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Posted: 13 years ago
updated my comments on prev page😳
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updated my comments in previous page 😳

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res 😕

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Aditi 🤗...atlast the secret is out in front of kesar n he is all broken 😭
I just loved teh way the whole sequence took place...duggu being all cool even after seeing dushy near mandir n not even effecting his puja...loved there convo very much...feeling bad for dushy that he is trying to protect his younger brother when he himself is telling him indirectly that he is the culprit of killing his brotehr n the most painful that gulaal kept it as a secret from the family n mostly she kept it as a secret to kesar...he cant even stay there afetr listening those words...dushy will deffo do what he said that if he is out of the good books of his family then he will never leave duggu anymore...felt really bad for kesar when he is crying out vasant's name
Loved this part Aditi...so looking forward to his reaction to dushy n especially gulaal...n ofcourse her reaction to his reactions...

Edited by MR21 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Dushyant 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Gulaal😭

Kesar😭😭


Aditi🤗So finally Kesar knows😭😭Wow...this was a brilliant update.very powerful.I could totally imagine the actors act out this scene.The Durgesh-Dushyant Confrontation was so good.I loved Dushyant's dialogues so much.He is a murderer and he needs to pay for his sins but here my heart went out to him because he is trying hard to make up and genuinely wants to protect his little bro from the evil plans of Durgesh but bechaara he is unaware as you wrote that his whole life has been changed😭Durgesh was also equally good here...menacing with that sarcastic bite to his dialogues.loved it.The whole scene was awesome.and finally coming to Kesar...he ran away before he could hear the rest of Dushyant's talk na but I don't think even that would have made any difference to him at that moment. I don't blame him...his whole world has crashed in front of him.His brother has been murdered by Dushyant bhai and Gulaal knew about it and still she hid the fact.No...I don't blame him at all.The last scene was heart wrenching with him calling out for his Vasant bhai.Now I am really eager to know what his reaction to Gulaal's involvement.

Yeh le ek badi si hug for this powerful update partner🤗
Edited by minizz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
😲 The confrontation is knocking on the doors! It's amazing what fiction does to our minds - we wait relentlessly to no end for something to happen - and then right on the threshold we find it hard to just sit down and watch it unfold!

So I somehow missed reading 12-4th and read that, and 13-1,2 in ago Aditi - and what a gripping sequence of progress in the plot this has been on multiple fronts! Kesar becoming far more conscious of the whole relationship with Gulaal to an extent that he seeks her out more perpetually and in more ways than before - and when that ground was set for action, bam! The Dushyant truth unveils - in no glory, sadly in fact, not even in the meager saving grace for Kesar runs off before hearing that! I doubt though, if hearing it would have redeemed anything or anyone right away at least. A storm takes a while to abate, and one can hardly hope for its passing to bring no destruction!

Eagerly in anticipation and mild dread about KD showdown soon to happen. And GK. Wow. Two blows too big for anything that age and time and complacence may have prepared him for!

Thanks for updating regularly Aditi, and sorry again for being not half of that as a reader - but I do want to say that "detailing" as you call it is absolutely not something you should strive to shed off! It's working wonders weaving this what if!

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi aditi :-), wonderful chapter yaar. The revealation of secret was penned down very nicely. And u chose perfect quote of geeta for dushy.
Now since our kesuda knows the truth , i m eager to know what will be his next step.
:-D
love and hugs for wonderfull update
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Posted: 13 years ago
@Aditi, thanks for the lovely update.

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Adu final revelation ho gaya😭

Mini I also want to cry now😭Dushy😭Gullu😭Kesu😭
A big jhappi to you for this fast paced update🤗
But I really lubbed the way how you handled the revelations..Wonderful..Kesar followinbg Dushy and then I must admit that I lubbed the Dushy -Duggu convo..Even in this show there was so much potential but 😕..I lubbed the way you have ignored the huge blot Talli in your story..I am lubbing it but I thoroughly enjoyed the revelations👏
I am eager to see how Kesar will react now ..Will he confront her or will her leave silently brooding for the city just like the showIt is now getting interesting ..I am waiting eagerly waiting for an update from you..Thank you so much for the lubbly update🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

mhara res che 😳

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Adu first of all a big danda to you for saying that you are trying to curb your natural instinc😡t.It may sound preachy but JUST BE YOURSELF!! and write whatever you feel like..Its your conviction,your belief and one should actually never compromise on that.

Okie will be myself from now on,I just said that cause i thought it was getting bit lengthier for a short story

Ok now coming to the first quote..Ahhh you just made my day coz...The verbose audacity yet with the hint of transcending the narrow prejudices of society ,is the forte of the Gita.and the quote is just so true.Ultimate redemption and finally salvation from past sins occurs instantaneously with the awareness and regret you have for what have you done.A sin committed can be only forgiven if one opts the path of redemption and awareness.So aptly used for Dushy here.

Well The Gita as we both know has capability of unraveling many mysteries and opening up of completely new horizons,all is required is opening of your mind and interpreting of verses that can sometime be life changing,I have always gone back to the holy book every time i needed that little bit of additional strength to go on or try and understand certain behaviors

So Now coming to the chapter ,some interesting revelations are going to come up ,I guess and I lubbed the twist you gave to the revelation scene where Kesar overhears the conversation.His anger is justified and the way you have brought this is so apt..I am now waiting with bated breath as to what happens next.The USP of this chappi was its unpredictability..The whole time,I was thinking as to what will happen next.
Lubbly update Adu and Big jhappi to you...Waiting eagerly for the next one🤗

Thanks for your lovely comments Piyu,I am glad you could relate to this scene cause I wanted it to be different from the show but still retain the basic essence of his growing suspicions and anxiety in regards to GD relationship


Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Adu final revelation ho gaya😭
Ha yeah toh hona hi tha na
Mini I also want to cry now😭Dushy😭Gullu😭Kesu😭
A big jhappi to you for this fast paced update🤗
But I really lubbed the way how you handled the revelations..Wonderful..Kesar followinbg Dushy and then I must admit that I lubbed the Dushy -Duggu convo..Even in this show there was so much potential but 😕..I lubbed the way you have ignored the huge blot Talli in your story..I am lubbing it but I thoroughly enjoyed the revelations👏
Aww Thanks Piyu I this conversation was the key i think cause though Kesar currently only sees one side of the story on reflection when he recalls this conversation he will see lot of points emerging which he will have to address even though he will never ever forgive Dushy😭
I am eager to see how Kesar will react now ..Will he confront her or will her leave silently brooding for the city just like the showIt is now getting interesting ..I am waiting eagerly waiting for an update from you..Thank you so much for the lubbly update🤗

Hmm intersting hai na,I will try and update later today,Thanks for your constant support,it means so much,I wouldn't have been able to continue this without your encouragements hugswa🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: MR21

res 😳


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Aditi 🤗...wow...what a twist yaar 👏...making kesar more confused n impatient to know the real truth about accident...
Coming to the starting of the chappie where kesar telling lie to gulaal abt the chit...aah kesu telling a lie to his gullu...but aur kya kar saktha hai...first of all she is not giving any answers to him when he is asking her from many days...n if he tells about this..she may stop him from letting know the truth by giving emotional blackmail or by telling to any elders in the house..so he has to be like this na...her worry is justified as she know about his keen interest n need to know the truth behind accident...

Hey Ramya🤗 Gullu is just being Galool,she knows he is very close to finding out about the accident and that will lead him to Dushyant eventually,she is just trying to delay the inevitable by her mollycoddling which makes Kesar more suspicious and curious

wow he came to make her room to scare her n also apologize for his some what rude behavior na 😳...but sach mein usse ek badaa sa shock lagaa hoga seeing dushy n gulaal entering her room...from the convo between gulaal n dushy...kesar didnot get any clear idea of what is the truth..

Yes their talk only leads him to more confusion and that's why he follows Dushyant to find out the truth😳

.but i feel/hope atleast he consider n remember these words of gulaal n dushy after knowing the truth n the reason behind in keeping it as a secret...As Piu said...now the story is very unpredictable...very much interesting twist...so please do update soon...waiting n waiting...me feel bad thinking about the lambhi judaai after this whole truth revelation scenes...

Well judaai toh aani hi hai aur aayegi,he will be dwelling upon lot of things on hindsight but for now his immediate reaction is to shut out Gulaal and Dushyant you can't blame him i guess


Originally posted by: MR21

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Aditi 🤗...atlast the secret is out in front of kesar n he is all broken 😭

Yes he is that's what was going to happen na,once he uncovered the truth

I just loved teh way the whole sequence took place...duggu being all cool even after seeing dushy near mandir n not even effecting his puja...loved there convo very much...feeling bad for dushy that he is trying to protect his younger brother when he himself is telling him indirectly that he is the culprit of killing his brotehr n the most painful that gulaal kept it as a secret from the family n mostly she kept it as a secret to kesar...he cant even stay there afetr listening those words...

Thanks Ramya,I tried to keep the revelation less dramatic to the point more than revelations it was reaction of individual that requires a lot more thought and sensitivity as the subject is such,I hope i will be able to do justice to this

dushy will deffo do what he said that if he is out of the good books of his family then he will never leave duggu anymore...
As i quoted that verse from the Gita,says it all really where I am taking Dushy in my story
felt really bad for kesar when he is crying out vasant's name
Loved this part Aditi...so looking forward to his reaction to dushy n especially gulaal...n ofcourse her reaction to his reactions...
Thanks for your lovely comments and support Ramya it means a lot,I will try and update later today

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