GKD Written Update - 4th Oct

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Characters:

Avdesh/Bhaiyyaji: I am gonna call him Avdesh (for the obvious reasons) – The hero

Arpi: The heroine

Mahesh: Arpi's father

Banna Rai: Brother –in-law of Mahesh ; right hand to the minister

Bahuji: Avdesh's sis-in-law

Chirag: Arpi's second brother

Jagat: Arpi's first brother

Pehelwan: Avdesh's chela

Pappuji(yes!!! The "raping with the eye" guy is called pappuji🤣): Arpi's fiance

Beta Maharaj: Some beaten up guy

Recap:

  • Avdesh's chela's writing the letter and one of the chelas keeping it on Arpi's table😛
  • Arpi remembering Pappuji's torture and crying😭
  • Pappuji showing up at Arpi's house and talks of taking Arpi outside😭

Episode:

  • Pappuji comes to Arpi's house and says lets go out for the whole and spend time alone with each other in Moti Mahal (Same place as Avdesh has told Arpi)
  • Arpi gets scared
  • Pappuji asks Mahesh's permission; he agrees . The mother (don't know her name yet) opposes and tells them to sit in the lawn and talk while she prepares his fav food for him (though I am sure food is the last thing on his mind!!😆😆)
  • Pappuji says everyone will keep passing by and they won't be able to talk (yeah right…I suppose Moti Mahal belongs to him for them to be completely alone😛😛)
  • Mahesh agrees with Pappuji and tells the mother to get Arpi ready😡
  • Arpi tells mother she doesn't want to go and cries😭
  • Mother tries to dissuade Mahesh; he doesn't agree. She tries again; he gets angry and slaps her😕
  • Arpi agrees to get ready to save the mother and gets ready crying while seeing Avdesh's photo😭
  • ( a must watch comedy scene😳) Avdesh's chela's make him wear flashy clothes and coats and joke with each other and he refuses to wear flashy clothes and eventually enters wearing a nice suit. His chelas also get ready as this is the first time they are meeting their bhabhi😆😆
  • Avdesh tries to fit the gun into the pants and does not find it comfortable and one of his chela's says to leave it and Avdesh says him without gun is like aurat without sindoor….he can't even look at himself in the mirror without it. (He bhagwan; kya logic hain🤣) Most teasing ensues and Bahuji calls him home immediately
  • Bahuji sees Avdesh and says "dulha banneka iraada hain kya? (Avdesh toh kabse thayyar hain!😉) Avdesh says he is going to the mela. Bahuji puts kaala teeka since he is looking so handsome and says even she doesn't look at him properly thaki her nazar naa lag jaaye (lol…more weird logic🤣). Avdesh blushes.😳😳 (A very cute scene; again a must watch)
  • Bahuji tells him to let go of beta maharaja and then go to the mela. Avdesh about to object and Bahuji holds up her hand and says shanth and Abdesh stops talking😕
  • Bahuji gives some explanation; Avdesh though not satisfied goes and releases the Beta maharaj (a beaten up guy) and warns him that if he does the same mistake again then next time he wont be spared.(Avdesh style dhamkafying😉)
  • Pappuji waiting impatiently for Arpi ; she comes and sits on the bike holding the bike handle firmly with both hands so that her body doesn't touch him🤢.
  • Avdesh reaches the Moti Mahal and entering. (he looks positively gorgeous in this scene😳😳). The scene freezes.

Precap:

Avdesh sees Arpi and is walking towards while she is looking away the other side worriedly. Pappuji comes in between and takes her away and the red rose brought by Avdesh is shown(man...here comes the misunderstanding😭😭)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thks for the update, u put them nicely🤗
yaa, i saw the epi, it was all funny🤣, Avdesh feels uncomfortable in those clothes🤣, & those clothes r poking for him frm inside it seems🤣🤣
He lies his sis-in-law, of going for mela😉😆
Goons want him to reach Moti mahal asap, as he needs to warm up before meeting Arpi 🤣🤣
His dhamki to BM was a style😎😍, yaa i agree, he looked handsome in Blue shirt😍☺️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanx for the update hun😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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first of all thanks for wonderful update


and abt avdesh
he was totally in his element

i was so happy finally he talks and his style of talking is very impressive

achha khaasa impressionwa laga diya hai hamka 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣


the dress up scenes had me in splits

and that chaddi maharaj the way he puts his hands up is so irritating 🤢🤢

bt avdesh was too good here


and creepy snake and his equally weird pa in law snake r made for each other couple i wud say


father cant see that pappu is not right

still he does

man kisi din ise bhi padhne wali hai avdesh ki


btw there was new background score when avdesh walks
not dhagaddham


loved ur update

keep it up👏👏👏

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yaa, when he gets down frm his jeep front of his house no❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanx alot for the wonderful update 🤗i cannot stand that creeper..somebody push him in the lake 🤣may be avdesh"s goons can do the good deed 😆....so arpi and avdesh can have some lovey dovey moments to share 😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks for the update 😊
how cute does he look dressed up and comparing leaving the gun to aurat without sindoor 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks for the update😊. Havent watched it yet, but definetly will😉. Avdesh in blue shirt and looking hot? Definetly will........😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thnaks for the update for avadesh 10/10
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks. Haven't watched the episode yet but from your update it sounds good.

"dulha banneka iraada hain kya?"😆 I bet if he is a real dulha, he would be blushing even more than usual.
This Bahuji is surely treating him like a child. She is not his mother but maybe like a mother figure but still something is not quite right there. Daal mein kuch kaala hai🤔

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