Gulaal: What If chp 26(part II) upd Pg 57 - Page 28

Originally posted by: MR21

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Aditi 🤗🤗🤗

All the jhappis are for bring back Gulaal's diary 😳

Aww Thankwa,Yeah toh story ka bahut hi ahem hissa hai,isse toh lana hi tha😳

Coming to chapter...simply superb in one word 👏...MB thinking that kesar is now in correct state of mind where in he can understand the answers for his questions n also the reasons for all the answers...

Hmm MB is someone who will always honor his promises,and this is not different

MB thinking about kesar in kesar room ...MB is not that close to kesar when we compare it with vasant...vasant is an ideal son who he lost n then though he showers all his love of vasant n kesar to kesar...there is this feeling which he or anyone in the family can be able to get rid of vasant memory/thought in true sense...they never let go of vasant n his memories...they themselves hold to him n expected the same from kesar...N I also like the way he thinks about Dushy that he has changed n reformed to the circumstances after vasant death...

No Ramya,he was not closer to Vasant he admired and respected Vasant for what he was a noble and humble human being,PB was more close to Vasant,Vasant was this ideal son who did everything right where as Kesar was in comparison a lost and misbehaved kid who had lot of growing up to do but Kesar was always closer to his heart,if you remember that dialogue from the show immediately after panchayat order them to stay together for three moth for reconciliation and Kesar is brooding on how to manao MB,Gulaal tell him that MB will not be able to be naraz for a long and he will always be able to get his way with him

Just loved n loved Db n MB convo...the convo is so true in their own context...Mb being living in past n not even trying to let it go...but he has to be the one who can try to bring gulaal n pb out of this state n DB know this very well...As Db said there is always a way to get out of past but we dont look at that way as we may think its not correct or its out of law...DB is very well balanced about her statements ...she is so damn correct when she said that they are almost on the last phase of their life but what about gulaal...gulaal has a life which she not even started properly with vasant n her life changed completely...n she is still being living with that past n not even ready to go beyond her past with vasant...just loved the line when Db says that if mB thinks about gulaal being a daughter then why cant he accept and give her the right of being a DIL of this house...

Ahh Thanks for liking it Ramya this convo was written direct dil se,w/o much thinking i just kept writing and it flowed😳

MB is correct in his perspective but just like others in the family...even he is unable to see the bond kesar n gulaal have n share...where in Db is able to see the way kesar is all concern n responsible about gulaal...Ohh loved the way kesar has entered his room stating that what we see is not the actual truth...there can be a hidden truth...Kesar crying like a baby in front of his father😭...he is so disturbed but still he cant even let them know about this matter now when his sister is about to get married...he is so matured in this scene...though heartbroken...he is still trying to be matured...I also like how he explained MB about his breakdown n then about his trip back to city...

Hmm Kesar is wise beyond the years he has learnt at very young age a path cut out for him

but right now he is broken and shattered completely and yes even in this state he is mature enough to realize what his revelation will entail so he is trying to run away...

Kesar being all angry at gulaal but still thinking whether he hates her or not...n then re assuring himself that he hates her n why not she didn't told him about this to her kesar when he said that he will always trust her...Kesar thought is truly to his character when he thought to take away all the memories of vasant from gulaal when she is the one who did injustice to his brother, her husband n making sure that he will definitely make sure that his brother gets his justice...

Hmm some interesting scenes to write I guess,depicting his inner conflicts

So as the diary is with him...we can expect him to read it after going to city...so he will be getting to know the reason for gulaal's decision to keep the truth as a secret...though he will never agree to it atleast he will get to know what compelled her to take that decision...but he will be angry at her as she didnot told him anything about it...I am thinking will he read about Dushy kidnapping gulaal...if yes then have to see kesar's angry for dushy n gulaal too...dushy for doing that to his gulaal...gulaal for forgiving dushy even after he did this...n also looking forward to cold reaction from kesar to gulaal n dushy before he leaves...as now kesar took away all the memories/photos/diary of vasant from gulaal...will she be able to stay contently in that house...vasant memories are not there n her kesar will be angry n khafaa n more over he will not even talk to her most probably...will she now atleast think about what is more important n more required for her to stay in this house...vasant's memories or kesar's presence...

Kuch zyaada ho gayaa na mera so called prediction in the last para...cant help...see me very very eager to read the next chappie...cant wait...next weekend kab aayega...so please do

update soonnn

Ahh Ramya so may predictions wow,abhi toh mujhe bhi pata nahi kya hone wala hai,per thanks for giving me so may ideas,I will try and update one chapter cause I cannot do so next weekend,infact will be gayab from IF for a week starting tomorrow as I have my PMP exams next Tuesday😭

Thanks for you lovely comments and continual support,It means a lot😳

Originally posted by: without-fathom

Can I start with jumping in excitement about the diaries?! Yes yes yes yes! One sorely missed detail in the show itself - for all the range of reasons we can use to talk ourselves out of that disappointment - but SO GLAD, so glad that you're going to take it up next chapter Aditi - this will be wonderful! 🤗

Yes I think this is something they should have utilised for him to understand her stand,What's the point in pouring your heart into something If that's not going to be utilised to make an impact same goes for his letters at least while making him read those we knew what was going through his mind all those years that he spent in isolation but the impact was so mellowed down I can't find any reasons to justify that except the lack of time

Back to the chapter. MB cut himself a picture to feel for. Not sorry - but feel for alright. Age, loss, time, and the tight rope of circumstances that he hadn't truly caught a break from walking up. A father's loss of son, a father's worry for the other son, a head of the family's responsibilities - and to complicate it ALL very much - a daughter like DIL whose life, along with many unresolved issues in the family, could be solved with that ONE multi-cure of a solution DB talks about, but one cannot give consent to, for the sake of honoring Gulaal's prerogative! The irony, that MB, the eldest, would bind himself to this restrain - when it could be so much easier to do otherwise - but Gulaal herself in all her packed circumstances had jumped the gun. I'm never going to take away her intentions behind it. But it will also never change what she brought upon the family in its wake, in a long reverberating aftermath...

MB and DB convo i guess just flowed I didn't have to think much when I was writing this was the result of something that didn't go down very well with my analytical mind😕 when I was watching the show,they never showed why he always supported Gulaal's stand over and above Kesar's not that he didn't care for his son or loved him any less but he felt guilty about not being around when Gulaal was forced to take that decision and Kesar was too young to understand anything so in his opinion the relationship didn't have any future and he was completely justified in standing with his DIL not against his son but with his principles and I salute that man for that but I think it needed more elaboration then what was provided in the show

And if all that wasn't enough - Kesar is packing up to turn away from Gulaal - taking away even the memories of his brother who she has betrayed that much.

You just have to feel for every character in this story - what a rich show, and what a rich canonical tale you spin off it! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Thanks that's such a huge compliment Jzee,I am glad that I am able to depict my views convincingly and it gives me a great pleasure to associate myself with such a complex yet intriguing subject,your comments are what keeps me going so thanks for your support it means a lot to me😊

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Adu..What a Brilliant Chappi.🤗.So many interesting insights ..I particularly liked the way you actually provided a very heart wrenching conversation between two elderly person DB and MB.Wonderful convo..Specially the part where DB speaks about the future of Gulaal and her zaruraton ka rishta part BRILLIANT!!👏\

Thankswa Piyudi🤗 I am so glad you liked it but writing this convo was not so difficult cause this is something I always wanted to see in the show,they should have shown why MB always rooted for Gulaal's view point and DB toh always team GK na😳

AWWW The next emotional scene between father and son followed by DB and Kesar bonding..It was so heartwrenching that i5t brought tears in my eyes.You have to feel for Kesar ..You have to feel for him😭

Yes you have to feel for him but you also need to feel for Gulaal,she is not wrong in hiding the truth but where she went wrong was not putting that trust in her Kesar,she always told him that he was her kavach so how can you hide something from someone that's part of you and that's what she will understand in this story slowly😳

AWWW Adu this is what I adore about your SS you actually bring out and do justice to all the details which Cv's had completely forgotten...GULAAL'S DIARIES ...Am waiting for the pages to unfold themselves.

Yes they will unfold Piyu and will bring to light so much pain and sacrifices that went on behind the scene to keep the family together

Now what next...With misunderstandings in his heart is Kesar going to alienate himself from her or actually we have a nleap..M waiting with bated breath now👏Awesome update⭐️

Hmm ab yeah toh likne se pehle hi soch sakti hu,abhi toh mere dimag mein sirf project managment ke concept ghum rahe hai😆 Thanks for your lovely comments Piyu,I will try and uodate one chapter later today if possible🤗

Originally posted by: sharmishta

Hi Aditi,

so sorry 4 nt commentn on chap 13... 🤔😔

That's oh Sharmishta ,you are here now and that's what matters😊


it was a heart wrnchng chappi... d way u penned down MB's agony of losin his firstbrn was really poignant... a irretrievable loss that shattered him completely...😭

Hmm MB was a broken man after loss of his first son na,he was just trying to accept the loss even after so many years

jst loved MB-DB convo. DB was one sensible lady in d whle family... 👏

Thanks yaar,yes i thought so too DB was someone who could see through each and every member of the family

My heart went out to Kesar... Being betrayed by some1, whom he had always put on a pedestal.. it was a crushing blow to his unwavering faith in her... his inner turmoil was felt in each word... evnthough it was almst beyond his endurance he still chose to keep mum for his sister's happiness... ..

Kesar's wise beyond is years at 18,and yes he knows he cannot keep quiet if he comes face to face with either Gulaal or Dushyant so he wants to get away asap,let's see how successful his plan is😳

So gulaal's diary is with him nw... hpe dat, it will answr all his questions..

Good going Aditi,

Thanks you so much for liking it😊

waiting 4 some bewda-pareshaani scenes...

Ye le & 4 dis emotional chappi...

I am not sure about pareshaani scene😳 shayad scope na hoo per dekhti hu,Thanks for your lovely comments and support🤗

Originally posted by: minizz

Aditi🤗...main aa gayi

Hey Mini🤗 Good to see you back,hope you are feeling better

WOW...this was just too good yaar.This chapter belonged to MB.I was so involved in his character in this update.He made me cry.His thoughts about Dushyant,missing Vasant,his emotions when he sees Kesar breakdown and his talk with DB regarding Gulaal and Kesar,I could connect with each and every scene of his,his emotions and feeling of helplessness and uncertainity.You brought them all out beautifully.I really enjoyed the MB-DB talk.Both made some very valid points.Yes I do agree with DB regarding Gulaal's future.She is indeed speaking the truth.Gulaal is young and she doesnt deserve to spend the rest of her life reliving her memories of Vasant.It is not fair to her but at the same time I felt what MB was saying held far more meaning here.He is not against the GK bond.He just doesn't want them to accept the realtionship under any pressure.He doesnt want Gulaal to feel any burden.I really loved that.

I think MB's character had that strength to hold on to his principles they never showed that explicitly but i think he was a man who will always stand up for what he believes in and for whom he believe in,I am glad you could identify with his dilemma it was not easy for him to stand by Gulaal going against what DB and most of his family members wanted but he only wanted what Gulaal and Kesar wanted and yeah he was getting older and relied so much on Dushyant,he wanted Kesar to grow up and fill that void left by Vasant but he also knew and accepted that Kesar was different

awww...Kesar...I had expected the change in him yet that one dialogue of his managed to shock me.

Kesar is broken at the moment but he will get chance to reflect upon lot of things Gulaal did for him and then compare that to what he overheard there,he will try hard to hate her of course😳

The scene with him hanging on to MB's feet was so moving.very nice.Even though he is breaking apart he manages to take a mature decision to stay away from Dushyant and Gulaal so that he can avoid any confrontation which could mar Devki's wedding preparations.That really impressed me a lot

He is mature beyond his years Mini,He realizes how difficult it will be for the marriage to take place if Dushyant's sins were in front of everyone,He did love Devki and he couldn't bring himself to reveal anything that will harm her happiness

.And that last scene...I could really see Neil in that scene...so he took a part of Gulaal with him even though that was not what he intended or maybe subconsciously he did want that. He took the albums and the diary with him...hmmm so what is going to happen next?Will he go through the diary?...well I don't think he would do that right now cause he is very angry with her at the moment( and no Kesar...you don't hate her as you think😭).I am so looking forward to the next update but Aditi take your time cause I know the next chapter will be worth the wait and yes Best of Luck for your exam😃

Lot of expectations,I don't know if I will be able to meet those yaar,I will try and update soon,Thanks for your wishes😳

Thank you so much for this wonderful chapter😊