Gulaal: What If chp 26(part II) upd Pg 57 - Page 6

Originally posted by: MR21

my second reswa 😳

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Aditi...you are just brilliant in bringing out the confusion n jealousy in kesar...the way he kept his hands above her head to cover her gives us the way he is taking steps towards being her kavach...loved that dinner scene...well coming to pb.. really feel bad for her as she never gt that exclusive attention from kesar after vasant's death..losing vasant n being far from kesar would be a very tough thing for her...I liked that gulaal took that step to atleast tell him that she will tell abt everything n clear his doubts once he is grown up...his ultimate faith on her is so kesar...his declaration that he will support n stay with her all the time n her acceptance that how can she live alone with out...that was the thing he needed...n once he got that reaction..he is all brattish...

Just loved how gulaal n kesar think abt vasant n kesar thinking that he is growing ...i just loved that bit so much...kesar n his plan...kya plan banaaya hai...talli koh ek dum dabloo banaaraha hai...gulaal saving kesar from MB anger...this is so good between them...they just cover each other faults in front of others...kesar noticing what dushy did though it is a small gesture...it would create a lot more confusion in kesar...n thus his sudden jealousy for dushy n his uneasiness seeing gulaal n dushy talking n even sitting near by...coming to talli all her acceptance of kesar pot shots only to get that special affectionate look n smile from kesar...that he always gives to gulaal n only gulaal...waste of time talli..dont even except that from him any more...loved all the aam bageecha scene that they r having some good time with each other...gulaal giving him that neccessary gyaan abt controlling his anger as this may create so many problems...he can accept any rubbish abt him but he cant accept anything abt his gulaal...his thought thinking abt the guy who said that words is elder than him 2 years but he spoke these words against her...his anger n agony while telling what that guy said abt his gulaal n when he is unable to reveal the next words...i was very sad abt it...really looking forward to know gulaal's reaction...do update the next chapter soon...

Aww Ramya Thanks yaar I am so delighted that you loved this update,I was bit apprensive about it cause there are many instances that I have used is just my way of seeing things,not necessarily right but I am glad you liked it. Thanks for your lovely comments and your constant support,it means a lot🤗

Originally posted by: minizz

Aditi🤗loved the first part but I want to read the 2nd part too before giving my comment😊so waiting for the update😃

Hey Aditi,once again I am late lateef.You know weekend is always a bit hectic but here I am with my comments.I loved this chapter a lot.I am loving how you are progressing this story.The best thing about this chapter apart fromKesar's cuteness was his rising jealousy and possessiveness.That makes him notice Dushyant's feelings towards Gulaal.His stopping before Gulaal's room and his sigh doesn't go unnoticed by Kesar.I loved that bit the most.That was so subtle but the point was made effectively👏The sitting in front seat of the jeep was yet another instance of that possessiveness but this time it is quite evident to us readers though not to Gulaal and Dushyant

Mini yes I have started that journey where a growing up boy has started feeling possessive for his Gulaal,no he doesn't understand the relationship of husband and wife yet but he understands one thing and that is his Gulaal only has to be admired,loved,cared and made happy by him no one else has that haq even her happiness is bound to him...

.I also want to add that I loved how you portrayed Talli.I felt sorry for her here.Chalo kam se kam she is aware of the fact that Kesar looks at Gulaal lovingly,he never looks at anyone else like that.She is intelligent yaar😆I loved the whole mango orchard scene and the ending bit was quite emotional.I agree with Piu,kitna bura laga hoga use yeh sab sunke and I am glad he shared it with Gulaal but ab Gulaal kya karegi?Very interesting...

Talli will not have that much part to play in this SS, she is jariya of progressing the story when required and will be used as such,I agree it would have been difficult to come to terms with what people had been thinking of his Gulaal and as far as sharing it with her is concerend I just wanted to highlight the point that he was direct from very young age,he did not believe in hiding anything from her because he trusted her completely,it was her who broke his trust but that will come later...

ok I am going about this all wrong na.starting from the end and working my way upto the beginning😕😆sorry but I just wanted to speak about my fav bits first.ok after this I loved Kesar turning into a temporary chatha for his Gulaal and the way he talks to Vasant about it later on😳My heart went out to him.I was smiling yet I was feeling all emotional.That was lovely.I also loved the appearance of sulky Gulaal and Kesar,the brat with his teasing.kya revenge liya hai👏PB ko thodi si akal de di thank you for that.Iam waiting to know what happens in the next chapter.How will Gulaal answer him?will she answer him? and I want to see more of Kesarji's jealousy...

Haha you can start from anywhere you like middle se bhi😆 Yes PB will have short but important role to play in this SS, I didn't like the way Gulaal was running entire houshold w/o PB being at helm,how's that possible? I understand PB was occupied when MB was in hospital but for a mother her son holds paramount of importance and she will definely not hand him over completely to DIL,no matter how devoted she is to entire household

Thank you Aditi for this wonderful chapter.I enjoyed it a lot😃yeh le ek badi si jhappi for the beautiful chapter🤗

Thanks Mini for your lovely comments and constant support yara,it keeps me going aur meri taraf se bhi badi si jhappi🤗

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

my first reswa😳

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For you see, each day I love you more

Today more than yesterday and less than tomorrow.

Ahh exactly how the story is going to progress,I am so glad you could sense this 👏

Ahhh Aditi..👏the sheer brillaince you created with this update.Haert wrenching and heartwarming at the same time.The bond of ethereal love is so beautifully potrayed and the subtle nuances and feelings so beautifully explored.👏

Thanks Piyu I am glad you liked it,I thought it was getting too detailed but I had to write the background I am going to use later on,so no escaping details I guess

The sheer bliss of unconditional care of chotu kesu for Gulaal...Ahhh a 14 yr old boy caring for the centre of his universe.Awww the chotu kesu's hand barely managed to reach gulaal's head and the chotu boy showed his undying concern with this tiny gesture..and then tu bhi to bhig gayi hai .Gullu is best in her protective mode na...ahhh...She always hid his faults behind her pallu na..beautifully done and then the food sequence was awww so cute..but PB had to barge in naBut i really loved the statement of PB as one could not help but sympathise with her plight with her elder son dead and kesu being all aloof and tied to the pallu of Gulaal it must have really hurt her a lot naAnd I lubbed the effort that gulaal made to speak to him ahhh kash show mein aisa kuch hota

Well for Kesu Gulaal was his world na,without any condition w/o any tag she was his and the small gesture like this indicated his possessiveness as well as his caring attitude,he wanted to reach over her head cause that way he can walk besides her be her support,do things for her that she had to do alone for last two years,that's why I wrote that scene where Vasant and Kesu are having conversation about when he could grow tall enough to reach that grass,though he liked Gulaal doing things for him he wanted to do things for her too,in his mind even at this young age she was his equal and that's what I wanted to bring about through that scene,PB in my mind was someone who should have been hell jealous of Gulaal,she took away bith her son from her and after Vasant's death naturally she would have felt more protective about Kesar as mother,but in the show we never got to see this ,and that's why I brought in that line there ,Gulaal making effort to speak to him,hmm again she is human in this story😆 that's all I can say

and then his unwavering faith in her..awww bacha loves her so much na😭

awww I lubbed gullu and her complain and Chotu is such a brat he just wanted to hear all those words from her na😆brat kahin ka😆Gullu ko hi dhamki de daali😆

What can I say Kesu was intelligent,smart and knew how to get his way with Gulaal,so he utilised his intellect to get what he wanted nothing wrong I suppose😉

and the next scene with vassy being a part of both their lives was EXCELLENT!!! SUPERB!!! chotu golu was so happy na ki his hands could reach Gulaal's head ...bacha to lamba ho raha hai😆Such a small detail yet dealt with such care..Kudos to you Aditi👏

Thanks for liking this Piyu,Vasant was the thread that tied this two endpoints of the same thread,so naturally all their thought process and resultant action involved him,his approval,they both looked up to him if they were in dilemma about something and invariably found that strength,that conviction to arrive at some decision,so he was always around for them bas dono ka dekhne ka nazariya alag tha

and then the next part was so awesome.Kesu's gussa on the look of Dushy and bacha acting all hubby trying to distance her from dushy ..the jeep scene was so very good. ..also the way he plans that smile on her face in the mango orchard is just awesome..Hmmm me skipping saying anything about Talli billi ..bring chandamama ASAP ..bACHPAN MEIN HI LE AAO TO PAKAO HER WITH HIS POEMS😆

Arrey bacche ne toh abhi suruaat ki hai apni aukat dikhane ki,aage,aage dekh hota hai kya😉 Aur Talli ko toh main jaldi Talsagara se tadipaar kar dungi don't worry😆

Awww my heart really goes out to the brat in the last part..ahhh how much it would have hurt his adoloscent mind taking all those cheap words about his Gulaal.His delimma ,his anger is so very well justified in this chapter beautifully corelating it with the opening sequence⭐️Aditi..i know you are busy..but I am so desperate to read what happens next...

Hmm Piyu,he always said whatever was in his heart na,it came so naturally to him,I also wanted to make a point about how much he hated keeping quiet about injustice he was man of action even in this young age he will not keep quiet or take in his stride anything and everything that was against the truth,and if that happened to involve Gulaal well impossible for anyone to get away after saying anything against her na Aww Piyu thanks yara I will try and update soon😳

Hats off gal..you are indeed treating the subject with finest detail and awesome perfection.I am in lubb with this SS.I can really imagine Mansi and Ali in all these scenes.Beautifully done!!🤗

Aww ab toh main cloud nine main pahuch ke wahi flaot kar rahi hu jab niche aaungi tab update karungi😆 Thanks for your lovely comments it means a lot to me,yeah le ek big hugswa meri taraf se🤗