Gulaal: What If chp 26(part II) upd Pg 57 - Page 24

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Adu Adu Adu. .🤗

Pehle big jhappi for two quickie updates yara..Thanks for making the weekend so special BY UPDATING TWO PARTS..Thanks yara..😳

Aww Piyu return hugswa🤗 per you know what I didn't write the next one I promised I will, I just didn't feel like,I am sorry,maaf kar de na pls😭

Now coming to the chappi..❤️.He he My paapi atma ko thoda sa sukoon aya😳

chalo accha hai,per isse jyada main nahi lkh sakti,you will have to help me agar aur paap/chii chahiye😳

Oh Gullu and her constant denial..While Kesar still wants answers and Galool madam phir se changing the subject😆and Can I say I lubb the nwe cupid DB hai unhi ki wajah se KG sharing a room.I also lubbed the bonding between DB and Kesu...ahhh he is such a bacha na..😆.always loving being pampered😳

Kesar is still 18 yaar,he has every right to get in to that asm(attention seeking mode) especially when he is not well,aur DB always had a soft corner for him na,so naturally she is going to indulge him for a while fulfilling all his whims and fancy even if MB feels otherwise😳

And then the subsequent MB and Son convo with Kesar apologizing.You know what this is what had made Kesar so special,He was one person who instantly reacts being impulsive and the very next moment realises his mistake too ...I loved the little apology .

I didn't want to make a big scene about it cause MB was assured by Dushyant and seeing him in suffering when he tried bowing to DB his father's heart already had melted na,so that apology was enough for him even though he knew very well that Kesar didn't mean a word of it

I must admit I ma lubbing your Gulaal appears more human to me..In fact very human...coz she is not at all skeptical to be near Kesar 😳and Oh little boy understands ki he cannot stay in the same room but I love Gullu and Db who kinda convinced her...

Hmm he does understand but at the same time he won't leave any opportunity to be near his Gulaal😉

Oh and Now coming to paap😆Jokes apart .I lubbed it..coz u captured the very basic essence of the awkwardness of a young boy with lots of subtlety ..OH I was in splits when Gullu just barged into the bathroom and then the little ahem ahem😳Hai my paapi atam ko thoda sukoon aya😳

Hahahaha That's how all guys will react na,and yeah I cannot ever explicitly state things like this,it always has to be subtle more left to readers imaginations than stating it word by word,you can call me old fashioned but that's what I prefer😳

Chalo finally he admits that he is in love with his wife😳

Hmm he admitted to himself na,ab dekho when he tells his wife

Awww That brat looking for bahanas to get close to her..He he😆and then his simultanaeous anger lashing out at everyone due to his irritation of not being near Gulaal...hai itni jaldi judai bhi aa gayi...Db I must admit is one sensible woman who can actually sense whats wrong

DB will be all that SF couldn't she will try her best to make Gulaal see futility of living in her world of idealisms and judai toh abhi nahi aayi re,abhi toh truth pata chalne ke baad there will be lambi judai...😭

Oh I simply adored the little matching session which was Kesar's brainchild and lubbed the way he teased her wanting to help her the same way she did...Hawww such a shrewd bacha..But Gullu ka signal nahi baja lagta hai ab tak😆Warna she wud have started with her paap and bhavna rant😆

Ha re Gullu ki tubelight nahi jali abhi tak nahi toh woh Kesar ki choose kiye hue kapde thodi na pehenti😆

One Complaint Adu..You cut short the mandir sceneBut I am now waiting for further revelations and how KG dynamics would change henceforth...🤗

Sorry,sorry and sorry again by the time I reached to this point I was really tired and didn't have any energy left to elaborate,so I will try and make up for this later...promise😳

Kudos Adu for such an interesting update⭐️..Brilliant..I just can't wait for the next one🤗

Thanks for you lovely comments Piyu,I will update next saturday,I am still working on that project plan hopefully will finish soon and send over🤗

Originally posted by: MR21

res for part 4 😳

Edit:

Aditi 🤗...me loving this pati-patni scenes so much 😳

Thanks Ramya,I have written it cause you guys asked me too,glad you liked it😊

Starting my comments on the most irritating person 🤢...why did talli giving those suspicios looks to gulaal as if gulaal is snatching her husband from her 😡...kesar is so caring na when he asked her whether she wants to sleep 😳...the past is not even making him sleep peacefully...n he is unable to recollect the things...gulaal being in galool mode just making him divert rather than answering his questions...so kesar know that he cannot stay in her room...kithna shareef bhanda hai na 😳.

Aur nahi toh kya,tujhe kya laga Kesar sirf chance marta hai😉 Gulaal ko toh abhi koi idea hi nahi hai na ki Kesar ke dimag mein aur kya kya chal raha hai besides what he has overheard...

..gulaal has a basic sense here in stooping him n asking him to stay in her room...DB u r a rockstar...just she orders n no one even kesar n Mb can deny her...kesar taking full mazaa in being treated like a kid na...he is always like this na when he said that he will not do this again...thats a different thing that he never follow it...I can understand Mb issues n concerns for gulaal n kesar staying in her room...but good that gulaal atleast convinced him that she is not forced to do this...

Well Kesar is still bacha na so he like being pampered he only acts like a grown-up in front of Gulaal,MB can see the froth coming trouble so naturally he is concerned and Gulaal is oblivious to all these blissfully so we can get some good lighter scene before the big revelations na

Haha...he is all sharmaying n fully embarrassed 😆...bechaara kesar he had to push her out of the bathroom...but this a common thing which we see in the boys at that age na...so she helping him without knowing abt the effect she is making on him...so he is accepting that she is his wife n he loved her...that confusion whether it is correct or wrong but then accepting her being his wife...Awww I just loved this scene between them...she doing all pati seva n he nigarofying his wife who is all dressed up for the puja...he very well know how to make use of the situation na...such a brat...he is totally using all bahaana's for being with her holding her hand n keeping his head in her lap...bechaari gullu thinking he requires her but the truth is he always required her near him na...ohh he is missing her as he is not staying with her in her room...yaaa he is shouting at talli 😃...so kesar is showing all anger n frustration on being away from gulaal...the difference between his behavior towards gulaal n talli is always there which mB n Pb are neglecting being blind...but DB is very wise woman n she is the only one who is able to see what the relation between kesar n gulaal is n why kesar is showing this difference between gulaal n talli...

Ahh I was bit nervous when I was writing this part,It's so not my forte,you can probably tell but anyway I tried,am happy you liked it and Kesar has not yet fully realised how difficult it's going to get being away from her but he has already started that journey😳

wah wah kesar...kya idea hai...he didnot left gulaal with any time to get ready n made her cupboard a mess for searching her a dress which will match his dress...so she has to accept na without any argument...kesar all in teasing mode when she is not even getting what he is saying to her...n its only DB who has registered this dress matching between wife n husband...bhaaki sab waste hai yaar...me sad that puja is done without any description but happy that talli will not be in between them to spoil it...

Hmm Kesar and his ideas,he did get her to wear what he wanted na by delaying her and messing up her cupboard phir bhi Gullu ko koi hint nahi mila kher,she will learn soon

Aditi...loved it yaar...all pati-patni scenes...thank you for changing the actual plan for adding these scenes for us...looking forward for next chapter for the whole past revelation now...n then the eventual lambi judaai...

Thanks Ramya, yeah will post update on next Saturday hopefully it will be convincing😳

Well came to know abt the status of the project from the reply u gave to piu...waiting to know abt it...

I couldn't do it yaar,I am just snowed under with work at the moment,I will try and see If I can manage sometime to complete it😭

Thanks for your lovely comments and constatnt support,big hugswa🤗

Originally posted by: princessofkesar

aditi 🤗,i m so happy 😃. you gave us some special romantic scenes of kes gul.

this gullu is so smart , she knows how to calm him down.

and i love db, thanks to her our kesgul shared same room😳.

i loved all the scenes of kes gul specially the bathroom one😆.and . i can't wait for next update , the shiv mandir puja as i know there will be lots of action and drama to occur at that time.

Originally posted by: kalika.j

@Aditi,



kalika

Originally posted by: minizz

res😳

Aditi🤗I just loved it yaar.Both the chapters were really good.

Aww Thanks Mini🤗 glad you enjoyed them

coming to Part 3 It was interesting to see Kesar stop Gulaal's patronising act of ruffling his hair.He wants answers and he is determined to get them na.

Ha determined Kesarwho forgets everything and anything when he looks into Gullu's eyes,all it takes is for her to hold his hands and that's it😳

The equation between them is changing subtly and both are aware of this.Even Gulaal seems to be quite the sharp one here unlike her counterpart from the show😆hawww but Kesar ke sawaalon ka jawaab nahi diya Gullu ne.uske chit ne bacha liya use and how can one expect Kesar to concentrate on anything else when his Gulaal is hurt.I loved the small moment and the brief eyelock😳

Yeah he has started recognising those signs that he is getting but Gullu is completely unaware she still treats him like a kid,she is going to get a zor ka jhatka soon😆

before Dushyantji tapkaos in😆awww I m loving DB and Kesar's bonding here.I would have loved to see this on the show.

DB is going to be team Kesar all the way,I so missed not having anyone to support him for all his stubbornness and demands he just needed someone to understand him and make him realize his mistakes and it wouldn't take just one dialogue from that ms. know all it would have to be gradual process,chalo let's see how I can put this point forward

I can understand MB's frustration and fear here but MB aap apne bete ka mannn nahi padh paa rahe hain usme toh sirf Gullu hi Gullu hai😆DB thank you for shooing off Talli.jaa Talli jaa...chali jaa😆

MB can see what DB can't na,he knows Gulaal very well na and always knew that it will be difficult for her to see Kesar in Vasant's place,even though all wanted him to fit in his mojris and fill that space left by him but not in Gulaal's life,her life she had full control of what she wanted atleast in MB's opinion,din't know if I am making any sense😕

Part 4:uff this part was just amazing.The mind of a young 18 year old boy was portrayed beautifully👏Mb's fear is justified in a way na but I don't care as long as I get to see some sweet moments between GK.haawww shaitaan Kesar...now he doesn't want to leave her na.He is getting used to her presence in his room.That was written wonderfully Aditi.hahaha his shyness and the eventual close moment that they share in the bathroom was so nice.His confusions were so real and one could totally relate to that.So finally he is starting to realize his feelings for Gullu and Gullu for once is similar to her namesake from the show😆and hai abhi se flirting shuru...Kesar tu toh chupa rustam nikla re...help her with what exactly may I ask😉😆I am sure one person other than me would have had fun reading this part.my fellow paapi aatma😆

Chalo I am glad you enjoyed and yes Piyu liked it too upar dekh uske commenta se pata chaling,per aur chii nahi hoga so be prepared for boring revelations😆

Thank you so much Aditi for these wonderful chapters .So much is happening and I guess as soon as he accepts his love for her everything will come crashing down na...but tabhi toh mazaa aayega...looking forward to the next update eagerly

Thanks Mini🤗 for your lovely comments,I hope you like the next chapter yaar I am going to twist it a bit,hopefully it's won't be complete mess

First of all muje maaro Aditi.. I wont complain.. but I am really sorry dear.. though no point in it'

I donno what to say yaar.. sorry for a 1000000000000000 times😭

Chapter 9

Beautiful scenic description dear.. really felt like watching this right before the eyes'its really a strange sort but a very good feeling to watch the setting sun..often feels like the sun is trying to convey or narrate manythings at a time and it is such a sight where we would love to forget every burden of ours and just absorb all its beauty in to us.. its always mesmerizing

Back to Gulsar..

And again Gulaal with her usual jap.. every others except Kesar'. Why cant she accept her sadness in leaving Kesar before him.. really she is Galool and finally made got him anger too.. Gulaaal' but she so knows how to get hold of him and his anger na'

The depiction Gulaal's affirmation of promise to Vasanth which is related to Kesar was so in time..

*Deep sigh* Gulaal abhi yeh sab keh rahi hein.. but agar asal main aisa kuch hua toh and thanks that its Kesar and no one else..chahe dharthi idhar ki udhar kyun na ho jaaye Kesar Gulaal ke siwa kisis aur ke barein main sochega bhi nahin isliye Gulaal tum bach gayi' but deep in her heart she to knows the fact na'

Poor Poonamba

The whole new paadshaala thing .. good thought that u brought it here too.. The stunt thing:.. well hahaha abhi toh bahut saare pade hein yet to happen..

And Kesar sabse pehle Gulaal ko milne aaya '😊

mein yahan hi saare unres kholdungi.. before ur next update