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Posted: 14 years ago
Hellooo Guys...


You must be furious for not updating for so long... Im really sorry.. Im busy a lot with loads of work. Im shifting soon. So I hope ill be regular in the forum and with my updates.


Thank you for appreciating my work...😳


Next part is posted in next post. I hope you will like it😊


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Posted: 14 years ago
Here is the next part😉

Its dedicated to my lovely shovely Jalebi aka Danno aka Sharan aka Munni😛

Love you..And will miss you my Jalebi😭 Bt come back soon😊






In the Garden,

Arpita jerked a bit. She came back to her senses and was bit embarrassed. Avdhesh , breaking the silence said, "Yeah..! I know how you can take of yourself!!! That's why I said Let us be together and talk. We should give them more time with each other "😉

Arpita," Hmmm yeah!! As if I have any other option other than talking to you now"

Avdhesh " You know you are bit rude...! But now I have started liking people and everything which is rude" and he winked.😉

Arpita gave him a tough look to him and said "You guys are the same!! Im not like other girls..So stop flirting with me.."

Avdhesh, "Oh..Ok ..lioness!!! No flirting...I get it!!...Can we be friends?"

Arpita "No and never...I don't trust people easily...I have only one friend and Im happy"

Avdhesh, "Thts alright. Friendships are never forced..I wont force you" Arpita thought how can a person like him be so matured sometimes...!😛

In the hall,

RV and Manjai were chit-chatting and teasing each other all the time. They already knew a lot about each other. They became more close with each other. Manjari had already fallen for RV. Whenever he looked her with love filled eyes, she used to blush. Her smile and blush itself made RV more confident that she loved him.

It was 11pm and getting late for the girls. RV understood Manjari's uneasiness since it was getting late.

Manjari told him "RV, I think ..Its getting late..So we should leave now...Dad must be worried"

RV unknowingly asked her, " Cant you stay for few minutes more ?"

He wanted to tell her that she can go but his heart didn't let him say this. What his heart felt, it came on his lips. Manjari was surprised. Her eyes shone more with happiness as though she wanted to hear the same. Realising what he said , Rv quickly corrected him and said "Oh..Um...I mean...yes...I think its late..Ill call up Avi and We will drop you girls.

Manjari, "Oh No...We bought the car with us. Don't worry, we will go home alone"

RV refused.. "Let me drop you. Its late and not safe. In this way, we can spend more time together. Avi will drop Arpi and I think even he wants to drop her" Manjari agreed. Manjari went in RV's car and Avdhesh went in Arpita's car.

In RV's car,

Manjari was tensed about Arpita and Avdhesh being in the same car. 😆Arpita had told in her ear while she was sitting in RV car-"Manjari.. I dnt want to go with him but still im going just for you..!" She prayed that Arpita should not fight with him. Manjari said to RV-" Its ok if Avi dropped Arpi but Rv..you know when they both are together, they fight. They literally put house on fire."😆

RV assuring her- "Don't worry dear..They will be fine. You know sometimes fights make would be lovers more close. They wont fight."😳

Manjari- "I hope so"

While in Arpita's car,

Avdhesh was driving her car which was not liked by her but still she agreed because of Manjari. She was qiet and bit irritated too.. Avdhesh wanted to speak with her. The moment he wanted to speak, her cell phone rang. There were continuously ten misscalls from an unknown number. It tensed her. Avdhesh noticed sudden change on her face.

He asked her- "Some problem?"

Arpita who was lost thinking about the miscalls said"Ummm..no...can you drop me as fast as possible??"

Avdhesh-"Yeah sure...no problem"

They reached her home. Avdhesh bid goodbye to her and gestured her to smile to which she smiled and bid goodbye. Her smile made him blush. 😳

RV dropped Manjari home. They exchanged few more glances. Love was clearly seen their eyes. They bid goodbye to each other. Both of them were looking back each time as if they wanted to say something but they couldn't say.

RV picked up Avdhesh on the way... Both of them knowingly or unknowingly were falling for the girls.

[ Khabar nahi starts playing in the background]

[Kis taraf hai aasman...kis taraf zameen khabar nahin...]

Avdhesh remembers her smile when she went inside her home. Their super cute moments in the garden, the moment he hold her by her waist, He was lost in her beauty...He didn't knew why he liked her so much even though she is so rude to him. Never has anyone been rude to him in his life. But he doesn't know why his lips get stitched when she speaks to him like that and also he cant stop looking at her...

[Jabse aya hai sanam..mujhko khudki bhi khabar nahi...hosh gul, Sapno Ki Mein bandhu pull, Aankh Kab Khuli..khabar nahi]


Meanwhile RV remembers his and Manjari's moments...He looked at the watch and blushed. Avdhesh broke the silence... He was also in deep thoughts.

Avdhesh said-" Rv bro...! Life becomes beautiful when you are in love ? That too true love.. Sometimes you just think about the person whom you love..You can remember or concentrate on other important matters...why? "

RV- "Yeah..beacause that person and love becomes most important and priority to you..why did you ask??"

Avdhesh-" Nah..nothing like that.. I just asked..The weather is too romantic..!"

RV-" Hmmm..."

Both of them again lost in their world😍 The world of Love...where there is happiness, but for Avdhesh, storm is yet to come...

Arpita called Manjari after her dinner. Arpita is excited tone-" Manjjjariii...How was your date??? Ooopppss meeting with RV????"😛

Manjari ,shyly- "Hmm..it was good"😳

Arpita-" You are happy?"

Manjari, blushing-" Yes...I cant describe this feeling Arpi..."

Arpita assuring her-"My baby is in love...You are happy..then I am happy...RV is a wonderful person... Just tell him about your feelings.. "

Manjari-" Nooo... I cant say ya..!! My lips get tied when he looks at me "☺️

Arpita teasingly said-" oh hooo... Finally there is someone who can shut your mouth...hehehahaha"😆

Manjari started teasing Arpita-" Stop pulling my leg.!.waise how was your time with Avi"

Arpita couldn't say anything... She remembered the miss calls and got tensed. "Ummm..it was ok.. "

Manjari-" What happened everything is fine?? You have to tell me.. I know you will refuse now. I know you don't want to make me tensed now. But I want to know what happened"

Arpita-" I got miscalls from an unknown number again and those flower bouquets... Im getting scared"

Manjari assuring her-" Chill girl... It must be a prank"

Meanwhile Arpita's father called her. Arpita-"Gotta go Manjari...Dad is calling..Speak to you later..Love you..Good Night"

Manjari-" Good Night love"

Manjari assured her by saying that those were miscalls and bouquets were a prank since she didn't want Arpita to get tensed much, but her heart hinted something very bad is about to happen.

While in Arpita's room,

Their servant Ramu Kaka handed over a courier to Arpita. It was for her. There was no information about the sender. It was weird. She opened the parcel. There was gift for her. It was a heart shaped marble on which "I Love you" was engraved. There was a beautiful design carved on its sides. There was a note with it.

It read-

"Darling,

Don't be mad at me please for sending you flowers and gift. Its my way of telling you how much I love you. Im here for you. Im Sorry. Im apologizing for my previous small mistakes. I wont do it again. Please accept my apology. I hope you liked the gift. I made it specially for you. I have always loved you sweetheart and will love you always. I want to meet you as soon as possible. Love you my only love.

Im yours forever From Your Love..."


She knew the handwriting and still remembers it. Her body froze. She loosen the grip and gift fell off from her hands. She was trembling. She was shell shocked.

*********************End of Part 6*************************

I Hope you liked it..

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Edited by prash_t - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
*Edited*

GJ

Bear Hugs for you n CIC missed her GJ alots 😭 😭 😭 😭


btw me first
Now don't be surprised because i am editing my comments

Finally I thought it's time to be back from break

Finally Coming to my Precious comments

I just loved both couples spending time with each other esp Ranjari and of course Avita too

I don't like how Arpi is behaving with Avi but i am waiting for that day when she will realize Avi true love before it is too late

Ohhh bad guy is back in Arpi life ha me loving it

Arpi dnt be worried because Avi is always there for you to fight that bad guy

Awesome update Me love it

Now Smile for me

love you 🤗


Edited by yoga23priya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Another brilliant update Prash👏
Enjoyed the song sequence...
Apt for the condition of the guys...
RV dude apne dream land se nikal kar apne dosth ki thoda madad karna...
Now who is this creep irritating Arpita...
Suspense huh...
Will wait for it to break...
Thank you for this awesome update🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
heya nice update. waiting fr the next update, i know u will not disclose so soon whose irritating Arpita, bt ek hint to chale ga. u & priya r genius in creating suspense & giving jatkaz.
Edited by MuktaJaiswal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nyc update prashu!!!!!!!😊

diss suspense is killing me !!!😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part...
Who is scarng Arpi ?????????? Is it Pappu????????
Hope Avi saves her frm him (if it's him or whoever)
RV n Manjari make a cute couple n wud stand by AVITA :)
Edited by coolguy3 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Prashu, this update is amazing. I felt like I just read the previous update before this one and everything fell in place. Avita's garden scene was very cute. Aww, Avi loves it when Arpi is rude with him, she is the most unique person that he has ever met. Manjari and RV were cute together, they have fallen in love yet they refuse to admit their feelings. But their hearts understand each other. I'm surprised Arpi let Avi drive her car and remained polite with him. Aww, he fell for her smile and went straight to dreamland. Both our guys are lost in the beautiful sensation of love. They have found their soulmate, one is in harmony while the other struggles to understand his mate. The prank calls were getting scary, Arpi feels like she is being stocked. Her ex-lover is calling and gifting her. She probably has horrible memories with him and wants to forget him. I hope she does not run across him or at least Avi should be with her. I fear her ex will harm her again. Please update soon. Love you hun!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hye Prashu,

wow finaly sumthing gud gud between our avita.
Avi had started roaming in the dreamland also ha ha.

Just hope all the probs of arpi short out soon. Wanna kill dat guy who is writing dat letter no worry avi is dere na. Bye bye
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Posted: 14 years ago
haaye meri chammka challo...
u dedicate this chap to me...wowww
love u dear
now come to chap...
as always awesome just love it...just hate arpi's past..jo use avi se door lekar ja raha hai...
but love avi;s love foe arpi...
and ranjiri.omg...love couples hehehehehe
too good
just love each part of u FF
update soon
me waiting

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