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Posted: 14 years ago
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I edited my post in Pg 1 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 1

At Rai mansion

At midnight 12,everyone alse is sleeping but there is someone who is atill awake.she was none other than arpita.she has habbit of late night chatting with her fb friends.but some one is very special among those friends.he is DR(don is ready).

Arpi is chatting with him till he asleeps

Arpi…hey DR u know na aaj poora I year ho gaya humein fb friend bane

DR..don't tell me ki hum abhi t6ak bhi sirf dost hi hai…

Arpi(blushing)..aur nahi toh kya……kya hum dost nahi hai???hehhehhe

DR..haina………hows u r dance classes going?

Arpi..awesome..abhi inn baton ka waqt hai kya.kabhi toh koi romantic baat kar liya karo…

Its now 4'o clock both r still chatting..

DR..hey dear me going ha..have to sleep.office bhi toh jaana hai na.. bye love u

Muaa

At Thakur house

"good morning mom" avi said to her mother sitting on dining table waiting for him as always

savitri ..neend khul gayi tumari?

Avi;;ya mom who actually na………

Savitri..bass bate muzhe sare excuses pata hai.toh mai khud hi samaj jaongi okk…

Avi..aww..u r best mom in this world

Savitri.avi beta aaj shaam ko office se aana ke baad muzse milna jaroor..muzhe tumse koi baat karni hai.

Avi.okk mom ,byeee love u

Avdehsh leaves for his office.he open his laptop.wide smile covered his face as he saw someone special in facebook

She is saloni.but he didn't like her name.so he call her dear or something else. She is her FACEBOOK friend and both are in love with each other. Most intresting thing is that hey didn't see each other in reality or in photo

Avdhesh reacher his office.

At Rai mansion

"no…………….." arpi screamed

arpi..how san u so this mom?

Shipra..yeh sirf mera hi nahi tumare papa ka bhi faisla hai.

Arpi…muzse pooche bina aap logo ne mere shaadi bhi fix kar di …no.never mai yeh shaadi nahi karongi

Shipra.enough arpi ..humne savitri ji ko ha bhi kar di hai.tumari shaadi hogi toh avdhesh se hi bass….

Arpi….but why?

Shipra.kyuki humare paas jyada time nahi hai

Arpi.what time??

Shipra…because u r father's company sold out.we're going through financial crises.

Arpi shocked t o hear these words

Arpi..kal shaam ko tumari shaadi hai so be ready…..

Arpi doesn't have any words to say to her mother

.she agreed……

At Thakur's house

Savitri.. aap avi beta,hum tumhe yeh batana chahte the kihumne tumara rishta pakka kar diya hai…… aur……..

Avi.wait wait.mom what r u saying?mera rishta….kyu????

Savitri..beta.un logo ne humri bahut maddad ki the jab hum musubat me the.abhi hum unki maddad kar rahe hai who finaciaol crises se guzar rahe hai

Avi.why mom????

Savitri.mai kuch nahi janti…..tumari shaadi hogi toh sirf arpita se bass…..

Avi..mom

Avdhesh loves his mother so much that he can't say no to her.so he agreed……… but he very upset as he loves salony.how can he leave her??/

Avi tried to sit in front of pc to talk to saloni but cudn't find time by putting stone on his feeling he is getting ready for his marriage

Arpita too tried to inform DR about her marriagebut can't do it because her mother ordered her to get ready in 10 mins

At Hotel classics

Arpita dressed in dulhan's dress og red colour with heavy jewellery.

Her whole family waiting for barat.

Somebody say." Baarat aa gayi."

There is huge happiness in everybody's face except arpita and avdhesh..

Shipre do arti avdhesh and invite him to come in.

Padit ji invite dulhan to came down and tied avdhesh nad arpita in pati-patni bhandan.

But avi heart is still beating for saloni and arpi's for DR


guys do comment and press like too

i'll complete my this OS in next update becoz

me leaving IF with heavy heart

miss u all guys but becoz of studies i have to go to hostel and will not able to come here but will try to come on weekends

thanks u all for loving me so much guys

will miss u alll so much

Edited by danno - 14 years ago
EAREYE thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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sharan super chatting n blushing i like more.
NidhaA thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice chapter Sharan...
Getting married to your love without knowing...hayye...how romantic...
Hope we get to see you on weekends😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow that was nice sharan.. awww u r going away to hostel. u wont get time to come once a week also kyaa

bt i agree studies r important

all the best

this was very good story
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Munniii 🤗

What is this Giving Jhatka to Jatka Queen

how can you think that you will leave IF 😡 😡 i know studies come first then anything but you can take your time and atleast come to meet us.. 😳

btw are you thinking to get rid of us then get that thought out of our mind 🤣🤣

Now Coming to my precious comment...😛

Wow how can anyone fall in love through chatting 😕 FB and romance are big headache for me...because i can't understand it 🤪🤣

Avita got married 😳

btw when is SR 🤣

Poor AviTa..dunno how they are feeling that they lost their loved one but no worry you will unite them without any jhataka 🤣


All the Best and Good Luck for your Future...always have faith on god everything he does is for your good only...😳


Love You 🤗

Edited by yoga23priya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesomme sharan !!!!!!
Arpi's habits are very much like us !!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I am just shocked !!!!!!😲😲

U r leaving IF !!!!!!!!😲😲😭😭

Ab hum kisko badnaam karenge munni !!!!!!!!!😭😭😭😭

Studies do come first..but plzz...do come on weekends...or atleast we can talk thru PM or FB !!

This shocking news made all my happiness reading ur update vanish...

Anyways..it is an awesome update !!👏👏

I guess I knw DR & Saloni...😉😉

Cont soon...


danno thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thnks so much guys for liking my work
Edited by danno - 14 years ago
danno thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: EAREYE

sharan super chatting n blushing i like more.


oye hoye
gulabo i think u too blushing na
hehehhehhehe

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