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Rules to nominate:

For FF:
Most Romantic Scene
Best Jhatka ( It means twist)
Best Emotional Scene
For OS
Best Scene
2) You have to nominate atleast 4 scenes from all the categories FF/OS
3) For nominating scenes, you just have to write categories and scene's number.
4) For eg. For Best romantic Scene You want to vote 3 , 4 and 5 scenes..
You have to write Best romantic Scene: 3, 4 , 5 nd same thing with other categories too
5) Last Date to nominate is 25th April 2011
6) You cant nominate your own FF/OS
Here are the nomination list:
For Fan-Fiction
Romantic scenes
1)
He pulled Arpi closer to him & focused completely on her. Arpi however was still avoiding his gaze. Few strands of hair were falling on her face.. He gently moved them aside whilst touching her cheek & neck. She felt ticklish and pushed his hands away. Avi smiled at her and whispered in her ears, "You are so Beautiful !!"
2)
Something make him angry suddenly he almost throw her n again drag toward himself ,he shaked her badly n almost throw her on pillar, parting her from rest of party n people, he put his hands around her on pillar came close as much as he can n his breaths start touching arpi's face, it make her scared .
3)
Avdhesh woke up then came inside and gently wrap his arm around her petite waist..he started kissing her neck...
"Pari, you don't need make up..you are angel..no matter how you dressed you always take my breath"he said while she was blushing.
"i love you jaanu and i can't live without you"she said and hugged him and he felt a strange feeling in within.as if he was in top of the world..
4)
Avi-"I told you I don't want to see you like that, how could you do that to yourself, it hurts, can't you get it."
Arpi was speechless that's what she want to say but he said that and before she can utter a word he grabbed her by waist and hugged her tightly as he don't want to loose her, she hugged him back that's what she want to do since the moment he fall by her side.
5)
His touch, caused shiver in her body'wind blows hard causing their hair to swing'he places the bangles on her fingers and gently pushes one after another on to her wrist'they both are equally lost in each others eyes now'he completes the work without breaking any bangle'but still lost in her'
Arpitha is equally lost in him and thinking to her'.who is he? Why is she becoming so weak like this? What is this feeling that is worrying her, yet instantly causing her happiness'his hold was very gentle'as if he cared a lot for her'his eyes spoke to her'they tried to tell her something that her heart understood very well, but her brain didn't
6)
While she was thinking about him, to her surprise, she felt his lips touching her back just below her shoulder. She looked in the mirror & saw him putting his hands around her waist. She wanted to protest, but something stopped her from doing so.
Avdhesh gently pushed her hair aside & brushed his lips on her slender neck. That kiss was enough to bring her out of her thoughts.7)
She stared in shock, but quickly lost all sane thoughts as the kiss meant to punish softened. She closed her eyes, and her arms encircled his's neck then kissed him back.
he lift her gently from chair then placed on couch then started kissing her throat, behind her ears his lips left a trail of soft butterfly kisses which sent shivers down her spine. His hands began to fumble on the buttons of her dress, opening them hurriedly,but stopped it then look in to her mesmerizing eyes then Avdhesh realize their position kissed her lips lightly got up from her and arrange his clothes.
8)
Arpi start the song, "Aayi meri subha hasti hasati, boli aake mere liye sandesa hai,han hai"
They start moving n she force him to sing male part of song, this time she didn't need to force him much as he was waiting for his part, she swing in his arms like delicate n beautiful rose. After dancing on the same song almost five time she says
9)
There was silence in the room.
"Avdhesh.. where are you?"
Still no response from him. Arpita slowly moved behind & She bumped into his hard chest. Avi quickly put his hands around her waist & held her protectively in his arms.
"Im here Arpita. I'm here. Don't worry. I will never you alone."
10)
Awdesh (slow and silent)'"Because, I LOVE you'"
Arpitha closed her eyes in happiness'Tears escaped from her eyes'Avdhesh watched her'Arpitha opened her love filled eyes with tears of joy'Avdhesh nodded his head in a no and wiped away her tears'Arpitha hugged him tight and cried out in happiness'Avdhesh held her tight in his arms and closed his eyes'He held her as if, she would be stolen from her, if left her.
11)
Avi's lap but this time she was not scared of him or her state, bz last night she find the real Avi, she didn't noticed but she was lost in his innocent face, after a while he woke up they didn't noticed or don't want to notice that they were lost in each other's eyes.
12)
Arpitha turned to awdesh and watching him stare at her, she smiled in shyness'She turned around and started to walk away'Avddesh pulled her towards him and held her in his arms'Arpitha's heart beat increased'She looked at him'his eyes spoke to her's'They were searching for something'
Avdhesh lifted her chin and touched her lips with his'
Avdhesh'"you are mine forever...and ever"

Jhatka Scene/ Best Twist
1)
He walked towards Arpita. He had a look that scared her. His lips curved into a smile. 'No. not a smile, a smirk.' Arpi was very scared. She knew there was something going on in his mind. Avdhesh took off his shirt & threw it on the floor.
2)
Avi whole world crashed when he heard Arpita is getting engaged, but to whom, why? He quickly composes himself and said-"Arshika, itni saari khushkhabriyaa, muh meetha nahi karaogi!"
3)
"Mom I missed you"a small voice said and then hugged Arpitha also she hugged him back. She was barely aware that she was shaking so hard.
"I-I missed you, too, Nihal'" And before she could stop herself, the tears started to fall, and she broke into uncontrollable sobs.
Avdhesh and Sheila looked eye widened stood there in stunned.
4)
When from somewhere a bullet was shot and pierced into the flesh and sent out the blood'his sight started to blur'the world around him started to faint its color'Awdesh was shot in his abdomen'Arpitha turned around in fright and wished all this to be her worst nightmare and not reality'Awdesh was on the ground trying hard to breath'Arpitha stood motionless'
5)
" I Need Divorce Pari" Avdhesh said firmly.
"It isn't my idea, but Sheila's. Of course, it's natural, you're almost sisters, so I agreed. And anyway, about our'relationship, I say, that is why I came here in the first place. I want a divorce. You surely would not want to mix business with our personal troubles, I say? That would be highly unprofessional on your side'"
6)
But his happiness proved to be momentary only, as he opens his eyes he saw Arpita standing in front of him, with tearful eyes, she was looking helplessly at him with someone else in his arms, the only thing in Avi's mind was if Arpita was there then who was in his arms?

Emotional Scene
1)
"Will you shut up and Don't shout at me"seeing only her Jaanu "Y-you have no right to do this no right to reprove what you have done to me not after what you did " her voice had so pain and hurt that soften the Avdhesh face "not after we went to our separate life and i won't allow you to take my baby from me please i beg you and you can't take him from me" Her tears started falling uncontrollably.
2)
The familiar voice made her realize that it's not her husband but it is avdesh who has landed up on her wedding night. She started crying and begged him to leave her as she is married now, avdesh went near to her and collapsed to the floor.
3)
Avi-"what the hell is your problem? Why are you poking your nose everywhere? That's my personal matter, and I m strong enough to deal with it, I don't want your sympathy,
You poor fellow I m not like you, always second in life, no one can ditch Avdhesh singh thakur "
His words hurt her deeply, she just want to know, why some times she can see an ocean of pain and unrest in his eyes, she just want to help, but this time she was deeply hurt, she realized that in that unconscious state she opened her tender feelings and secret to a wrong person, again she choose wrong one to help , to be friend, tears came in her eyes but this time she hide it or her anger hide it,
4)
He wipes away the tears from her face'and holds his stomach in pain'
Arpitha'"Avdhesh ji'look at me'open your eyes'Please'no'"
Avdhesh closed his eyes slowly with Arpitha's picture captured in his eyeball...
5)
"Don't you ever question me again. I hate people doing that. Get one thing very clear Arpita, I LOVE YOU. I LOVE YOU very much. You are MINE and will always be mine and don't make me repeat myself." He left her. He calmed himself and told her to leave. Arpita who was on the verge of crying, controlled herself
6)
Avdhesh was shocked and speech less to see Arpita tears flowing from her loving eyes and see her tear he felt a sharp pang in his heart, he want to take her and locked her in his protective arms then take way her pain but before he could take a step a voice made them him come back again in reality and it was kind of nightmare.
7)
She again begged him to leave but he forced her to leave with him, meanwhile ranvijay entered the room and tells avdesh that he can't share arpi with him anymore, as he wants privacy for his wedding night. Avdesh whispered that "i can not share her too", leaving arpita cry on his statement, He bids Audie to them and left the house telling ranvijay to take care of arpita.
8)
"Hey S--Son" he wanted to kick himself for shuttering but quickly composed himself and said " I am sorry we met in this way and i didn't know about you but next time i may come to your home or take you to my home where you can meet your grand mother and everyone " On that Avdhesh Singh Thakur cried never liked before after that faithful day, then he hugged him and ruffled his hair.

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