Nomination List: FF/OS Awards

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Hiya Everyone...🤗

Thanks to everyone who write Fan-Fiction and OS...You all are great writers👏..
Its time to acknowledge them for their hard work. So...Here is GKD's FF and OS Awards
All you have to do is nominate scenes as per your choice.




Rules to nominate:



1) You have to nominate for following categories:

For FF:

Most Romantic Scene

Best Jhatka ( It means twist)

Best Emotional Scene

For OS

Best Scene

2) You have to nominate atleast 4 scenes from all the categories FF/OS

3) For nominating scenes, you just have to write categories and scene's number.

4) For eg. For Best romantic Scene You want to vote 3 , 4 and 5 scenes..

You have to write Best romantic Scene: 3, 4 , 5 nd same thing with other categories too

5) Last Date to nominate is 25th April 2011

6) You cant nominate your own FF/OS


Here are the nomination list:

For Fan-Fiction


Romantic scenes



1)


He pulled Arpi closer to him & focused completely on her. Arpi however was still avoiding his gaze. Few strands of hair were falling on her face.. He gently moved them aside whilst touching her cheek & neck. She felt ticklish and pushed his hands away. Avi smiled at her and whispered in her ears, "You are so Beautiful !!"


2)


Something make him angry suddenly he almost throw her n again drag toward himself ,he shaked her badly n almost throw her on pillar, parting her from rest of party n people, he put his hands around her on pillar came close as much as he can n his breaths start touching arpi's face, it make her scared .


3)


Avdhesh woke up then came inside and gently wrap his arm around her petite waist..he started kissing her neck...

"Pari, you don't need make up..you are angel..no matter how you dressed you always take my breath"he said while she was blushing.

"i love you jaanu and i can't live without you"she said and hugged him and he felt a strange feeling in within.as if he was in top of the world..


4)


Avi-"I told you I don't want to see you like that, how could you do that to yourself, it hurts, can't you get it."

Arpi was speechless that's what she want to say but he said that and before she can utter a word he grabbed her by waist and hugged her tightly as he don't want to loose her, she hugged him back that's what she want to do since the moment he fall by her side.


5)


His touch, caused shiver in her body'wind blows hard causing their hair to swing'he places the bangles on her fingers and gently pushes one after another on to her wrist'they both are equally lost in each others eyes now'he completes the work without breaking any bangle'but still lost in her'

Arpitha is equally lost in him and thinking to her'.who is he? Why is she becoming so weak like this? What is this feeling that is worrying her, yet instantly causing her happiness'his hold was very gentle'as if he cared a lot for her'his eyes spoke to her'they tried to tell her something that her heart understood very well, but her brain didn't


6)


While she was thinking about him, to her surprise, she felt his lips touching her back just below her shoulder. She looked in the mirror & saw him putting his hands around her waist. She wanted to protest, but something stopped her from doing so.

Avdhesh gently pushed her hair aside & brushed his lips on her slender neck. That kiss was enough to bring her out of her thoughts.


7)


She stared in shock, but quickly lost all sane thoughts as the kiss meant to punish softened. She closed her eyes, and her arms encircled his's neck then kissed him back.

he lift her gently from chair then placed on couch then started kissing her throat, behind her ears his lips left a trail of soft butterfly kisses which sent shivers down her spine. His hands began to fumble on the buttons of her dress, opening them hurriedly,but stopped it then look in to her mesmerizing eyes then Avdhesh realize their position kissed her lips lightly got up from her and arrange his clothes.


8)


Arpi start the song, "Aayi meri subha hasti hasati, boli aake mere liye sandesa hai,han hai"

They start moving n she force him to sing male part of song, this time she didn't need to force him much as he was waiting for his part, she swing in his arms like delicate n beautiful rose. After dancing on the same song almost five time she says


9)


There was silence in the room.

"Avdhesh.. where are you?"

Still no response from him. Arpita slowly moved behind & She bumped into his hard chest. Avi quickly put his hands around her waist & held her protectively in his arms.

"Im here Arpita. I'm here. Don't worry. I will never you alone."


10)


Awdesh (slow and silent)'"Because, I LOVE you'"

Arpitha closed her eyes in happiness'Tears escaped from her eyes'Avdhesh watched her'Arpitha opened her love filled eyes with tears of joy'Avdhesh nodded his head in a no and wiped away her tears'Arpitha hugged him tight and cried out in happiness'Avdhesh held her tight in his arms and closed his eyes'He held her as if, she would be stolen from her, if left her.


11)


Avi's lap but this time she was not scared of him or her state, bz last night she find the real Avi, she didn't noticed but she was lost in his innocent face, after a while he woke up they didn't noticed or don't want to notice that they were lost in each other's eyes.


12)


Arpitha turned to awdesh and watching him stare at her, she smiled in shyness'She turned around and started to walk away'Avddesh pulled her towards him and held her in his arms'Arpitha's heart beat increased'She looked at him'his eyes spoke to her's'They were searching for something'

Avdhesh lifted her chin and touched her lips with his'

Avdhesh'"you are mine forever...and ever"




Jhatka Scene/ Best Twist


1)


He walked towards Arpita. He had a look that scared her. His lips curved into a smile. 'No. not a smile, a smirk.' Arpi was very scared. She knew there was something going on in his mind. Avdhesh took off his shirt & threw it on the floor.


2)


Avi whole world crashed when he heard Arpita is getting engaged, but to whom, why? He quickly composes himself and said-"Arshika, itni saari khushkhabriyaa, muh meetha nahi karaogi!"


3)


"Mom I missed you"a small voice said and then hugged Arpitha also she hugged him back. She was barely aware that she was shaking so hard.

"I-I missed you, too, Nihal'" And before she could stop herself, the tears started to fall, and she broke into uncontrollable sobs.

Avdhesh and Sheila looked eye widened stood there in stunned.


4)


When from somewhere a bullet was shot and pierced into the flesh and sent out the blood'his sight started to blur'the world around him started to faint its color'Awdesh was shot in his abdomen'Arpitha turned around in fright and wished all this to be her worst nightmare and not reality'Awdesh was on the ground trying hard to breath'Arpitha stood motionless'


5)


" I Need Divorce Pari" Avdhesh said firmly.

"It isn't my idea, but Sheila's. Of course, it's natural, you're almost sisters, so I agreed. And anyway, about our'relationship, I say, that is why I came here in the first place. I want a divorce. You surely would not want to mix business with our personal troubles, I say? That would be highly unprofessional on your side'"


6)


But his happiness proved to be momentary only, as he opens his eyes he saw Arpita standing in front of him, with tearful eyes, she was looking helplessly at him with someone else in his arms, the only thing in Avi's mind was if Arpita was there then who was in his arms?


Emotional Scene


1)


"Will you shut up and Don't shout at me"seeing only her Jaanu "Y-you have no right to do this no right to reprove what you have done to me not after what you did " her voice had so pain and hurt that soften the Avdhesh face "not after we went to our separate life and i won't allow you to take my baby from me please i beg you and you can't take him from me" Her tears started falling uncontrollably.


2)


The familiar voice made her realize that it's not her husband but it is avdesh who has landed up on her wedding night. She started crying and begged him to leave her as she is married now, avdesh went near to her and collapsed to the floor.


3)


Avi-"what the hell is your problem? Why are you poking your nose everywhere? That's my personal matter, and I m strong enough to deal with it, I don't want your sympathy,

You poor fellow I m not like you, always second in life, no one can ditch Avdhesh singh thakur "

His words hurt her deeply, she just want to know, why some times she can see an ocean of pain and unrest in his eyes, she just want to help, but this time she was deeply hurt, she realized that in that unconscious state she opened her tender feelings and secret to a wrong person, again she choose wrong one to help , to be friend, tears came in her eyes but this time she hide it or her anger hide it,


4)


He wipes away the tears from her face'and holds his stomach in pain'

Arpitha'"Avdhesh ji'look at me'open your eyes'Please'no'"

Avdhesh closed his eyes slowly with Arpitha's picture captured in his eyeball...


5)


"Don't you ever question me again. I hate people doing that. Get one thing very clear Arpita, I LOVE YOU. I LOVE YOU very much. You are MINE and will always be mine and don't make me repeat myself." He left her. He calmed himself and told her to leave. Arpita who was on the verge of crying, controlled herself


6)


Avdhesh was shocked and speech less to see Arpita tears flowing from her loving eyes and see her tear he felt a sharp pang in his heart, he want to take her and locked her in his protective arms then take way her pain but before he could take a step a voice made them him come back again in reality and it was kind of nightmare.


7)


She again begged him to leave but he forced her to leave with him, meanwhile ranvijay entered the room and tells avdesh that he can't share arpi with him anymore, as he wants privacy for his wedding night. Avdesh whispered that "i can not share her too", leaving arpita cry on his statement, He bids Audie to them and left the house telling ranvijay to take care of arpita.


8)


"Hey S--Son" he wanted to kick himself for shuttering but quickly composed himself and said " I am sorry we met in this way and i didn't know about you but next time i may come to your home or take you to my home where you can meet your grand mother and everyone " On that Avdhesh Singh Thakur cried never liked before after that faithful day, then he hugged him and ruffled his hair.



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Posted: 14 years ago
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Continuation Of Nomination List


Please select only 5


OS Nomination

Best Scenes Category


1)


he mustard flowers now brought to mind the yellow saafa his father had still worn, strangely not a pleat out of place, as his lifeless body lay sprawled across the road. The vibrant red of the setting sun now reminded him of nothing but his brother's blood as it had stained his snow white kurta and the sindoor in his Bhouji's maang, that the old ladies had tried their best to wipe clean, that fateful summer afternoon. Yes, at all of twelve years, Avadesh had been a child no more.


2)


"i mean you always ordered two Cup of Coffee and so i thought you are waiting for your boy friend " he spat venously word Arpitha understood.

"oh that the person I was waiting for is...YOU" he was shocked then she clasped his hand and walked out of cafe.

"The reason i came to cafe everyday was to see you" she said and pulled his collar and kissed him once again.


3)


Prashu was cleaning her closet. While doing so she found all those letters & gifts that Priya had gifted her. Tears rolled down her cheeks. Even though she decided to end her relationship with Priya she just couldn't get her out of her mind. She still loved Priya. She loved her very much. Prashu wept bitterly.

"I love you Priya. I love you very much." She was holding Priya's photo close to her chest & continued crying.


4)


But she would not be deterred, she would not cower despite his volte-face; even though her moments of perfect happiness and bliss had been all too brief, nothing could change the fact that she was married to Avdhesh. This knowledge and certitude was her biggest strength.


5)


Yeh sach hai ki hum aapse pyaar karte hain....He had picked up the sheet of paper gingerly, not knowing that within a space of few seconds, it would change his life. Such simple , straightforward words...yeh such hai ki hum aapse pyaar karte hain...yet so infinitely powerful. They had been enough to magically ease the pain around his heart, to instantly relieve the constriction...for a moment his heart had soared on a cloud of elation...


6)


It is funny how he realized this, only after she was gone. Only after she left.

He wouldn't be able to see her smile. Won't be able to see her shining black eyes, that shone like a jewel. He would never be able to see her innocence. He would never be able to hear her melodic voice.

He also realized, he can never forget her and he had no reason to live because his Pari left him.

So he took gun from the ground then shoot himself and Everyone there was stunned to see Avdhesh Singh Thakur committing suicide as he was shot himself, he smiled. He will be with her again. In heaven.


7)


"Why do you stay here? You could be out there with your friends. People who won't ignore you." She simply sat there stunned, this was the first time he ever spoke. The same to the student outside the classroom who was hidden from view.

"Why are you smiling?" Avdhesh asked, Arpitha stunned face turned to a goofy smile.

"You talked." She said, he raised his eyebrow at her.

"And that's an achievement?" She nodded, slightly blushing.

"I wanted to hear you talk, and now that you did. I'm really happy." She said, he looked away from her, confused.


8)


Awdesh lifted her chin and examined her broad little eyes...that fitted well in her perfectly carved face...He came forward and planted a warm kiss on her cheek bone...

Arpitha blushed in happiness and hugged him...

Awdesh opened up his arms, allowing the hug to accomplish...

Awdesh--"I love you Arpitha..."

Arpitha--"I love you too awdeshji..."


9)


"I Don't Believe you and please do me favour get out of my life" he said her while brushing tears from her eyes.

"I-I talked t-to a m-man saying that h-he willl prove my i-i-inocence. All I can say is p-please trust m-me!" she cried, while crying.

"You are the lowest of the lowest. How dare you make up a stupid lie. Shut up and leave." He screamed at her.

"you are my reason for living and if you don't believe me then i don't think i have any more reason to live in this home."she said brushing her tears and left from there with her head held high.


10)


"I-I want to give it to-to you. Because I-I." 'What do I want to say?'

"Arpitha." My heart pounded so hard, I never heard him say my name before.

His deep voice was so heavenly to my ears.

"Yes?" I asked.

"I'm sorry."

"Wha-" I was interrupted by his firm, warm lips.

I was surprised.

I was shocked.

I didn't stop him though.

I didn't push him away.

Instead my arms went around his neck.

His arms around my waist, I feel so much safer in his arms.

"The reason I go to the first class is because you're there. I didn't see the point of going when you weren't in my other classes."

11)


She tried getting up but couldnt as she was very weak. "You are still weak, don't try to get up", it was Dr. Jess who was on her rounds. She stopped when she saw Priya struggling to get up. She carefully helped Priya on the bed & put the bedsheet over her. All this while, Priya just kept staring at Jessie's face. She was baffled by her beauty.


12)


I never did this in front of everyone, I never showed feeling.

With her, I want to be different.

I wanted to smile... and I did.

She looked at me, a small smile on her lips.

"You get nervous easy don't you." I said, my hand on her right shoulders, my forehead touching his.


13)


Avdesh kisses her tears off from her 1 eye and Thn Other. He kissed Her Chin, and Thn kissed her on her lips. Arpita is All Red! His bents down and kissed the side of her neck. Arpita all blushing hugged Avdesh Tightly.

14)


No roadside accident, no traffic jam, no flimsy gate had been able to hold him from reaching in time to save his Arpita...she had stood there, bottle of poison in her hand, looking like an apsara in the wedding finery. He had not needed to utter a word...her eyes had said it all. He was there and everything would be alright.


15)


It was love at first sight for her''..in an instant, she realised that her Knight in Shining Armor had finally arrived. He was there to rescue her from her claustrophobic existence, to carry her away into a land of total and complete bliss, where the two of them would create a life and love together and live happily ever after.


16)


Finding solace in each others hug, they stood there in between of the jungle, in the water touching their feet...Awdesh moved behind and placed his hand on arpitha...s cheek and tried to kiss her on her lips...Arpitha moved away shyly...

Awdesh caught her hand and pulled her back...

Awdesh--"Was i doing something wrong..."

Arpitha nods her head in a no...


17)


"Avdesh Ji Hum Se Kabhi Judha Maat Howiye! Apne Kaha Na Avdesh aur Arpita Do Jism ek Jaan Hain toh Agar Hum Apse Kabhi Bhi Judha Huwe Toh Yeh Arpita Mar Jayegi..." says Arpita but Avdesh Shuts her up by Kissing her passionately... "Marne Ki Baat Mat Kariye ! Hum Apni Jaan Ko Apne Apse Kabhi Judha Nahin Hone Denge" says Avdesh.


18)


he turned to check who it was he stood there stunned it's Avdhesh then he punched him and went to quickly near Arpitha to check whether she was okay or not.

Arpitha noticed that Ranvijay was about shoot Avdhesh on his back so she pushed him down then bullet hit on her chest and

she felled from terrace and

lay in a pool covered by blood.


19)


At first, the twelve year old boy could not go past the vision of that corner of the road where they had taken him to witness his brother and father, lying in a pool of blood. Each time he closed his eyes, he was transported to that moment in time when he had stared at them in horrified fascination, for a full minute, before turning around and running to the hedges and throwing up. His world had, as though, been recalibrated to a new normal. Things that had held beautiful meanings for him, had given him pleasure, suddenly reminded him of nothing but horrific memories.


20)


Arpitha were are you going?" i asked her while still holding her hand,

"Hmm my friends are waiting for me,so i have to leave see you later " Apritha said she began to walk but i caught her arm then pulled her towards me then wrapped my arms around her waist and kissed her, i thought she will pull away but she wrap her hands on my neck and she kissed back.i looked at my angel and there was so happiness in her eyes and i knew it's now or never.


21)


"If I don't hurry, I'll be late!" I ran all the way down the street. Another tardy, please don't let the teacher be in a bad mood today. I ran to up the stairs and hit somebody...

"Watch where you're go-" The guy's voice stopped, I got up and rubbed my head. "You all right?" He asked.

"Yeah, I am really sorry." I said, I looked at his face. It was like his eyes could see right through me, but also inside me. I felt my cheeks turn warm.


22)


Tiny yellow flowers of the mustard plants stretched as far south as the eye could see, bobbing their little heads in time to the beat of the gentle breeze. But the flowers were not what beckoned the eight year old boy- his innocent face would instead, light up at the sight of the hundreds of butterflies that fluttered over the flowers. He would try to stealthily creep up on one butterfly that had stopped its incessant fluttering and was resting on the flower. Slowly he would stretch out his hand to catch it but at the last moment it would become aware of the danger and fly off




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Edited by prash_t - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nice thought darling..........and thanks for nominating my workkk.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#4
good one

ok based on this i wud ans bt just one question

wudnt it hv been better if u had not named the person or the title of the ffs

that way ppl likeme wud guess and ans

hmm?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey Prashuuuuuu love ya for nominating FF/OS 🤗

All the best for all the writer and hope the best win....here is my votes in purple 😳

For Fan-Fiction


Romantic scenes



4) 6) 10) 12)





Jhatka Scene/ Best Twist


1) 2) 4) 6 )


Emotional Scene


4) 5) 6) 7)


Edited by yoga23priya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#6
ok listen i think i wud exempt myself from voting for anyone
as for me all r good and since i hvnt read any fully so it wont be fair on my part to say this is good or that is good

all of u have done excellent job with ffs and os


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: chatterbox

ok listen i think i wud exempt myself from voting for anyone
as for me all r good and since i hvnt read any fully so it wont be fair on my part to say this is good or that is good

all of u have done excellent job with ffs and os




cb di

if you like any scenes just vote it according to ur fav and your vote is important di 😳


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Posted: 14 years ago
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in that case my vote goes to all 😆

but i think all scenarios r diferent and u know me i get muddled in head thats why i m exempting myself from voting

but still i think if names and titles were not given it wud hv been better



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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: chatterbox

in that case my vote goes to all 😆

but i think all scenarios r diferent and u know me i get muddled in head thats why i m exempting myself from voting

but still i think if names and titles were not given it wud hv been better





okiesss i will say prashuuu to edit it 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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my votes for OS 😳

OS Nomination

Best Scenes Category


3) 8) 14) 5 ) 18)



Edited by yoga23priya - 14 years ago

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