Gulaal: What If chp 26(part II) upd Pg 57 - Page 23

Originally posted by: sharmishta

Aditi🤗,

Sharmishta🤗

Aww such a cute emo😳

Kesar in Rambo mode...dishum dishum..

OMG, he got hurt...

Yup Kesar in Rambo mood,when he is angry all rationalism goes out of window na😊

MB's worry is justifiable... aftr vasant, it's kesar who's his sole spprt n reasn for exsistnce, na...

Aditi, jst love d way u depict d depth of kesar-dushy bond n MB-dushy bond...

Thanks,MB's worried as father for his gussail son naturally and yeah after Vasant he expects Kesar to understand his responsibilities and act maturely but he forgets that he is expecting this from a 18 year old ,who is bound to succumb to his inbuilt temper once in a while...

really u r doing a fab job, yaar...

Loved the emo,so sweet...

coming 2 d secnd part,

aww, hug bhi hogaya... evn d very thought of losing her is killn him,...

yaar, ye le ... jst 4 u... keep writn... waitin 4 sum pati seva scenes... thoda rmnce bhi chahiye...


Hmm sab hoga bus thoda intezaar,Thanks for your lovely comments and awesome emoticons,I will update later today,hope you will find what you are looking for in the update😳

Originally posted by: Kesarmania

hi aditi , 🤗so sweet of you to come to this forum from your holiday break and gives us this chotu update.

hey Shradha🤗,ha IT wale sab kaam schedule ke hisab se karte hai come what may😉
so part of mystery [ daibha] is solved😎

Ha i thought she was someone that deserved proper closure...
but there are so many secrets yet to be revealed to kesu,

i know you will do full justice to story.👍🏼

Thanks for the trust in my abilities Shradha,I will try my best😊

also i demand romatic moments of kesgul, when gulaal will be taking care of our bedridden kesu.😳

arrey sab hoga,bas thoda intezaar😉

thanks for update dear😃

Res for part 3😳

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Adu.🤗..First of all a big huge jhappi for this fantastic weekend update🤗

I was looking forward to it And what a treat it was regarding the flow of events..Right from the beginning where Gulaal is at her patronizing best ruffling his hair and trying to reprimand him for his tardiness.I lubbed that and Then Kesar at his Kesariya best promptly speaking his mind not even waiting for an iota of a second to ask her .Wow! You just have maintained the essence of the show so beautifully.I lubbed how Gulaal froze with fear and quickly diverted his question ..OH GALOOL!THATS WHAT MAKES YOU SO ADORABLE!ONE SMARTY WOMAN!

And Kesar soon forgets what he was asking and quickly back to his Gulaalism😆And then the beautiful and heartwarming home coming😳I adored the DB convo and I really missed DB in the show..And Certainly a very big jhappi for band bajaoing of Talli😆I lubb how you made DB in team KG The confidence with which she made Kesar a responsible man is awesome.Oh Now I am so looking forward to their aram se convo in their room😛(Kya karun my atma is super paapi😆) and then the shiv mandir scene without Talli looming large on their heads.

Lubbly Update Adu..Fast paced and beautiful👏ab next chappi jaldi la🤗

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Res for part 3😳

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Adu.🤗..First of all a big huge jhappi for this fantastic weekend update🤗

Hey Piyu big hugswa to you too for prompt comments🤗

I was looking forward to it And what a treat it was regarding the flow of events..Right from the beginning where Gulaal is at her patronizing best ruffling his hair and trying to reprimand him for his tardiness.I lubbed that and Then Kesar at his Kesariya best promptly speaking his mind not even waiting for an iota of a second to ask her .Wow! You just have maintained the essence of the show so beautifully.I lubbed how Gulaal froze with fear and quickly diverted his question ..OH GALOOL!THATS WHAT MAKES YOU SO ADORABLE!ONE SMARTY WOMAN!

Ha re Piyu,I have tried to retain same behavioral characteristics of show where possible,Kesar won't be same if he waited to speak his mind and Gulaal will not be Gulaal if she replied to his questions na,He is very near to the truth now so it's just question of how long before he find out the truth and the resultant fallout...

And Kesar soon forgets what he was asking and quickly back to his Gulaalism😆And then the beautiful and heartwarming home coming😳I adored the DB convo and I really missed DB in the show..And Certainly a very big jhappi for band bajaoing of Talli😆I lubb how you made DB in team KG The confidence with which she made Kesar a responsible man is awesome.Oh Now I am so looking forward to their aram se convo in their room😛(Kya karun my atma is super paapi😆) and then the shiv mandir scene without Talli looming large on their heads.

Hmm DB always believed Gulaal belonged within that home and Kesar will always follow in his brothers footsteps as long as she was behind him,she was the one who said to Gulaal that she needs someone who will pahnao her kangan na,so I wrote that scene where he is putting bangles for her,she will ultimately realise his worth in his life but Galoolism will have to be conquered before that...Paap aur chii se mera dur tak vasta nahi hai,samaj hi nahi aata kya karu😆

Lubbly Update Adu..Fast paced and beautiful👏ab next chappi jaldi la🤗

Thanks for lovely commentsPiyu,I will update next part later tonight😳

Originally posted by: MR21

part 3 ke liye res 😳

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Aditi 🤗...yeh jhappi le for this week end update...

Aww Ramya Thanks you so much yaar🤗

Gulaal care n concern for kesar is always treat to watch...so kesar is very impatient to know the answers for his questions...just asking them without any delay...well he is always the same...gulaal is pretty much in shock n as always she is just trying to make him divert from these questions...well kesar read her diary 😲...when 😕...he might have read it some years back n so is his dislike towards dushy...well is this the reason that he never likes dushy staying near gulaal n his constant reminder to gulaal to stay away from dushy in his letters...gulaal is speechless na n she is so lost that she is about to hurt her...but kesar kaise usse kuch hone de saktha 😳...he is there to save her...offo do no ek doosre mein ithne khogayee 😳...

No he has not read her diary,but he is aware that she was writing one and this could have been instance where he accidentally walked on when she was making an entry and he read it,I have just kept it loose here so readers can draw their own conclusions on when he read that but as he is still asking her question about accident he is not aware of the secret she has kept from him all these years

Good job PB in convincing MB to bring DB...ab aayega mazaa 😃...sudha 😡...gulaal already started doing ding pati seva 😳...thank god DB stopped MB while he is about to stop gulaal...so kesar is in Gulaal room now 😃...loved the convo between DB n kesar...so DB samjaaying kesar abt his responsibilities towads his wife gulaal n parents...his smile listening this is so what accepting her words na 😳...Pb kya kar rahi hai 😡...sudha ne pb se talli n kesar ki shaadi ke bhaare mein bhaath kiya hai kya 🤢...way to DB for stopping talli doing puja with kesar n gulaal 👏...but why did she accepted that she dont have any problem if talli comes for puja without doing puja with kesar n gulaal ...anyways I am happy that talli will not do puja with kesar n gulaal 😊...if she disappears in puja that is even more good 😃...DB ne toh pati patni koh aaram karne ke liye akhela rehne ke liye Pb n talli koh nikhaal diya 😃...i am very happy yaar...

Looking forward to the convo between gulaal n kesar in her room...DB ne gulaal koh apna pati ka khayaal karne ke liye bolaa hai toh...me expecting some pati seva scenes too...n shiv mandir puja scenes too...inn sab ke saath the past revealing scene bhi toh hai...waiting for the next part 😍...update soon Aditi 🤗

Thanks Ramya for your lovely comments,there are so many questions,I hope forthcoming chapters are able to provide reply to all these,abhi toh I can only say that he will get to know the truth soon,pati seva hmm will be there thoda sa next chapter mein...I will try and update later tomight😳

Adu Adu Adu. .🤗

Pehle big jhappi for two quickie updates yara..Thanks for making the weekend so special BY UPDATING TWO PARTS..Thanks yara..😳

Now coming to the chappi..❤️.He he My paapi atma ko thoda sa sukoon aya😳

Oh Gullu and her constant denial..While Kesar still wants answers and Galool madam phir se changing the subject😆and Can I say I lubb the nwe cupid DB hai unhi ki wajah se KG sharing a room.I also lubbed the bonding between DB and Kesu...ahhh he is such a bacha na..😆.always loving being pampered😳

And then the subsequent MB and Son convo with Kesar apologizing.You know what this is what had made Kesar so special,He was one person who instantly reacts being impulsive and the very next moment realises his mistake too ...I loved the little apology .

I must admit I ma lubbing your Gulaal appears more human to me..In fact very human...coz she is not at all skeptical to be near Kesar 😳and Oh little boy understands ki he cannot stay in the same room but I love Gullu and Db who kinda convinced her...

Oh and Now coming to paap😆Jokes apart .I lubbed it..coz u captured the very basic essence of the awkwardness of a young boy with lots of subtlety ..OH I was in splits when Gullu just barged into the bathroom and then the little ahem ahem😳Hai my paapi atam ko thoda sukoon aya😳

Chalo finally he admits that he is in love with his wife😳

Awww That brat looking for bahanas to get close to her..He he😆and then his simultanaeous anger lashing out at everyone due to his irritation of not being near Gulaal...hai itni jaldi judai bhi aa gayi...Db I must admit is one sensible woman who can actually sense whats wrong

Oh I simply adored the little matching session which was Kesar's brainchild and lubbed the way he teased her wanting to help her the same way she did...Hawww such a shrewd bacha..But Gullu ka signal nahi baja lagta hai ab tak😆Warna she wud have started with her paap and bhavna rant😆

One Complaint Adu..You cut short the mandir sceneBut I am now waiting for further revelations and how KG dynamics would change henceforth...🤗

Kudos Adu for such an interesting update⭐️..Brilliant..I just can't wait for the next one🤗

Originally posted by: without-fathom

Aah, so after all the other elements that you beckoned to your command, you've actually managed to bring in mystery and curiosity too - way to go Aditi! After that dialogue between Dushyant and Kesar, I just cannot feel certain about the whole Vasant episode. Can't decided the extent of undertakings each involved character may have had - and even more importantly, how it will go from here, the revelation itself is not longer just for the characters, but for me as a reader - many kudos to bring that about in a story we "technically" already know! 👏

Well Jzee,the story is still same I am just going to twist a bit so that I can justify the space I am giving Dushyant's character,I think he was under utilised post leap and deserved far *better* closure than handing himself to police over unraveling of decade long truth over Raman's stupidity

Moving to the return of DB - WOOT! Here'c comes the cupid, who shall not be turned away, dismissed, or disobeyed! The one Gulaal cannot cajole and Talli cannot silly grin around and win over! I really liked how you described Sudha's predicament in that brief mention too - such an obvious thing about her trait, but somehow reading it explicitly stated hence made me realize, how wanting KT to happen was a boon for her at multiple levels - and of course, it's not about being evil, but everyone is selfish at some level.

I wanted someone who was able to see Kesar's view point too,I have not made her biased to Kesar but someone who actually can see how Gulaal inspite of her deep feeling for Kesar is willing to go by rule book just cause of her promise to villagers for getting him married to a gal of his age group,she had to *see* beyond this promise the human fallout as result of her stand and futility of living for the promise that actually is not bringing happiness in either of their lives-anyways enough of my blab

Also really liked Gulaal's statement to Kesar about learning to care for himself too, if for nothing then her sake.

Overall, I can TOTALLY see why this chapter is coming in parts, each segment in its brief space turns the wheels quite a bit and churns out plenty of food for thought!

wow that's nicely put,I am just trying to divide the chapter cause each part I am addressing a different relationship and how it's growing/changing with time and in the process how past is coming to fore unmasking many faces,unraveling certain truths

Looking forward to the next, eagerly! 😃

I have updated Jzee ,hope you like it

xx

J.