FF:Tum Ho Toh...Final Chpt updtd on Pg-34 - Page 24

Originally posted by: nneeiill

chalo finally gulaal opened her mouth ...haan finally she did😆

nice update mini thank you so much neilu😳

Originally posted by: enchanted23

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Mini🤗, Aditi🤗This wait was worth it I guess,Thankooo so much.You have no idea how relieved I am.😃Your description of Kesar was just amazing, I could clearly visualise him sitting in that pouring rain staring aimlessly at nothingness with his mind completely devoid of any emotions or feelings as if life had totally stopped for him and then slowly regaining his senses back and trying to analyse what happened in one night and his decision to open his heart out to her was right one or not but the justification of doing so and his acceptance of how it was the best thing to have happened in given circumstances was indeed beautiful.This is such a huge thing for me coming from a Kesar deewani😳Thank you so much and I am so glad that I was able to convey his feelings to you😊

So the mother and son conversation, the breaking of so called good news, though expected was another blow in the same day for him, his heart already reeling under Gulaal's stubbornness and ignorance had to now deal with the news of her impending marriage as well, naturally he couldn't wait to get out of there as fast as his legs would carry him'yep the guy had to go to gulaal aur kahaan jaata woh😭

Ohh so Gulaal couldn't keep up with her pretence for long and poor Vasant got a shock of his life when his wife to be flinched at his touch, If he noticed it then I am sure he should realise he won't be happy marrying someone like her,oh well I will wait for the revelations till then all I could say is that it was superbly done,the mask had to slip sooner or later and it's good that it did now it's upto Vasant to accept the dark truth he already knew all along'Vasant's reaction to the whole thing will be clear in chapter 12.He is actually aware of the things happening around him but I think he just doesn't want to face them and prefers to live in the land of denial but he does know that someday he would have to come out of his dream world and as you will get to know in the next chapter the day has come for Vasant to face reality😭

Bulbul looks like a true friend,who by not asking any questions provided that peace of mind she was seeking at the same time she made her feel comfortable by trying to make mountain out of molehill troubles in her life,I mean that's what friends do isn't it when someone who needs you is not able to open up completely though with you physically but still contemplating and coming to terms with their own dilemma, all one can do is wait and provide them that space ,I agree with you completely Aditi.That is the mark of true friends isn't it.They know when to give each other the space they require😊Gulaal I can understand wants to unburden her heart but is aware of one true reality of life,does Bulbul really understand her?Will she able to understand what was missing in her life? What she could feel for Kesar and couldn't for Vasant? Why the person who looked the perfect prince charming with all points ticked was not the right man for her? Yeah probably she could if she had been open about her feeling for Kesar but she had always projected a happy and smiley face in front of her and acted like a perfect contended and blissfully in love bride to be of Vasant so this sudden change of event would have been hard to digest for anyone,it was for Kesar too, who was walking away from her knowing her happiness lay with his brother so naturally Bulbul would not understand her,so true she had been putting up this act of being perfectly happy and content for so long that even Kesar had been fooled.At that moment Gulaal herself was very confused about her feelings so she would not have been able to make Bulbul understand.😭

Ahh and finally the realisation.so beautiful Mini, I am in complete awe of how you have penned this down starting with the most precious possession and then asking why it was so and then slowly but surely unravelling her ever action and the reason behind those,her heart always had one face etched and now it was clear to her'.. beautifully done'.so happy to hear this.This was the part which was troubling me Aditi.I was so worried whether it would come across too cliched but really glad that you liked it.

Of course the next moment she had to be swayed by her galoolism but that's fine she would come to terms with that too sooner or later as realisation id the first step towards acceptance'It's amazing how the first thing she thinks of is Kesar the moment Vasant calls her late at night there is this soul connection that she knew it was about him even before Vasant uttered a word'well her world does revolve around Kesar na😳so glad you noticed it😊

And the relief at sight of him where she forgot all her resolve and just let get her emotions better of her was such a confusing but pleasing sight not only for Kesar but for us reader as well,sach kahoon I loved writing this bit😳here's the gal who let's her mask slip far too often and she will not be able to keep up with her pretences any longer so the little jealousy of Gulaal,oh so cute,you noticed...that I just put it in while writing.wasn't part of the plan at all😛 I am straight away going to that convo between them where she starts by lecturing him his laparwahi now that he was in front of her all hale and hearty before going back to her Galoolism mode trying to justify her stand and he almost confession notwithstanding I liked how Kesar with his one liner dashed all her idealisms that she will now have to put in practise what she was preaching all along'well done Kesar'I am really proud of you Honestly I was worried about this part,whether it would appeal to all you guys cause Kesar pretty much stays quiet through the whole thing na but that's how I feel he should and would react.I am happy that you did not feel that he was acting out of character😊

Mini I will come back for my comments on next chappi,This was amazing update yaar👏,I don't know why you are not satisfied with this in my opinion you have done a brilliant job with this chappi'will come back for next one'well now I am fine.reading all your comments has boosted my confidence yaar.and my concerns well I have stated them above.

Originally posted by: sharmishta

Dear Mini,

U called me 'ente koottukari'???

oh! *faints*...

he he... so dramatic, naadakeeyam... he na??

but really i am so happy... thank u sooo much...

PS: waise, ek baath kahoon??? after reading the chii scenes of ur ss, it's really hard 2 believe dat u r unromantc...

Mini, apologies for the delay, I wanted to comment yesterday but after completing my update, I just had to give up but here I am with my two cents worth…..

You have described Kesar's inner turmoil so realistically, here he knows what's in her heart and her equal stubborn stand on why it's not right to accept her heart's dictate, in her idealisms she is hell bent on ruining three lives, Kesar who can clearly see where this is heading is there to give it one final try to make her see sense and of course he is hesitant to put his point forward having experienced results of his earlier honest admissions, very well penned down…..

He was able to see through Vasant's pretence too, he was melting na at his mother's concern and worry but Vasant had to barge in, fearful trying to protect something he knew was slipping out of his hand,I know he is only human but he is being selfish here besides being jealous he is also unfair to his lil brother after all he is not the only at fault here, but again this is me being bias towards Kesar ,I guess…. oh well will wait to see when realization finally strikes this conveniently ignorant man who is pretending ignorance in order to get his way,imo completely selfish….Aha! Trust Kesar to see through it…

Vasant I guess is waiting for inevitable, he is trying to assure himself everything is ok and now that the marriage date is fixed all he has to do is wait for another month and all his worries about GK will be thing of past all, but in his heart he knows the reality and is what is bringing out his insecurities to forefront….yeah he is going to be collateral damage but to see GK together this will be acceptable, well who ever said that world was a fair place huh?

The moment he is out of her sight, all galoolism goes out of window na, she gets desperate for that one glimpse, to hear that deep and husky voice and some sort of connection, she just cannot bear his indifference or absence such a classic GK trait!! Ahh that phone call revived her hopes na, she needs him just like she needs air to breath it's high time she accepted the fact that her heart has known all along…..

What followed was just realisation on both sides how difficult almost impossible it was going to be carrying on without the other being part of daily life but that's what it takes for Galool to listen to her inner voice ,so finally she is ready to accept and declare, I am all ears….

Mini🤗,This was another brilliant update yaar,I loved it all three characters so intertwined and so human,they have their share of grey which is what makes this story so realistic, I am looking forward to the next update, Please try and update soon partner…😳

OMG YOU JUST MADE ME FALL IN LUBB WITH GHOSTYawww such a fabulous update👏

RES😳

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Mini first of all take a huge jhappi .🤗.A very big one for this lubbly update.You know what 😛Kesar is supposed to be the hero in this FF but Vassy was the one who actually stole my heart.So starting with Gulaal who finally opened her mouth finally liberating herself and VASANT from the burden of an unwanted relationship.She was being so considerate that she at least thought that Vasant being the wonderful guy he was certainly deserves love and warmth in the true sense of the word.BEFITTING unlike her show counterpart who thought that throwing Kesar into a loveless marriage with Talli would be for their greater good and Now Finally coming to the Vassy part.

Right from the beginning when he finds himself amidst a chaos lonely and numb ,then finally realising how his hopes had been shattered,his anger lashing out at Gulaal,his acceptance that she loves Kesar ,his amusement ,his liberation..Everything just so superbly penned down.AHHH this is sheer brilliance...I am in awe ,The heart wrenching acceptance of his fate and realising how he had changed all those years and how selfish he had been still not able to forget his love..Totally breathtaking..👏Mini..⭐️You actually made me sympathize with him👏 Mini don't you dare say that this cahppi is boring ..For me it was such abeautiful update..I lubbed it..Looking foward to some pAAp now.😳..Rockstar Kesu ko wapas bula😆