How long from love to Marraige???

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Friends,
We all know that Arpi and Avi fell for each other immediately, without a word being spoken between them they got married, first time.......I was really curious and decided to do a logline...wheww you will be surprised, I know I was ...!!😃
So Arpita seeming surprised and horrifies at Avdesh's certain action, well..considering she knew nothing about him....not a surprise.
Logline:
Day 1 - They meet at the market place, where Avdesh has gone after BM.... He catches her..she comes home and dances with happiness.... That evening he comes to her house to terrorise her father, kidnap her brother(😆), he see's her and is visibly shocked....before leaving he looks at her for a while... then outside they exchange another look...he is confused.
Day 2 - Thinking about her constantly now, Avdesh and the gang turn up outside her balcony...we have the sweet scene of both looking for each other...exchanging smiles and falling in love -deeply and permanently....
Day 3 - Avdesh is now really thinking of her...his gang aware...so they go to meet her at the Mandir...Sarvaan keeping an eye on her house....he cutely describes what she is wearing, when she comes out..Avdesh silently hears all this, a slight smile on his lips. Mandir scene happens......At home Pappua and co. turn up....Avdesh and the gang write their first ever love letter (a joint effort!😆) asking her out for a date.. Sarvaan climbs in and leaves it, taking her earring as a love a token for Avdesh (😍)
Day 4 - The day of the date arrives...Avdesh and gang get ready..(😆😆)....Pappua arrives and takes Arpi to the same place(🤢)....Avdesh is heartbroken, his eyes sad and tearful..Arpi looks back and she understands he loves her too...she is wild with sadness...persuades Manjiri to go with her to the haveli to tell him she loves him too (she said she saw love in his eyes today)....The gang talk about kidnapping...but Avdesh said no, she is getting married..let it stop her, he won't chase her...his mouth trembles as he says this while looking at her earring.....😭😭💔.....that night Arpita tells her mother she is in love..father hears and beats her up like a animal (🤢🤢😭😭)...He brings forward her wedding to Pappua..
Day 5 - Rai family arrive at Pappua's for the wedding...Avi and gang had been out all night, Avi come to see Arpita for one last time as the gang tell him that it looked like she wanted to tell him something when she saw him (yes that she loves him too!)...but turn up too late...he is heartbroken, turns his face into the car.. and gets angry...Bhootni concerned, first time Avi didn't come running, in fact out all night (👍🏼😆)....Bhootni asks Avdesh 'whose voice is drowning out my voice in your ears'...he keeps it to himself....At the Prasad's farmhouse the wedding rasams start......that night, Avdesh goes to Arpi's house and stares up at the balcony with her earring in his hand...tears run down his face as he remembers her..(❤️🤗)
Day 6 - Haldi rasam starts...Manjiri comes, is given a letter by Arpi to deliver to Avdesh...Bhootni is confused over Avdesh's behaviour and is getting angry...she knows something is on his mind but he refuses to tell her....Manjiri braves it to the haveli and then loses her courage..hands the letter to Bhootni (🤢)..who opens it but then drops it as Ammaji tugs her hair...letter flies to Avdesh, who is excercising in front of Hanuman...he see's the letter and reads it, finally understands he too is loved....wildly and passionately. Determination takes over and he gets ready to get his lady love...'meri mehbooba' plays (😍)...Wedding starts...Arpi is sad and in daze....halfway through she stops the peras and declares her love for Avdesh...gets ready to take the poison but he comes, just in time...bahubali is furious and ready to kill - by the looks. He ignores all, goes straight to his love and silently demands she hands over the poison, which she does....silently he asks and she accepts him, he puts sindoor on her maang (thanks to Rai Papa's words), takes her from that place...gang happy and crazy....Kanoo drives hoping either Avi or Arpi will land in other's lap!...stop to eat somewhere and they speak for the first time...their love and trust evident....Avi bring her home and bahubali turns to kitten...worried about Bhootni...who is angry and at first refuses to accept them...then fearing he will leave, she pretends to accept...Later her father and the right hand of the minister(😆) turn up to take her back..Arpi declares Avi to be her husband, her god, her everything..and the house her mandir....that night, Avi waits for Arpi outside, trying to make her happy and smile..he does a comedy routine and she smiles...Bhootni spies on them and turns of the mains.....bedtime!😆
Day 7 - He father turns up again, having made a plan...he gets Arpita alone and tries to kill her...Avdesh on alert comes breaking through, he takes a shot on his arm...threatens her father, who in turns whispers to sow discord.....Bhootni is angry and uses this to separate Avita...she won't let Arpi touch Avdesh, to help dress his wound(🤢)...Arpi and Avi meet in his mother's room where he then explains a bit about Bhootni...who overhears Avi saying 'she is like a mother'...comes out in a sweat and goes to her room where we see her fantasy and true feelings about Avdesh(🤢😡)
Day 8 - Avita wedding prep going on...Avdesh see's bhootni selecting jewellery, cards and clothes..he feels happy and shy....bhootni makes some digs about avita runaway from the mandap.....gets teased by his gang about his wedding....Arpi comes to put washing up...Avita share a long intense look of longing....Bhootni displeased....makes plans with Panditji to get rid of Arpi permanently....Sends Arpi to the ghat, where she is nearly killed...Avdesh comes, after being persuaded by gang...saves her and is murderously furious...after taking care of her, he nearly kills the man for 'daring to hurt his Arpita'...he was beyond reason...fear flash across Bhootni and Pandiji (imagining their fate🤢)....Bhootni blames Papa Rai..Avdesh goes to kill him, slapping the two idiots on his way to Papa Rai, mother Rai then saves the scum..Avdesh said Arpi has no relations with them anymore...comes back, Arpita is blames by Bhootni for being apshagun and maybe costing Avdesh his life...she runs away from him...he stops her telling if she leaves he will die...they reaffirm their love for each other, come back hand in hand and Avdesh tells Bhootni he is getting married within 24hrs......the gang and Avi all go out and get various stuff for the wedding....Avdesh gives back the earring S took (5 days ago!!😆)saying he has her now, Bhootni hears......he asks Arpi is she likes the saris and jewelleries (😍❤️)......Later that night, Arpi gets a letter...goes out on a midnight date with Avdesh...they talk, she dances in the rain and they hug...they fall sleep in each other's arms....
Day 9 - Avita wake up at dawn, each supporting the other...exchange loving smile and walk back hand in hand...bhootni see's them and looks worried (thinking they've done the deed!😆😉).....Haldi rasam starts, Avdesh lost in dreams of Arpita, face all soft with love and longing, Bhootni hungering for him, behind her Panditji longing for her.....Wedding no.2 takes place..Avdesh looks shy and solem, gives one weird look to Arpi...she too is solemn and watchful....Mama Rai and Manjiri turn up....the most awful dance in history takes place with the gang and manjiri ()....then it's the suhaag raat...interrupted by Bhootni's drama....Avdesh in pain and screams out...then takes a Pratigya to not to touch his wife until Lal Singh is found......Arpi left weeping, Avdesh cold and devatested, Bhootni satisfied....
Day 10 - Avdesh in revenge mode....puja being done, preparing him for 'war'......Arpi weeping in her room...Bhootni dressed in RED!...Avdesh takes his leave of everyone except Arpi..see's her outside and instinctively turns towards her but remembers his oath....Avdesh finds a man and brings him back to the haveli and beat the life out of him....Manjiri has come ....they all witness this...Manjiri runs away...Arpi horrified at seeing her husband like this..she asks him to stop but he puts his hand up, she runs away...bhootni happy.....Arpi later comes in and tells Avdesh she won't support/stand by a murderer..she wants her husband....He gets angry, hurt, that she is rejecting him..yells what about your vow to me???....He is so angry he storms out but recalls her words...refuses to eat, bhootni feeds him(🤢🤢) he sleeps but remembers Arpi's words ..Bhootni shows her true face to Arpi....Avdesh gets up and see's bhootni with his gun, bhootni knows he is missing his wife and cries croc tears.....so he tells her his oath comes first and leaves.....Arpi see's this all.....Avdesh tormented, starts drinking to drown out Arpi's words and the fear she will leave....Arpi comes running, gets hurt and then Avita talk.......Avdesh leaves their room telling her ...the pain she is feeling is inside him as well......
Well, there you go everyone....from their first meeting to friday's eppy it was 10 days!!!...a lot has been packed in to give that believable intensity to their love.....❤️...most importantly they believe it and honour it.
So, would you fall in love, leave everything and marry a guy all within 10 days??😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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😆😆😆😆 wooooooooooooo its only 10 days for Avita and we are suffering for more than two months😔
Arpii is one in a million..she left everything for Avi after doing naina thug lenge for only 5 days.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: MonyP

😆😆😆😆 wooooooooooooo its only 10 days for Avita and we are suffering for more than two months😔

Arpii is one in a million..she left everything for Avi after doing naina thug lenge for only 5 days.

would you have been able to do something like that?😃
And yes, in 10 days they packed in a lot!!...even I couldn't believe it. But it also gave that intensity needed, otherwise we would not have found it believable..especially the earlier episode where they were building the love and emotions...if the just met and then something else and then mandap, we would have been booing......but we saw how much they kept thinking of each other, the out of behaviour act by Avdesh to see Arpi and etc......👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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woww...i never ever thought that all the episodes we have seen until now just took place in mere 10 days 😲 i thought atleast a fortnight must have gone by!!! Arpi was in love with Avi earlier itself so in 10 days if she marries that person no wonder but Avi saw,fell in love n married Arpi in 10 days is quite unbelievable!! but most of all these 10 days have laid the foundation to a love so deep,intense n powerful!!! that is truly amazing!! hats of to the directors for creating such a intense drama that seems so real n charismatic!!! 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thank u di for wonderfully jotting down the logline 🤗 it really had ma eyes opened up in wonder!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dreamygal301

would you have been able to do something like that?😃
And yes, in 10 days they packed in a lot!!...even I couldn't believe it. But it also gave that intensity needed, otherwise we would not have found it believable..especially the earlier episode where they were building the love and emotions...if the just met and then something else and then mandap, we would have been booing......but we saw how much they kept thinking of each other, the out of behaviour act by Avdesh to see Arpi and etc......👏

NEVER😆 I am not one in a million ....i am one in billions.😉😆
Jokes apart...is it really possible to fall in love like Avita in such a short span😕
@Sia..you are right. Arpi was attracted towards Avi for long time but for Avi, being a gunda everything was new, still he went to stpo Arpi's wedding and brought her home....kitna strong feeling hoga na.😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sia_ks

woww...i never ever thought that all the episodes we have seen until now just took place in mere 10 days 😲 i thought atleast a fortnight must have gone by!!! Arpi was in love with Avi earlier itself so in 10 days if she marries that person no wonder but Avi saw,fell in love n married Arpi in 10 days is quite unbelievable!! but most of all these 10 days have laid the foundation to a love so deep,intense n powerful!!! that is truly amazing!! hats of to the directors for creating such a intense drama that seems so real n charismatic!!! 👏

I know very intense. Though Arpi may have loved him from before, it was more like a fan adoring a star....she fell in love when she met him...I think she said it somewhere to her father, the night he beat her...??.....but yes, when you consider it like this it is like how can they fall for each other like that, especially as you said Avdesh...no wonder bhootni thinks it will all go away....
But consider this Sia, their feelings were very intense...they were both ready, in their own way to fall in love (it was within them)...they both feel deeply and say little. their eyes speaking volumes.....so they meet and it was a spark that lit in their heart that very moment...fate helped them by throwing them at each other day and night....their minds filled with the other....so it was natural (off course the CVs upping the intensity was brillant..the constant loooks, the need to see the other...brillant)....
There is a reason for all this...Avita will need this love to handle the tough times coming up...it is their only stability, something they can hold onto...especially for avdesh, this love of theirs is his lifeline, his support which will bring him back time after time from the brink.....if he did not have Arpi in his life, he would have descended into darkness, his soul lost with all the murder and mayhem that he lives with daily.....so really, she and her love is his redemption.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: MonyP

NEVER😆 I am not one in a million ....i am one in billions.😉😆
Jokes apart...is it really possible to fall in love like Avita in such a short span😕
@Sia..you are right. Arpi was attracted towards Avi for long time but for Avi, being a gunda everything was new, still he went to stpo Arpi's wedding and brought her home....kitna strong feeling hoga na.😍

yes, he felt strongly. I had a bit of doubt....it disappeared when I saw his tears as he yearned for her while looking up a the balcony.....
So, mony ....you would not leave everything for a gund with a good heart?..one who will make yout he queen of his heart???...😃😃😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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dreamy now this chatterbox has turned silent box

no words to say anything now

brilliant again

just 10 days and u hv summed up the entier story of 2months plus here

and i think u didnt read in other thread abt mods here


i had said it takes time to put team in place

mayb discussions wud be on

next list shud be due soon

and its gm and admins who do along with feedback from other viewbies


rest i wud ans u later currently watching harry potter


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: chatterbox

dreamy now this chatterbox has turned silent box

no words to say anything now

brilliant again

just 10 days and u hv summed up the entier story of 2months plus here

and i think u didnt read in other thread abt mods here


i had said it takes time to put team in place

mayb discussions wud be on

next list shud be due soon

and its gm and admins who do along with feedback from other viewbies


rest i wud ans u later currently watching harry potter


Aww thanks...I really enjoyed putting this together...it was lovely...😍
Ok, I look forward to your post later, so don't forget Di...and what is it with HP??...but I understand, coz I went mad when I discovered that little boy wizard too...😆😆...I have all the DVDs and books...can't wait to introduce my kids to him but they are still young to understand it - 5+3 - so for the oldest maybe another year...he knows Harry Potter but not the story.......hmm now you make me wanna read all seven books now, one after another....😆😆

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