SS : KAREWA chapter 15 updated page 30...1st june - Page 12

Arti your update speed is amazing very tough for me to keep pace with it,so apologies for being late will try my best to get to it as soon as possible from now on…

Chapter 4 : That profound statement from Kesar at very young age "bada hoke main usse apni manmaani nahi karne dunga said it all na…." she was his Gulaal from then on…it was just matter of time…..till he had his way…his touch, his looks, his talk everything about him screams that he has grown up and is attracted to her, But what surprises me is that Gulaal expected anything less from him, he should have known this from the way he had said "Tera Pati aur Kaun", bechari pata nahi kaunse bhram mein jee rahee hai

Chapter 5 : Kesar bought the ring for her and she extends the hand to take it not wear it …gosh Gulaal bhi na…kab samjhegi…I like this sheepish Kesar,he is making his moves and poor Gulaal ko toh kuch pata bhi nahi…hey bhagawaan Gulaal kabse itni buddhu ban gayee….Bechari Gulaal this shana kuda is taking full advantage woh bhi without any sharam kyun nahi aakhir biwi jo hai, Gulaal should know by now rather than get his work done from someone else,he was going to make her pay for staying away all those years, till he understands the reason right now he is pyar mein lattoo munda who doesn't even know he is in love…Preeto seems more intelligent than Gulaal here,but I guess Gulaal is trying to turn a blind eye to something very obvious, hope she will learn soon…

Thanks for lovely updates , I will try and catchup with rest of the chapters later today or tomorrow

Originally posted by: nneeiill

8th may ko kya hai,,,mother's day ??? usse tera aur FF ka kya connection😆

tune galata jawab diya mujhe bu hu hu😭

Originally posted by: nneeiill

haaye me the first to comment..

sachi chotu sa chappi the ..never mind it was another good one...thanks re but mojiris pade to will face it right 😉

i liked how he said " acha hua tu samaj gayi ki main bacha nahi hu"...hahahah

what a line..yaa one line tht confuses her terribly how does she view him kid or a man ?😆 big question naa 😆

and gullu tho literally fisal gayi..and the scenes which followed were total shocker for her na..ye kesar bhi na..koi license nahi hai hahaha...nahi carried away with the wind

ab kya plan kar rehi hai vo :( as if u dont know 😉

btw the first para was too painful...poor kesar hmmm so toh hai who said to fall in love 😳 thanks for the comment 😳

Originally posted by: LoLali

Arti inna chotu update . . .ok ji chalta hai . 😛. .it ws kind of a turning point waala update . thanks u ji 😳. .i just loved how beautifully you have penned down the helplessness of kesar . . . .he infact is a victim of his own heart who refuses to listen to him . . .oh yes it takes away all the logic and sanity u know u are behaving like the most stupid person in the whole world but cant help it .boy it is such a choking condition to be in . . .all these years he has done nothing except loving her fanatising her , completely soaking himself into her . . .and the result is he has no controll over himself. . .i knew gulaal will start displaying her running skills again and it pained him so much .yup u said it all ..poor preeto inke beech mei fataka kha rahi hai .haan bechari dukhyaari chakki k beech piss rahi hai .😆 .the chatt scene and the scene that followed it ws total tension waala . yes it was. .but that kiss ws something shocker for me too . . .matlab woh toh uske chot ko lekar pareshaan tha phir ek dawa lagate lagate yeh dusari dawa lagane laga . 😆. . .no control huh .besharam kesar kuch nahi dikhata . .no wonder gulaal shot like an arrow from there .😆 . .she is all broken thinking why is he doing so but i wanna know what she felt when he did this .😛 hmm i dunno how she felt told u naa she is tight lipped its upto the readers 😳 . .so kabab mei haddi lane ki taiyyari ho rahi . . .let's see how does biji reacts to this . . lets see.

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Elo ji 8th may ka raaz😆😆😆 this was supposed to go up last night but chiii mere net ne dhokha de diya



http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3572745&PID=82436378&#82436378
HAPPY BIRTHDAYYY😃

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

My chotu Govinda🤗🤗🤗I lubb you happy budday wala update maza aa gaya thanks..Aww you know what Kesar and his dilemma was wonderfully penned down.It was beautiful!! I could feel his pain in his heart....thanku ji meine to bas likh diya pata nahi kya likh rahi hun 😕 chalo samjh to aaya phew 😆He longed for her,he yearned for her .but she left him oh that must be painful both must be yearning for each other,but I can understand matey too😛yes I said it.. wat 😲gullu samajh aayi hein yunki yeah kab hua Bechari Denial mode😳😳 denial no...actually shocked mode 😳noKOi nahi I know our desperate munda will do sumthing😆aur elo ji kar diya...lol and matey ran off for her LIFE!! Bechara Kesu yeh bhi koi baat hui bhai patidev is lattoo over you and you run..Matey whta do you think ki life par sewa aur platonic love mein kaat dogi...😡 kuch nahi ho sakta iska 😡
Ok Rant over but seriously I CAN UNDERSTAND HER CONFUSION AND PAIN.you HAVE WONDERFULLY PENNED IT!!TOTALLY LOVED IT!!
Wonderful update waiting for Matey ka sacrifice now haan yanha se trouble began 😭

Originally posted by: MR21

Arti 🤗...this is a small chapter.yes i know sorry ..but no probs as its 8th May today...i will never forget this bday eesh bday at hospital it was terrible like terrible 😭

Hayee...kya dialogues maartha hai yeh kesar bhi...sach mein gulaal ki toh bolti hi bandh hogayee...so ostrich state of gulaal has started and looks like this state will continue for some time now.yes it will the ss is parallel to show nothing new 😆..poor kesar has to suffer a lot...offo gulaal is planning to take a big decision to keep kesar away from her...ab kya hoga aur kesar kaisa react karega...lets see please do update soon...n once again happy birthday!!! will do thanks for the wishes

Originally posted by: Geeshu

Hi Arti 🤗 I'm so happy to see ur new SS thread

Res 😳

Originally posted by: minizz

Arti...sab se pehle let me wish you a very Happy B'day🤗Hope you have loads of fun with your friends and family🥳

well i got food posioning i celebrated my bday in hospital...i had a drip put in my hand which was in 24 hrs and then those deadly injections and no handsome sonna sa doctor attending me so yes i was a unforgetable bday 😭😆

awww I knew that this chapter was going to be bring in some changes and aisa hi hua...well yeh toh hona hi tha.I loved this chapter a lot.Both of them struggling with their feelings and emotions..yes their emotions and feelings are relatable and justified somewhere .it was so emotional.I really liked how you expressed Gulaal's confusion.This is how it should have been treated in the show but instead we got a few glimpses and then Gulaal's emotions took a backseat completely to the whole Talli drama

even i wanted her to express little more in the show this talli torture wasnt even required gosh talli and her pyaar 🤢

.Gulaal feels so human here and I like that.It's not that she is unaffected but she really is afraid of what the change might mean to her bond with Kesar.Oh I forgot to mention the first para with Kesar in the present was really nice.In the last chapter Kesar had gotten rid of the strong UST vibe that was surrounding a very similar moment where he tended to her injury but wow here in this instance the tension just increased manifold😳..yaa since there is no murder mystery involved he is more free and understands his heart more confortably 😆.ha bechara...I would not blame him...being in close proximity with the only woman he has ever loved, his emotions got the best of him.Waise bhi he had been trying to tell her for some time now and then suddenly dil ki baat zubaan pe aa gayi😛 satyanash 😆Gullu got so scared na which is again completely understandable.hmmm I have a feeling Gulaal is going to suggest something very drastic...hmmm like getting Kesar married to someone else its way to predicatbale 😆Hope you update soon...am dying to know what happens next.Great update Arti😃 its just a normal story nothing exciting so i afraid it may disappoint u me scared now thanks will update and thanks for the bday wish🤗

Originally posted by: poo_j

Loved it..😊 Gulaal maintaining a distance from Kesar..It'll make him more vigorous to coms close to her..She is hurting both!!! yes she is...but she has her own reasons she was once his guardian the emotions is way to difficult 😳

Awww..She slipped and he helped and carried her in his arms..😳 And the kiss..☺️ She naturally shocked by it though!!! yaa

Looks like Gulaal gonna suggest marriage for Kesar.. oh man everybody knows it 😆

Looking forward and thanks for writing an awesome update!!!😊 thanks once again 🤗