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Posted: 17 years ago
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ooohhh dats grrr8...n btw best of luck 4 ur xams 😉
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When they walked out. They saw that a group of students had gathered.
The trio walked towards the crowd to see what was happening.
James was throwing Jinxes at Snape. And Snape dodging them and jinxing him.
James muttered some spell and Snape was suspended in the thin air.
Everyone laughed, as his robes went upside down and they could see his underpants.
'James!' Lily shouted automatically.
James turned around to see Lily staring at him angrily.
'Lily. I can explain…..' James tried to explain, but Lily cut him short.
'Explain what? I thought you changed!'
'I did'
'Oh no. you haven't…. still the same old pathetic potter!'
She scremed.
Lily was happy that James had turned to be so nice. And now she knew she was wrong.
Lily muttered a counter curse and Snape got back to his feet.
She gave James another look of total loathe and walked away.



'Chill prongs' Sirius said.
'Yeah sure!'
'come on man…'
'What? Lily almost thought that im a nice guy. and now this thing spoilt everything!'
'No….'
' I worked so hard on impressing her…and snape spoilt it. Damn him'
'no offence meant. …but have you realized Evans gets really pissed off when you hex snape?'
James kept quite.
But stared at him.
'Last time. She tried hexing you too…and once when he was hurt …when we hexed him. she took him to the hospital wing!'
James realized that too.
Loads of times.
But he never said anything.
He thought he was just imagining it.
But then Sirius couldn't be too.
'No. he called her a mud-…….no it cant be'
He tried to argue.
'I dunno…that's what I noticed. Anyways they make a perfect pair'
James glared at him.
'I meant snape and……and…..the giant squid!'
James got up.
'Where you going man?'
'slughorns called lily and me…some stupid decoration…..' he said and waked off.

Lily was waiting for him outside the common room.
Neither of them opened their mouth.
They went to slughorns office.
Professor Slughorn was just giving them the instructions when, a student came in and told professor that the headmaster was calling them.
He apologized and walked off, leaving the two of them, waiting for his return.
James broke the ice.
'You always come at the wrong time'
'Yeah right. And the other time, you clean his feet?' 'You dont even know what happened'
'I've seen it happen'
'You have not seen everything'
'Well seen a part of it. And that's enough'
'yeah. Enough!'
'I thought you changed you're still the arrogant, capricious, whimsical toe rag!'
'SHUT UP LILY!' James couldn't take it anymore.
'Yeah maybe I am arrogant but does that mean that you have been less rude?'
Lily just stared at him.
'you've been always saying things to me. But I never said anything back! And that does not mean that I don't have any feelings!'
'Lily looked at him with disbelief.
'Snape hexed me first. And I did what every normal being does, defend myself…but what did you see? Me hexing him….'
Lily felt a bit guilty.
'I have been trying everything to impress you. I stopped troubling and hexing the juniors. Slytherins are an exception! But apart from that….I've done everything you wanted me to.
You wanted Gryffindor to win the match. I tried not getting detentions and practiced my team hard! But even then I was impulsive. You dint like me asking you out. Even though it was hard, I stopped. I've been doing everything it takes to make you think that im not such a bad guy! Tell me has there been a day when you haven't mentioned that I am the biggest loser on earth? That I am whimsical, mendacious et cetera?'
Lily would die with guilt.
' I am sorry james……I dint know it would hurt you so much'
'Of course you dint!....you dint care when you hurt me, but you cared when I hurt snape!'
Lily was shocked.
He noticed that there was something between them.
'Why Lily?'
'James….I don't need to explain that to you!'
'Fine…don't! Am sorry if I have ever troubled you. Wouldn't make the mistake of talking to you again!' He said and walked off.
Just then professor entered.
'Potter where are you going?'
'Sir….my heads aching badly' he said and walked off, without waiting for a reply.
And Lily stood there.
She was hurt.
It wouldn't have hurt so much if anyone had ripped off her chest, taken her heart out and kicked it!
She never thought that James would feel like that.
But he was right.
And he wasn't speaking to her now!


Splash!
James threw another stone in the lake.
He dint know what made him say all that.
But he felt better.
It was useless.
They were not meant to be.
He never realized that he actually felt so much inside.
Lily must be hating him so much now.
And she must be really upset…Only her secret Santa could elevate her mood now. But how?

'Black have you seen James?' Lily asked James.
'No' he said paying no attention to her.
'Remus?'
'No Lily…he went with you right?' Remus asked.
'Yeah. And- '
'You'll fought?'
'Kind of..'
'what happened?'
Lily told him everything.
'Glad prongs said all that. He was right. I dunno what made him keep his mouth shut all this time….actually I do…. …he is after all madly in love with madam-know-it-all' Sirius said in a mocking tone.
Lily's eyes filled with tears.
'Lily…chill…I bet he'll get over it' Hannah consoled her.
'I hope' she said.


When James retuned to the common room. He headed straight to his room, without looking at anyone.
The other marauders were there.
'Lily gave you this' Peter said handing him a note.
James took the note from peters hand and read:
Dear James,
I am extremely sorry. I never meant to hurt you so much.
Maybe because you never said anything, I continued to scream at you.
I am sorry. And there is nothing between snape and me.I know you will not want me to talk to me again..…..am sorry…
Love,
Lily
p.s>> you aren't a bad guy at all. Actually one of the best I know…..

Ands there was another note for him.
It said:
Roses are the best mood elevators.
S.S

That evening, after the hogsemead trip, Lily extremely tired entered her room.
There was bunch of roses in her bed.
And there was a note attached.
It read :Roses might be pretty…
But Lily is prettier…
Your SS

Lily smiled.
The day wasn't so bad after all.
It was actually good.
Plus Lily and James made up in hogs head.
He truly was a nice guy.
She did not expect him to apologize!
Smiling Lily jumped on her bed.
And then held the roses against her face.
Then the petals in the roses disappeared and then they rained over her!

Edited by zoya24 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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im sorry i update so alte..
but had exams..
n this ch is quite small....
n the word scultpin isnt tht good too
but then i had to type it really fast!
hope u'll liek it!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thank you..
i suppose the next update will be tomorrow or on sunday!
thankx a lotttttt! 🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thabx...but i told u'll d...i dint like this chapter much.
i mean i had to type really fast..
so couldnt really put it in a effiecient or creative way..
anyways thanx a lottt!
nxt update tom or mon..probably..thanx a looooootttttt
again!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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heyy grrrrrr8 prt zoya!!!!do cont soonn...n btw how was ur xams
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanx!
exams were quite good..
nxt year 10th 😭
so much to do study..i dnt midn though..but less tiem for IF...
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gr8888 part! 😊
It's Rocking!!!!!!! 👏
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Lily smiled.

The day wasn't so bad after all.

It was actually good.

Plus Lily and James made up in hogs head.

He truly was a nice guy.

She did not expect him to apologize!

Smiling Lily jumped on her bed.

And then held the roses against her face.

Then the petals in the roses disappeared and then they rained over her!

James laid on his bed.

The day wasn't that bad.

Actually it was quite good.

He was glad that he said all that to Lily. It really had a effect on her.

Though he went and apologized Lily was feeling really guilty.

*flashback*

In the gift gallery.

'Psst Prongs…..Evans there….'Sirius told him.

Quickly James started checking out all the girl accessories.

'might be buying those accessories for that Tashika! Well…' Lily told Isabella with a air of jealousy.

She went up to him.

James pretended nto see her.

'James?'

James turned around.

'James ….i wanted..'

Just then Sirius cut her off.

'Prongs im thirsty. Lets go to hogs head. Bill that fast and whoever wants to talk to you can come there' he said and walked off.

James gave her a little smile and walked away to the counter.

He paid for the nail-polish and Cologne gel.

And walked off.

In the Hogs head

The three girls went to hogs head. They spotted the marauders in one corner, chatting and laughing.

They walked up to them with Lily nervously following them. Hannah asked them 'Can we join you?'

They all nodded with a smile.

They pulled out three chairs for them.

And Lily got to sit enxt to James.

She looked at him.

He was staring at his bottle of butterbeer.

Before she could open her mouth he looked at her and said 'Lily am extremely sorry. I dotn know what entered me.

I just went on. I dint mean anything I said. You are one of the nicest- actually the nicest person I know.

And you cannot even by mistake hurt anyone's feeling' he said continuously

The others weren't paying attention to them.

They were busy chatting.

Lily was overwhelmed with feelings.

How could anyone be so nice?
She knew tat she had been extremely rude to him.

And now he is apologizing!
Her eyes filled with tears.

'Am so sorry Lily. Please….' he said, noticing the tears.

She rubbed her tears with her sleeves.

Isabella and the others noticed and pretended to be oblivious to it. They knew that the two of them had to handle it.

'No James. Am sorry' she said.

He smiled at her.

How radiating! She thought.

She smiled back.

And she said 'You might be irritating at times –Most of the time….But you're the cutest irritating prat!' .

Oh My God! Did I just say that? She wondered.

And she saw something that she never in her wildest tdreams had expected to see : James blushing furiously!

And then Sirius could not pretend that he was not listening.

He wolf whistled.

And this time even Lily was blushing with James!

*present*

Lily got up in the morning.

And she saw the gifts at the end of their beds.

She woke Isabella up and she and Hannah started unwrapping theirs gifts.

Hannah excitedly opened the box and there was a very pretty journal in it.

'Wow its so cute' Lily remarked.

'Yeah. What did you get?'

'A …..diary…' she said.

She held a old fashioned diary in her hand.

'All this time ur santa gifted you with the hippest gifts and now an old battered diary?' she asked.

Lily shrugged her shoulders.

Isabella got a nice wallet.

'Oye James what did you get?' Remus asked.

'Another note. But am not using it anymore' he said.

Peter raised his eyebrows.

'I want to impress her in my style now' he said.

And Sirius started laughing.

'She will hate it then!' he said.

James glared at him.

'I got a owl feather!' Peter said annoyed.

And all of them laughed.

'A feather in a nicely wrapped box?' Sirius asked between his fit of laughter.

Remus got a set of nice expensive quills.

And Sirius got a cologne.

Later when Lily was alone in her room , she took out the diary and wrote her name in it.

Lily Evans

And just then….something else was visible on the parchment.

It read : Hey

It then struck Lily it was conversation diary.

Excited that she was chatting with her Secret Santa, she wrote:

R u my secret santa?
Yup.

Well….thanx a lottt for those gifts ...they are awesome!

Glad you liked them.....

But how did you know that I like teddy bears or the pages in my journal are over?

Hmm….could that be a secret that I can keep to myself?
sure. But..umm….may I know who you are?
Tomorrow. I will givr you your last gft, you'll recognize me then.

Yeah. But I really want to know.

Isn't that like breaking the rules? N I don think tht Miss goody-2-shoes wud like to do that!
LOL. I don't mind breakin rules for once.

Well yeah. Whenever rules are made we feel duty bound to break em.

Lol….thats students urge isn't it?

So…umm…..you have a date for the ball?
No.

You want to go with me?

She thought of going with james. But then that morning she saw James talking to Tashika and she was all batting her eyelashes and all. She had to go with someone!

Sure.

Wow. Hope you aren't disappointed when you see me.

I hope not either. LOL..dont worry, apppearence doesn't matter much to me ..

Typical! Goody-2-shoes. Okahy gotta go now bye!

Lily had a date, so did James!

Edited by zoya24 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hope you gusy like this aprt.
just one last chapter remaining.
will update tom or the day after.

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