OS For You I stay..Part 2 (c) on page 11 Completed - Page 4

Originally posted by: Sidda8

Priya, I haven't even finished you're Os and I am loving it. You should consider writing books. You write like some of my favourite authors. I'm still in high school, so college life is just a dream for me. But thanks for giving some heads up, and I agree that RV-Arpi will never be a match made anywhere. He is so delusional. I would love to pour a bucket of water on him and wake him up. Anywayz, I'm going to go back and finish your OS. Please continue writing.

KK, I've now finished your OS. And I do love it. Funny that all the guys are shedding tears that Arpi has fallen for Avi. Poor dudes had thought they had a chance. RV was acting nonchalantly to Arpi's rejection but I guessing he is going to seek pay back. Great writing again.

Originally posted by: Vistaa

oh baba Priya, you to ara a true chupa rustum !!!! Wow man, this was really really good...wish there were some "thud" smilies. Excellent work👏👏👏 Can't wait for Avi's side of the story!!

Vista Di

Originally posted by: laxmi73

Lovely !!looking forwad to the next part.

Originally posted by: Milii

That was totally amazing Priya.....
Looooooooved it 🤗

While reading, I was just lost in this Avdesh Singh Thakur...😍
You have portrayed Arpi's feelings soo very wonderfully.

Pleeeeeeeeeeeeease continue soon dear 😃

Originally posted by: chatterbox

oiii maa another talented person

u r truly amazing chhuppa rustam

these ffs r so great i forget that they r not part of story ehhe


too good continue

but u r not well first take care of urself

get wellsoon

he he he he thanks di.....just tried something....if everyone likes then i am thinking to write a FF too...hope every1 will like it...😳

Originally posted by: _nandini

Aww Priya .... what happened dear. I was busy this weekend. Just read tht ur hospitalised 😲😲 I got scared n worried to know this. What happened ... How are u now ??

Originally posted by: laxmi73

Really good..Another super writer... I guess Avita are inspiring everyone to come out with their hidden talents!!!

Originally posted by: Milii

This part is also choooo chweeeet 😍..
Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeease continue soon...I know I'm being greedy..but kya karu control nahi hota 😉

he he he he Milii....tum mein control karna padega....for Avi's part😉

Originally posted by: komalSingh

OMG priya ur realy Chupa Rustaum of this forum I m soo glad that we such talent over here.

UR ff just rocks college romance is just too awesome,

waiting for another to come,

wonderful, superb n wat not

thanks komal....for liking it😳

Originally posted by: MonyP

😲 😲 😲 thud.....thud....thud

chuppa rustam, where were you all these days?

what have you done priya darling? OMG, what a cute love story.

👏👏👏

You got the talent girl...keep it up👍🏼

Originally posted by: -sia-

firstly dear...wanna ask u how are u feeling??..i hope u are getting better :) :)

as for the OS...awww..i loved it...college romance that too on Avita...i'm really loving it...already i'm into that dreamy imaginary world trying to picturise everything!! it's really tooo good....amazzing i must say..it reminds me off the sweet sixteen books(college romance novels)...thank u so soo much for wrinting these....it's a pleasure to read them...well done....i'm looking forward(waitng frantically..after all it's not everyday that i get to read such intersting OS!!) to read the next part!!

take care :) :)

Originally posted by: danno

omgggg priyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

chupa rustammmmmmmmmm

toooo goooooodddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd

i have no words to say..............................

it is just awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

yeh humara group ka kaamal hai danoo ji....😉

thank you sooo much for liking it😳