FF- DEEWANGEE: Ch18 'Its 8 pm on pg 55 - Page 21

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shumi.

hi romanu...nice update...i liked your writing style ....avi-arpi hug was cute it made me 😳. thanks a lot di..

btw cus i don't watch this serial except arpi and avi i am not able to get in to other characters.... oh.. no problem..
great work 👏keep it up👍🏼 thanks a lot di..

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shefads

AWESOME!..MINDBLOWING!..STUNNING! thank you so much Shehnaz. Mere words can't describe the beauty of this part! Although it was too short!!.. and i hope it was not a dream scene! No.. its not. Update soon Ramona!!⭐️

Okay..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zash_LubUKriYa

Ramona babessss. . Azi darling...
A greaaaaaat muaaaaaaaaah 4 u. muah muah....fr dis sweet update. .(sry,cnt copy d emos thru my mob)No problem darling..it ws so cute. .;-)wndrful darls. .i nvr knew dat u cn write superbly lyk dis. even I didnt know.😆.although i dnt watch dis serial n dnt knw ne character except avi n arpi,i enjoyd reading their romance!!gud gng babes. .n update sooooon na?im waiting. .



Aww... thank you darling..

I'll update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago

The Night before the storm


Chapter 9

They kept looking into each other's eyes. However, their thoughts were interrupted by the windows which opened due to the strong & gusty winds. Suddenly the lights went off. There was complete darkness. Arpita was scared of darkness. She panicked. Small drops of sweat streamed down her forehead.

Arpi- "A-Avdhesh.. a-are y-y-you there. Please don't leave me alone."

There was silence in the room.

"Avdhesh.. where are you?"

Still no response from him. Arpita slowly moved behind & She bumped into his hard chest. Avi quickly put his hands around her waist & held her protectively in his arms.

"Im here Arpita. I'm here. Don't worry. I will never you alone."

A faint smile appeared on Arpita's face. She enjoyed his presence. She knew Avdhesh wouldn't leave her alone. It seemed liked ages. Both of them stood in each other's arms.

It was almost 4 am. Arpita slowly opened her eyes. She was surprised to find herself in bed. All she remembered was that she was in Avi's arms.

"Avdhesh," she jumped out of bed & looked around, but she couldn't find him. Arpita heard some buzzing sound. She turned around & found her cell phone vibrating with the screen flashing AVDHESH. Before she could say something,

Avi- "You fell asleep in my arms that I didn't want to disturb you."

Arpita blushed. "So you left me on the bed & went away huh?"

Avi- "If I could, I would keep you in my arms. Forever.."

Arpi- "Oh Ho.. Well, Mr.Avdhesh, thank you very much. But I'd prefer sleeping on my bed."

Avi smiled, "Okay.. Now go & sleep. I want my angel to rest."

Next morning, Arpita as usual was on her way to college with RV.

RV- "Arpi, is there anything that is worrying you? I mean, Yo were quite tensed few days back.."

Arpi- "Oh Not at all RV. Im fine."

RV- "Are you sure?"

Arpi- "Yes."

RV- "Okay fine, lets go."

Both of them sit on RV's bike. Arpi put her hands on RV's shoulder just to make sure she doesn't fall. The bike jerked forward & Arpi almost fell on RV's back.

RV- "Oh Im so sorry Arpi. Are you alright?"

Arpi- "Yeah RV. Im fine. Let's go."

Unknown to them someone was quietly watching from a distance. Those eyes were dead set on Arpita.

"How could you do this Arpita? How could you?"

On reaching college, RV left Arpi outside the college & went to finish his work. Arpita began walking towards the college gate when suddenly a car stopped right in front of her. Through the tinted glass, she could see someone who brought a sweet smile on her face.

"Avdhesh"

Avi- "Get in."

Arpi- "Avdhesh.. I have to attend class."

Avi- "Your class begins at 9.00. You still have an hour. I need to talk to you. Its important."

Arpi- "Umm.. Okay."



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Edited by KriYa_life - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ramona Darling 🤗 🤗

This is soooo romantic 😍 😍 😍

he he he he i am first

my heart was beating so fast when his arms were around her waist....now what is gonna do 🤪

Stupid RV he came between them here also 😡



i love ur FF 😍

love ya sweety 🤗

PS munni i love only my Jaanu saku and don't get jealous
Edited by yoga23priya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ramonaaaaa🤗🤗


Avi☺️☺️☺️☺️

I cldnt help blushing ya😳



Oh God He got angry



Loooooooooooooooooooved it😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳


Muaaahhh






Edited by prash_t - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
DEEWANGEE begins now...

Chapter- 10

As she got in the car, Avdhesh locked the doors & drove away.

Arpi- "So.. tell me."

Avi didn't reply. He just kept driving. Arpi was perplexed.

"Okay, atleast tell me where we're going?"

Avi- "You need not know that."

Arpi was furious.

"Avdhesh, first you bring me along & then you don't even tell me anything."

Avi found his temper rising.

"Will you just shut up? One more sound & you'll regret it."

Arpi was slightly scared. She didn't know why he was behaving like that. He was different today. The Avdhesh she met last night was a completely different person. She kept thinking about the reason as to why he behaved so rudely.

He thoughts were interrupted when Avi stopped the car in front of a small cottage. It was a secluded place. Not a soul could be seen around. He got off the car & signaled Arpita to do the same.

Arpi- "Where are we? Why have we come here?"

But Avi didn't answer her. He just grasped her wrist & pulled her along.

Arpi- "Hey.. you're hurting me."

She tried to free herself but his grasp was too strong. He didn't answer her & just kept moving towards the cottage.

Once they entered, Avi pushed Arpi inside & bolted the door. Arpi fell straight on the ground. She was furious.

"What the hell do you think you're doing?"

Avi- "What were YOU doing Arpita?"

Arpita was confused. "I don't know what you're talking about."

Avi just seized her wrist & pulled her in his arms.

"You don't know what I'm talking about?"

Arpi nodded her head sideways indicating NO. She was afraid to speak.

Avi- "Really?"

Before Arpi could say anything, Avi pushed her on the Bed. Arpi's dupatta slipped down. Avi slowly made his way towards Arpita. Arpi was terrified. Tears rolled down her pink cheeks.

Arpi- "Yeh tum kya kar rahe ho?"

Avi- "How dare you touch someone else when I'm here?"

Arpi realized that Avi must have seen her with her RV.

"Avdhesh, there's nothing like that. He is just my friend."

Avi roughly pulled her hair in such a way that her head tilted back thus revealing her slender neck.

"Friend? Don't you know that I cannot tolerate anyone even talking you & still you had the audacity to touch him? Listen Arpita, I hate anyone looking you. I'll kill that person who tries to touch you. You are meant for me. Only I have a right to touch what belongs to me."

He walked towards Arpita. He had a look that scared her. His lips curved into a smile. 'No. not a smile, a smirk.' Arpi was very scared. She knew there was something going on in his mind. Avdhesh took off his shirt & threw it on the floor.

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Edited by KriYa_life - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey Ramona Darling 🤗

OMG!!!!!! what's with Avi now? he is soooooooooooooooo Jealous same as Green eyed Monster... 😲 😲 😲Poor Arpi what's gonna happen with her ? 😭 😭

ur Avi is juuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuusssssssssssssssssssssst Awesome😍 😍

Darling knowing you this is just a trailer we have to wait for the picture and btw enjoy ur trip 😳

but u r making us to wait for long time 😭 but no worries i am wait 😉





love you 🤗

Edited by yoga23priya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ramonaaaaaaaaa🤗🤗



Whoa!!!!

Wht an update👏👏


Loved all the lines said by Avi...!😊😉

but wht is he upto???? I hope there wont be any misunderstandings

Update was...............




Update it Soon Darling.....😊

Cant wait fr the twist😉



Edited by prash_t - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg, avi kya karne wala hai
jaldi jaldi batao

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