giving such nice gifts…and then I was practically broke….for a change I think he should read' she said and left, with the book in her hand wrapped in a red wrapping paper.

'Hey Sirius' Mia said smiling.

'Hey Mia…' Sirius replied.

'Merry Christmas' she said, handing him the book and left.

'She was your secret Santa?' Hannah asked.

'Probably. And hey…she gave me a book!' Sirius said.

Hannah laughed.

'Give it to Remus' she said.

'Hey remus…this is for you. Merry Christmas!'

Sirius said.

And when Sirius saw the book he burst out laughing!

'What's so funny?' Sirius asked.

'Nothing' he muttered and took the book with a word of thanks.

'Hey how come we got to be each others secret Santa?' Lily asked.

'We gave our names together remember? Well Slughorn might have forgotten to jumble up the chits properly' Hannah said.

'Come on now. Lets go' Isabella said.

The party was in full swing and everyone was dancing!

'So together at last' James said swirling Lily.

She laughed and said 'Yeah'

'Glad?'

'Very much'

'So you ever hated me?'

'Well only in the beginning'

'Then why did you always turn me down?'

'I liked it when you asked me all the time….'

'Sucha wondderrrrrful reason!' he said in a mocking tone.

'You knows James I really wished that you were my secret Santa'.

'And I really wished we would get together'

'Well both happy now'

'Yeah…..its just seems too good to be true' James said giving another smile, that made Lily weak on her legs.

Remus and Isabella danced to the music.

'You mean to say that you think that the last axiom of transfiguration is stupid?'

'I don't just think so. I know so'

'Well….it does make a lot of sense!'

'No, the charms 23^rd axiom makes more sense'

'Oh-Puhlease' he said.

And the conversation went on.

But the two of the enjoyed every bit of it.

'I love myself don't you?'

'No. I love myself better' Hannah replied to Sirius.

'Nah….you're not that bad…but am anytime cooler than you..'

'Yeah right…..'

'Am handsome…you cannot deny that! Well more like the most handsome in our school….plus I am whaddya say cool? And….i love my sense of humor and my only one of its kind distinctive personality'.

'You forgot one thing'

'What's that?'

'Your so cool…I suppose you're the only 17 year old here…or in this world who loves lollypop!' she teased.

'Not funny! Don't even get there…..'

'Wa'eva!....and if you talk about personality mines anytime better…you wouldn't find anyone more charming….I have…umm….that charisma in me, that'll make anyone fida over me!'

'Fida?'

'that's Hindi fir crazy'

'Man! That Zaara sure has an effect on you'

'Well it is cool to use foreign idioms….'

Atlast someone of my standard, Sirius thought. It wasn't easy to win arguments with Sirius.

He had to admit she was cool.

And pretty and smart and chic…..

'Stop dreaming…and concentrate on your dance…I wouldn't spare you if you stamp my well pedicured feet' Hannah joked.

'So you mean to say that you're a better person?' Sirius asked.

'Definitely. Actually…it's kind of difficult to compare youre a guy and am a very pretty, smart and a nright girl'

'Yeah yeah whatever…..so Mr. Perfect plus miss perfect should make a perfect couple?' he said with a wink.

She blushed.

'Well yeah….Thank God you got it!'

'Excuse me?'

'You were the one who started arguing'

'No I dint…you did'

'No you did!'

And that went on and on….

That night was almost picture perfect for everyone!

Even peter got a girl to dance with….except that she thought that peter was A.Thomas.Greenwood from hufflepuff, son of a very rich man!

All was well!

this is ZOYA!

sorry m usinjg didi's account!

persoanlly speakin i din like it much!

Originally posted by: Nishttha

it was superb 👏 i was really missing ur ffs...coz u both stopped updating hari puttar and marauders...but really, this one was super cool 👍🏼

thanx.

sorry we cudnt update them cause as i told u u'll zumans inn 10th grade....

she is having ehr exams on 31st!
she'll b free only on 6th

but then seema didis{he rolder sister} babys date is due around the same time..

so by 10th of nxt mnth we;ll try n update!

Originally posted by: zoya24

thanx.

sorry we cudnt update them cause as i told u u'll zumans inn 10th grade....

she is having ehr exams on 31st!
she'll b free only on 6th

but then seema didis{he rolder sister} babys date is due around the same time..

so by 10th of nxt mnth we;ll try n update!

wish zuman from me😊 we can wait😃

and wow..thts a wonderful news...then along with u, we all are going to be 'masi's😆