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Posted: 13 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: rsk16


again a lovely chapter.thanks for such a nice one.
PS:my name is raunika


Raunika,thanks a lot for the comment😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: alanta

Wonderful chapter mini.👏.I loved the way u brought the emotional break down of Gulaal..so apt..chal ab friendship tho hogaya..ab dheere dheere baath ko aage badao..😉

Atlanta,thanks a lot.yep friendship ho gaya and Gulaal badly needs one now na.so baaki ki baatein baad mein😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: MR21

Mini..wow yaar...friendship hogayaa...ab kesar will give her that support which she wants after what ever happened in her life...

Update Soon...

Ramya,thank you😊what Gulaal needs right now is a friend and hopefully Kesar will be a good friend to her😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
Sorry for the delay Mini, I got held up longer than I thought last evening, and didn't get around to reading the (then) 4 chapters - so commenting on 5 now. I thought I had lots to say as I read the chapters one by one, but was too given to the temptation of flow to stop and comment on each individually - so I'm going to sort of sum it up by saying I love the concept. Keep saying often, of how love triangles are tougher when the three people in question are all technically 'good' people - which is certainly the case here. Vasant seems cut out far more a weaker character, than a bad one; and honestly, if I had to 'blame' blame one person outright, it would be PB, even before him.Not to condone him of his cowardice of course. I do wonder why Kesar, when he realized his brother in the pre-wedding time had started ignoring his calls etc, did not step up and talk to his father? I mean, sure, he probably thought his brother would do that best - tell his own story - but if he had, the crisis could have been saved. Of course, he's not to blame because most normal people would remain in a dilemma like he was. Maybe you could give us more on him like that, by and by, as he begins to watch Gulaal in her enforced wretched routine?!

For now, I love the way these two opened their interaction! It was fantastic, with him giving her all the fire she did not see coming or deserve, and then her breakdown in recap was perfect as it ought to be - her absolute loneliness in dealing with this mess, being unable even to talk to her own parents and having to put up that brave front for her in laws - Kesar show blew off her lid, and of course he had to be the on to both instigate and console! IMO, she needed an outburst, if she'd been holding back so strong, so really, Kesar unknowingly, by cutting her raw open, did her a favor.

And well, that so far. Looking forward eagerly to the story as it unfolds - whatever doubts you have about it are completely unfounded, be assured! So keep the pace up and the chapters coming - loving the whole track so far 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: JZephyr

Sorry for the delay Mini, I got held up longer than I thought last evening, and didn't get around to reading the (then) 4 chapters - so commenting on 5 now. I thought I had lots to say as I read the chapters one by one, but was too given to the temptation of flow to stop and comment on each individually - so I'm going to sort of sum it up by saying I love the concept. Keep saying often, of how love triangles are tougher when the three people in question are all technically 'good' people - which is certainly the case here. Vasant seems cut out far more a weaker character, than a bad one; and honestly, if I had to 'blame' blame one person outright, it would be PB, even before him.Not to condone him of his cowardice of course. I do wonder why Kesar, when he realized his brother in the pre-wedding time had started ignoring his calls etc, did not step up and talk to his father? I mean, sure, he probably thought his brother would do that best - tell his own story - but if he had, the crisis could have been saved. Of course, he's not to blame because most normal people would remain in a dilemma like he was. Maybe you could give us more on him like that, by and by, as he begins to watch Gulaal in her enforced wretched routine?!


For now, I love the way these two opened their interaction! It was fantastic, with him giving her all the fire she did not see coming or deserve, and then her breakdown in recap was perfect as it ought to be - her absolute loneliness in dealing with this mess, being unable even to talk to her own parents and having to put up that brave front for her in laws - Kesar show blew off her lid, and of course he had to be the on to both instigate and console! IMO, she needed an outburst, if she'd been holding back so strong, so really, Kesar unknowingly, by cutting her raw open, did her a favor.

And well, that so far. Looking forward eagerly to the story as it unfolds - whatever doubts you have about it are completely unfounded, be assured! So keep the pace up and the chapters coming - loving the whole track so far 🤗


Jzee, thanks a lot for your lovely comment and very happy that you are liking it.yep Vasant is not a bad person exactly. a little selfish and a very weak person who doesn't have the guts to fight for his love.Gulaal is strong,any other person in her situation would have gone mad by now. I have seen a very similar thing in my family. and it's sad I tell you. the blame is always on the girl, but thankfully she got married again and is now very happy in her new life😊

@ the bold:thanks for noticing that.I have put this point in the next chapter. I didn't put it in the last one cause I was too lazy and did not want to type anymore😆

Thanks a lot for your support.It means a lot😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ooo u r fast in updting 😊 nice 4 & 5 chapters. i wonder how many days can the family hide the vasanth matter to the society looking fwd to it how it going to unfold.
chapter4- so fast accusations n feel of guilty oh this kesar seems rational n good boy nice.
chapter5- this gulaal(sanskar laxmi) is diff.she didn't keep to herself. she burst out n finally got a frd she is looking for.so nice progress in story looking fwd 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nachoo Mini.😛.Oh KG ka pehla jhappi..Me superlikes..👏

okies now coming to the chapter..fantastic potrayal of the agony of Gulaal.😭.She stole the show..Oh the dialogues were so heart wrenching.😭..Oh and I just am so excited to see blossom of love between these two ppl...who have already patched up and taken a step ahead to become DOST...😳😳

Loved the chapter Mini.👏.Lookin forward to the next one🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Savz_uniqueblis

ooo u r fast in updting 😊 nice 4 & 5 chapters. i wonder how many days can the family hide the vasanth matter to the society looking fwd to it how it going to unfold.
chapter4- so fast accusations n feel of guilty oh this kesar seems rational n good boy nice.
chapter5- this gulaal(sanskar laxmi) is diff.she didn't keep to herself. she burst out n finally got a frd she is looking for.so nice progress in story looking fwd 😊

Savz, thanks for the lovely comment😊yep it will be very difficult and people do have doubts.Let's see what happens.Kesar is a good guy.but he has a terrible temper and is very impulsive by nature both of which usually lands him in trouble😆
Gulaal needed that otherwise she would have gone mad. glad that you are liking it😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: manzilmukul

nachoo Mini.😛.Oh KG ka pehla jhappi..Me superlikes..👏

okies now coming to the chapter..fantastic potrayal of the agony of Gulaal.😭.She stole the show..Oh the dialogues were so heart wrenching.😭..Oh and I just am so excited to see blossom of love between these two ppl...who have already patched up and taken a step ahead to become DOST...😳😳

Loved the chapter Mini.👏.Lookin forward to the next one🤗

Piu, my dancing skills are worse than Neil's turba but still for your sake nachooo...😆
so very happy that you liked it.yep even I am eager to write and see how their bond will grow from friendship to love😳I hope you will enjoy it😊glad that you liked the dialogues. thanks for the beautiful comments.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
Minnz..mujhe 5 chapters pe comment marna tha..😕sab ke liye ek wholesale unreswa..😆

wow..wow...what a start yaar..really liked d concept.. shaadi se shuru kiya,n vassy ko...pehele 2 chapters mein tikana lagaya..just lubed it..😳😳n is ff mein tho gullu ka ek behen bhi hai..rupa..😛when I read d chappie for d first time lo..kesu ko at last ek saali tho mil agyi na..😆warna..sab uspe..rule karthe hai..chotu keheke..😆but I found it ajeeb when MB n PB..are asking gullu to live in their house..even after knowing d fact..😲ye bath kuch hazam nahin hui.😕.n they are showing d examples like rupa ki shadi nahin hogi.😡arre..ye tho uski zindagi ka sawal hai na..kya zindagi bar walls se pyaar karegi kya..😡but later on ..u just moved 1 month ahead n after that it was so good..obviousely bacause of d entry of d kesu..😳😳..n I loved h u have showed d reaction of kesu...uska sara frustation usne gullu pe nikaldiya..😭but sahin bhi hai..he was hurt n nobody was there to share his pain..so..d first person he came across was gullu.so uspe bedak gaya.😕..n vassy ke beje mein kuch nahin hai..bass mitti hai yaar..😡.n woh jenny thi..mujhe katrina yaad ayi..APKGK se..😆..n again d way kesar has thought back about his behavior was really good..😳😳..n d last room scene..was really awesome mini..👏👏..u have put d gullu's emotions so aptly..yaar..just lubed all d chappies...nice concept mini...👍🏼

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