GK VM: Aur Ho ... (Meri Bebasi Ka Bayaan Hai!) - Page 3

Originally posted by: Geeshani

Jzeee...🤗... your VM took my breath away yaar...I don't know how many times I've clicked on the "replay" button and It's still playing in another tab...Each second of this VM is awesome.

Originally posted by: prachurya

Ya, I do agree. I hav nt been able to come here as often I wud like to. Most of the tym I do come in silent mode and make an exit. College has been going well. Currently there are such good FFs here, I am just enjoying reading them. Thanx for asking🤗

Jzeee..❤️.

Bas this is enough to convey what I felt on seeing the VM...

I want more now*greedy*

Agneepath songs pe😍

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Jzeee..❤️.

Bas this is enough to convey what I felt on seeing the VM...

I want more now*greedy*

Agneepath songs pe😍

Originally posted by: JZephyr

Piyu mhaari 🤗

Ji, the emoticon is "bas enough" and I have the infamous "bhavnao ko samjho" knack 😆

More VMs - I wish! They just demand so much patience, and I have so little to spare, lol! I say we should both team up and nag Geeshu to make that Saiyaan song!

ps: I'll get to the drabble comments by and by - but thank you for a wonderful comment there Piyu - I love how you sit down and dissect the seemingly trivial details, which in reality take more than a trivial moment's thought to come up! As one of my favorite poet Yeats once wrote:

"A line will take us hours maybe

Yet if it does not seem like a moment's thought

Our stitching unstitching has been naught!"

Awww Jzee some wonderful lines..creating something beautiful may seem such a trivial task but it takes hours to conjure up the exact words,feel the exact emotions and go through a complete tormenting process before you actually write.👏

Originally posted by: JZephyr

Thank you for the lovely and long analysis Hiba 🤗 You got most of the things pat on - and boy if I ever got such absolutely amazing revelations over a VM made by myself ☺️ Anyway, addressing the few things I wanted append/edit to your takes below =) Thanks again, and many times over! 🤗 so I take it, it wasn't nonsense at all? *looks relieved* 😆 aww you are most welcome hun 🤗 I actually do like to dissect vms/ writing when I like it alot and its a disease I tell you, i cant stay away from doing so 😆 i like to analyse and see what the maker has done with the song, how he has justified it and what story has he used. your work usually have alot of thought behind it and so i like to challenge myself to see whether i can catch that thought or not... Also its a way of my appreciation for the makers hard work.. One reason why i dissect writings and vms because being a writer (um well of sorts ) I know how important a proper feedback is for the writer as he puts in alot of thought and hard work into his work and its disheartening when your writing doesn't does get the desired analysis that you want because we writers want to see how much our work was understood rather then just words and same goes for vm makers.

Originally posted by: nureat01

Ahhh this songgg! I've been listening to it on repeat since a few days too and thinking of making a VM...lol...it's so Kesar like you all said.

Fabbb job, Jzee👏...fantastic choice of scenes too...it's so difficult in some ways to narrow down I think cuz I was also thinking which portion of scenes to use on which lines...there are many choices...cuz Kesar's turmoil is a huge part of what makes this story so interesting.

I love another verse in the song that I was wondering if you'd put into this vid...the portion in the end...'ruke se na ruke...yeh na thake'...haunting portion...really love it.

Originally posted by: JZephyr

Aww thanks Nur 🤗

@ song on repeat - same, same ☺️ I'm glad you found the scenes more or less in sync - it was a hard choice, because like you said, the pool of Kesar's "bebasi" scenes is too vast, and too varied. He gives so many nuances to the whole aspect of helplessness, it's not always in the sorry sense!

And sigh - I had hoped to do the whole song - but this was all I could really sit at. Given how long its been since I did a VM - I let myself off with it 😆

I was telling Hiba, and I tell you - you guys should do this one too. There's so much Kesar scope in this song, I hardly think one version can be enough!