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Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#101

chapter 7 updated sorry for the chotu chappii ...wooh kya haina today is 8th may😳

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EXOL

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: arti07
chapter 7 updated sorry for the chotu chappii ...wooh kya haina today is 8th may😳

8th may ko kya hai,,,mother's day ??? usse tera aur FF ka kya connection😆

tune galata jawab diya mujhe bu hu hu😭

Edited by nneeiill - 12 years ago

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EXOL

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

haaye me the first to comment..

sachi chotu sa chappi the ..never mind it was another good one...

i liked how he said " acha hua tu samaj gayi ki main bacha nahi hu"...hahahah

what a line..

and gullu tho literally fisal gayi..and the scenes which followed were total shocker for her na..ye kesar bhi na..koi license nahi hai hahaha...

ab kya plan kar rehi hai vo :(

btw the first para was too painful...poor kesar

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LoLali

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Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Arti inna chotu update . . .ok ji chalta hai . 😛. .it ws kind of a turning point waala update . . .i just loved how beautifully you have penned down the helplessness of kesar . . . .he infact is a victim of his own heart who refuses to listen to him . . . .boy it is such a choking condition to be in . . .all these years he has done nothing except loving her fanatising her , completely soaking himself into her . . .and the result is he has no controll over himself. . .i knew gulaal will start displaying her running skills again and it pained him so much . . .poor preeto inke beech mei fataka kha rahi hai . .😆 .the chatt scene and the scene that followed it ws total tension waala . . .but that kiss ws something shocker for me too . . .matlab woh toh uske chot ko lekar pareshaan tha phir ek dawa lagate lagate yeh dusari dawa lagane laga . 😆. . .no control huh . . .no wonder gulaal shot like an arrow from there .😆 . .she is all broken thinking why is he doing so but i wanna know what she felt when he did this .😛 . .so kabab mei haddi lane ki taiyyari ho rahi . . .let's see how does biji reacts to this . . .

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Piu Chatterjee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Elo ji 8th may ka raaz😆😆😆 this was supposed to go up last night but chiii mere net ne dhokha de diya

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3572745&PID=82436378&#82436378
HAPPY BIRTHDAYYY😃

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Piu Chatterjee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

My chotu Govinda🤗🤗🤗I lubb you happy budday wala update maza aa gaya..Aww you know what Kesar and his dilemma was wonderfully penned down.It was beautiful!! I could feel his pain in his heart.He longed for her,he yearned for her .but she left him oh that must be painful both must be yearning for each other,but I can understand matey too😛yes I said it..Bechari Denial mode😳😳KOi nahi I know our desperate munda will do sumthing😆aur elo ji kar diya...lol and matey ran off for her LIFE!! Bechara Kesu yeh bhi koi baat hui bhai patidev is lattoo over you and you run..Matey whta do you think ki life par sewa aur platonic love mein kaat dogi...😡
Ok Rant over but seriously I CAN UNDERSTAND HER CONFUSION AND PAIN.you HAVE WONDERFULLY PENNED IT!!TOTALLY LOVED IT!!
Wonderful update waiting for Matey ka sacrifice now

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minizz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Arti...sab se pehle let me wish you a very Happy B'day🤗Hope you have loads of fun with your friends and family🥳

awww I knew that this chapter was going to be bring in some changes and aisa hi hua...well yeh toh hona hi tha.I loved this chapter a lot.Both of them struggling with their feelings and emotions...it was so emotional.I really liked how you expressed Gulaal's confusion.This is how it should have been treated in the show but instead we got a few glimpses and then Gulaal's emotions took a backseat completely to the whole Talli drama.Gulaal feels so human here and I like that.It's not that she is unaffected but she really is afraid of what the change might mean to her bond with Kesar.Oh I forgot to mention the first para with Kesar in the present was really nice.In the last chapter Kesar had gotten rid of the strong UST vibe that was surrounding a very similar moment where he tended to her injury but wow here in this instance the tension just increased manifold😳...ha bechara...I would not blame him...being in close proximity with the only woman he has ever loved, his emotions got the best of him.Waise bhi he had been trying to tell her for some time now and then suddenly dil ki baat zubaan pe aa gayi😛Gullu got so scared na which is again completely understandable.hmmm I have a feeling Gulaal is going to suggest something very drastic...hmmm like getting Kesar married to someone elseHope you update soon...am dying to know what happens next.Great update Arti😃

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MR21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Arti 🤗...this is a small chapter...but no probs as its 8th May today...

Hayee...kya dialogues maartha hai yeh kesar bhi...sach mein gulaal ki toh bolti hi bandh hogayee...so ostrich state of gulaal has started and looks like this state will continue for some time now...poor kesar has to suffer a lot...offo gulaal is planning to take a big decision to keep kesar away from her...ab kya hoga aur kesar kaisa react karega...please do update soon...n once again happy birthday!!!