Gulaal: What If chp 26(part II) upd Pg 57 - Page 29

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Posted: 13 years ago


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Posted: 13 years ago
@Aditi...


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Posted: 13 years ago

Thanks Kalika,for your support and lovely flowers,I have updated new chapter hope you like it😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww Aditi mera Holi wala scene.It was so beautiful.Will comment in detail tomorrow😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
res 😳

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Aditi 🤗...me loved each n every bit of this chapter a lot 😳
Coming to the first line where gulaal scolds talli not to color her 😆(feels good as we didnot get it in the show even though when ever talli does any wrong thing gulaal never scolded her 😡...bechaara kesar had to get the scolding for the things talli did ) as its only her Kesar's right to do that n the worst is that he is not even talking n meeting her n the family n aliened himself from the last 3 years ...so kesar aliened himself from family n especially his Gulaal without telling them any reason...
Kudos for bringing up with this convo between PB n DB at this point 👏...Pb feelings happy that now kesar is not that attached to gulaal...how bad that being a mother she not understood kesar where in DB was bang on with her understanding about kesar n his bond with gulaal...DB me love you for giving that gyaan for Pb 👏...she totally need it from many years...
Need to say that I loved the next scene 😳...Kesar being the same kesar of Gulaal even after these 3 years...so just like before he first came to meet his Gulaal n making sure he colors her first...Thank you for this Holi scene 😃...we wanted this in the show after post leap...Gulaal being overwhelmed seeing her kesar after all these years...her reaction is so real when it comes to kesar na 😳...ohh he is very upset n guilty for his behavior na ...but no worries as he is again here for being her kavach...me loved loved loved the hug between them which reduces their distance of all these years ☺️
Loved the bond between DB n Kesar...he is totally in explanation mode seeing her na...he is so desperate to talk about an exception for his behavior and got a slap 😆...gulaal being his kavach trying to save him from Db...but kesar is too good when it comes to pacify Db na n making sure no one will scold him now...so Pb is thinking about Db words...I hope she understands n dont go blindly with sudha's words for marrying kesar to talli which will never happen...me also liked the way kesar broke down in front of Pb...
Ohhh Gulaal being all ignoring n indifferent towards kesar n he is unable to take it...he is like this na always wanted her full attention 😳...but me liked that gulaal is bhaavkaying n being aloof...he is so desperate to take her punishment n go back to their previous bond...bas gulaal baath karna chod de toh bhanda kuch bhi karne ke liye ready ho jaatha hai na 😉...so he read Gulaal diaries n he know what she is going through all these years n how she is killing herself slowly...not to worry when her kavach is going to make her live again...
Ahhh I just loved the way he said how can she make him a paraaya when he did this to her n I loved that she didnot stop pouring out her heart in front of him n her accusations about his behavior all these years...bas madam baath karne lagee aur sir ne toh punishment lene ki aur punishment kahaa lena hai uss place ka bhi decision le liya 😆...how can you stop the chapter there when he is giving his hand for her to hold without giving us her response to his gesture 😡

Loved it Aditi 😃...holi scene n of course there meet after all these years n his ways to make her talk to him...so as Kesar read Gulaal's diaries...he will be knowing about vasant's death truth...does he also know about Dushy kidnapping gulaal...if yes then why he is not concerned about dushy in this chapter...or his main n only concentration is on gulaal n his reason to come here to ask about why cant she keep trust in her kavach by letting him know about the truth...we didnot get any convo between kesar n dushy...do u have a plan to bring it up in next chapter...me eagerly waiting for the next chapter now as we will be getting similar scene where in kesar n Gulaal will be going to that outskirts place all alone on his bike without anyone to disturb them...

ps: patha nahi kya kya likhaa hai maine 😕...me in office n ghar mein net is being dabloo from couple of days ...so me unresing in office...there were many distractions when I am unresing it...so bear with my comments...
ALL THE BEST for the exams...prepare well for them...

Edited by MR21 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Really love your story so far!! Looks like Kesar's gussa's cooled down, can't wait for the upcoming confrontation...
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Posted: 13 years ago
res😳.. I will unres altogether here 😊 .. but before that ye lo 👏.. Brilliant job Aditi.. I really liked the holi wala chapter..😳
Edited by alanta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aditi🤗, lovely chapter dear. i loved holi scene of gulsar, always wanted one in show post leap.
db and kesu's interaction was very good, and also pb-db convo. really gulaal was like vasant's shadow for them and not just bahu.
and now i m eager to read next gulsar scene😳, filled with lot of energy and emotions.
Edited by princessofkesar - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
unrse done in same page 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
Adu ye le my big jhappi pappi🤗 on this brilliant chappi.So many shades and so many layers in a single chappi..👏👏
I loved how Gullu jhadofied Talli ..I lubb this Gullu who actually scolds Talli and I agree with Ramya that show mein to Talli prem sar chadh kar bol raha tha Gulaal k...
I lubbed how you gave a detailed DB PB convo..As a mother I can understand the predicament of PB but looks like DB really understands the whole bond between GK.
AND FINALLY THE HOLI Scene..Lubbed it.All those pent up emotions and Kesar taking his HAQ of colouring Gulaal and then the simultaneous narrowing of distances.SO heartwrenching.Lubbed it totally😳👏then DB kesu convo was brilliantly written.
Oh Kesu the bacha seeking all attention form wifey is back and Gullu all in complain mode 😳Lubbed it👏Adu I am now eagerly waiting for their little getaway now...Haila intezaar nahi hota...
But first ALL THE BEST for your exams🤗Lubbed the update ⭐️

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