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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Eowyn

Another brilliant update Prash👏 Thnks Nidha😉

Enjoyed the song sequence...
Apt for the condition of the guys... I knw 😛
RV dude apne dream land se nikal kar apne dosth ki thoda madad karna... karega..karega..zaroor karega😳
Now who is this creep irritating Arpita...
Suspense huh... U vil get to knw him sooon😉
Will wait for it to break...
Thank you for this awesome update🤗 Welcome dear..Love ya😳




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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: MuktaJaiswal

heya nice update. waiting fr the next update, i know u will not disclose so soon whose irritating Arpita, bt ek hint to chale ga. u & priya r genius in creating suspense & giving jatkaz.



Thnks di...


U will come knw the suspense soon😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ozzyie

nyc update prashu!!!!!!!😊 thnk u dear😳


diss suspense is killing me !!!😆 hehehe..ill disclose it soon dnt wry😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: coolguy3

nice part... Thnks 😊

Who is scarng Arpi ?????????? Is it Pappu???????? Nah dear...U vil come knw abt him sooon
Hope Avi saves her frm him (if it's him or whoever) hope so😉
RV n Manjari make a cute couple n wud stand by AVITA :) sure..they will😊

Edited by prash_t - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sidda8

Prashu, this update is amazing. I felt like I just read the previous update before this one and everything fell in place. Avita's garden scene was very cute. Aww, Avi loves it when Arpi is rude with him, she is the most unique person that he has ever met. Manjari and RV were cute together, they have fallen in love yet they refuse to admit their feelings. But their hearts understand each other. I'm surprised Arpi let Avi drive her car and remained polite with him. Aww, he fell for her smile and went straight to dreamland. Both our guys are lost in the beautiful sensation of love. They have found their soulmate, one is in harmony while the other struggles to understand his mate. The prank calls were getting scary, Arpi feels like she is being stocked. Her ex-lover is calling and gifting her. She probably has horrible memories with him and wants to forget him. I hope she does not run ait across him or at least Avi should be with her. I fear her ex will harm her again. Please update soon. Love you hun!!!!!!!!!!!



Heyyyaa Siddu😳

Thnks darling😳 Yeah dear...Avi loves it...

Arpi was thinkin somethin else...nd soo..let him drive...

Hope so he doesnt come..lets waith nd watch..

Love u too hun!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Cuty16

Hye Prashu, Heyyy Rups😊

wow finaly sumthing gud gud between our avita.
Avi had started roaming in the dreamland also ha ha. hehehehe😆

Just hope all the probs of arpi short out soon. Wanna kill dat guy who is writing dat letter no worry avi is dere na. Bye bye Hope fr the best😉 Love u 😳




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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: danno

haaye meri chammka challo... haayye meri jalebi😳
u dedicate this chap to me...wowww muaah😳
love u dear
now come to chap...
as always awesome just love it...just hate arpi's past..jo use avi se door lekar ja raha hai... I knw dear...bt kya karein...
but love avi;s love foe arpi...
and ranjiri.omg...love couples hehehehehe hehe😆
too good
just love each part of u FF
update soon
me waiting
vil update soon😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hellooo Everyone😳

Thank you for such lovely comments and liking my work...😊

I dont know how Am I writing

Next part is updated in next post.

I hope you will like it😃



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Posted: 14 years ago
Here is my next update😳

This part is dedicated to kriya_Life aka Ramona😉 for everything😳

Love you dear😳






Tears came rolling down from her beautiful eyes. Crying and shivering with fear, she ran towards her father's room.😭😭

"Dad……….He …..is ….coming"

MC Rai got worried. "What happened my dear?" Arpita was crying a lot. "Dad..He..He… he…is coming again..He will hurt me again…." said Arpita while crying. She showed him the note.

MC Rai wiped her tears and calmed her down. He said politely, "Beta…don't worry. He won't be able to do anything. Im there.." He consoled her more and made her sleep in his room as he knew she might need him anytime. In her sleep, she kept blabbering.. "He is coming..He will hurt me"

Days passed like wind. Arpita's condition worsened with time. She used to sit in her room, always thinking about her past. She used to have nightmares. She didn't attend meeting also. It seemed as if she had cut off ties from the world. She still got gifts and notes from him. Her sudden disappearance worried Avdhesh. He didn't know whom to ask😕. He couldn't ask Manjari because she had to go for an urgent trip to her native place. She didn't know the condition of Arpita. But then, He called Arpita, but there was no reply from her.

After few days,

Manjari came at Arpita's place unknown of her condition. She was shocked to see Arpita like that.

"Arpi…….What happened? What have you done to yourself??" But she didn't reply. MC Rai told everything to Manjari about his gifts, notes. It was Manjari only who can console her.

Manjari said her, "Baby, don't worry. Nothing will happen to you. We all are there with you. Now come on..open the windows and let sunlight come. We will go out…" She helped Arpita stand up and get ready. Arpita needed a ray of light, a ray of hope but she couldn't get it. How much ever she tries to get it, it becomes unreachable. Manjari took her for a long drive so as to divert her mind. She deceided to be with Arpita for few days since it will help her to recover more. On the other hand, Avdhesh asked whereabouts of Arpita many times but Manjari replied that she has gone to her native place. With that his restlessness to talk, to hear, to see her increased with each passing day. *awww….*Whereas, RV wanted to propose Manjari but couldn't do so.😉

On one night,

Arpita was staring at the black silent sky, recollecting her past. She wanted to forget them and move on in her life, but it didn't happen. Those memories did haunt her everytime. The silence was killing her from within. With each second her nightmares were turning into reality, she thought. She was recovering very slowly. Then, Her cellphone buzzed. She heard a familiar voice when she picked up the call- "Heyyy!!" She didn't knew why there was relief, a kind of satisfaction, a kind of happiness in her. 😊

She answered, "Hi" The other voice asked, "Ummm..How are you?"

She answered with big pause, "Fi……ne" The voice was not convinced whether she was telling truth to it. It asked again, "Are you sure?? Your voice doesn't seem so." 😉She replied controlling back her tears, "No.. Im fine". The voice said, "Ok…. You didn't come from many days so asked you and was worried."

She said, "Hmm..thnks Avdhesh"😍

*It was Avi…whom did you think the voice might be?*

Avdhesh said, "You are welcome. Please take care of yourself. And come back soon..Bye" His restlessness to hear her voice was evident from his voice. He had closed eyes eyes when he heard her voice, trying to feel her closeness. Arpita said, "Bye."😳 The time she disconnected the call, she couldn't hold back her tears. She sobbed again. Avdhesh knew that something was wrong with her. Her voice confirmed it all. He knew, she was holding back her tears. He wanted to meet her as soon as possible but he couldn't find any way. Finally he deceided to call Manjari.

"Heyy Manjari, could you please arrange my meeting with her?? Pleeease".😛 Manjari was not able to answer Avdhesh since she didn't want to refuse him as even she wanted Avdhesh and Arpita to be together. She reluctantly answered, "Avi..She is damn busy. She is busy with her father's work. So, maybe she wont come with me also.Im sorry." He was confused-" Impossible !! I called her Manjari just few moments ago..Her silence said something else. You are hiding something from me."

Manjari didn't know wht to say-" No..No.. Avi. Im not hiding. She must be busy. So she didn't speak with you. Don't worry after few days she will be there. I have some work Avi.. I will call you up later. Bye.." and she disconnected the call as she couldn't face Avi more. It is difficult to lie him since he catches lie fast. While Avdhesh couldn't understand what to do at this moment. He was blank. He wasn't able to concentrate on the project these days. It was his and Arpita's delegates who were carrying out the remaining project structure. RV had tried to make him understand but all in vain. Suddenly something stroke him. He thought, "Is there a connection between her sadness which was present in her eyes and her present condition?" He deceided to find out the problem by himself.*Go..Go...my tiger😉*

In Rai mansion and on the same night,

Arpita and Manjari were having their dinner in Arpita's room. Manjari said calmly, "Arpi…You don't need to take so much tension. I know what are going through. But then dear difficulties are part of life. We cant go away from them. We have to face them. Once you were weak Arpi. This time you have to be strong. Be strong and face it. Trust me sweetie… we all are there with you as your support.No one can harm you. Now chill and smile." Manjari's encouraging words made her smile and she felt some relief. 😊

Arpita was trying to sleep when her cellphone buzzed again.This time she became nervous again. The call was from an unknown number. She picked up the call.

The voice said, "Heyyy Hottie…! How are you? Waiting for my call??"😡

Fear gripped her, her throat went dry..She wasn't able to speak.😭😭

Arpita finally spoke, "Ra……aj…..ve……er"😡😡😡

Terror was clearly seen in her eyes!😭😭

**************************End of Part 7***********************

Thats the seventh update by me😊

I hope you liked it😊 I hope I did justice to the story😊

Please let me know your views and comments.

If u liked it,plz hit the "like" button

Waiting for your reviews.

Edited by prash_t - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Prashuu

Wow yaar wat a UD love it,,,

Awww Avi is so restless to meet Arpi ,
Come on yaar let him meet her , at least bechari Arpi ko rone ke liye soild sholder mil jayega n then aane do us villain Rajveer ko
Our tiger will handle him well.

Waiting for next yaar
Impatiently ..
Love you n ur ud both. 🤗
Edited by joliefille - 14 years ago

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