Originally posted by: without-fathom
Mini 🤗 Oh I feel like I read this story after quite a gap - although I feel a tad less guilty because I made appearance about a date later than the chapters were posted it seems? Jzee🤗I apologise but kya karoon I got stuck in between...just was not able to write and then my old friend laziness visited me😆Hopefully I have got over it and will come up with updates at regular intervals.fingers crossed😊
Anyway - yes, yes, yes!!! Who doesn't love some FULL on action happening, revelations, twists, more realizations, reverse psychologies, distances and fonder/frustrated hearts, and oh, so so so much conflict. I've said this often enough in this thread, Vasant I shall feel for, always. Nothing like I could feel for GK, ever, but just this position he's caught in, the fancy he has held onto so long, despite knowing better deep inside, the fallout that had to happen one day... I don't know if you have happy end plans for him at all, but people like him exist all over the place! So many more like him, than the blissful kind - and the reality of his predicament has never failed me yet 👏
This makes very very happy cause I have never wanted to portray him as a villain at all.He is quite real and I am glad that you are able to connect to his predicament.I hope you will find his reaction equally believable😊
Gulaal and Kesar make an interesting pair. Obviously, but why do I say it? I kinda like the contradiction of Kesar the boy of extremes somehow managing so much better resolve and containment of his reactions when he is around Gulaal, than she herself whose extremes (the rarest side of her) come out ALL the more pronounced with his advent. It's interesting that she creates storm after storm inside of him - yet in more showdowns than not, it is SHE who is venting and him whose steadier and more sure of where he's going. Even if he walks out on her or she on him leaving him VERY deranged and out of bounds, just in the moments, Kesar manages to hold his wits (or what remains of them) so much better than her. And Gulaal, who takes ALL the time to piece herself together drops apart to bits by the slightest sway of Kesar.
Wow...beautifully put into words 👏You know,I never set out to portray them like that but I guess it's my subconscious desire coming out.I always wanted to see more of Gulaal's feelings towards Kesar in the show so maybe somewhere I reversed their roles in this FF😆
^^ Not just specifically to chapter 10 and 11, but I just noticed it more here.
I understand completely😃
Anyway - seems like the high climax is coming soon, the build up has been great so far, the situation is SO well set up for a big bang - can't wait till you post again 😃
I will try to post the update soon😊
I know I'm not around this place regularly enough, but everytime I get back to catching up on pending reading, it makes me feel content to know there is something on this forum to come back to always. Thank you so much, the few but very resolved lot of you, who keep the place fueled! I may be doing nothing better, but I really want to keep telling you guys how much it means 🤗
I do make frequent appearances on the NBT forum. I am almost silent over there but I do enjoy all your posts and that forum is almost like a second home with so many Galoolians😛
oh ya I am so thankful for this forum.I have made so many friends out here including you.arre don't forget it was your post that got me to join this forum and start commenting and I am sure there are many like me.So a big thank to you Jzee🤗
JZ
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