FF:Pyaar Ka Rishta Final Chapter updtd Pg 67 - Page 6

Originally posted by: nneeiill

wowieee...nice update yet again mini...

what to say abt paan baa..is she not realisng that she is runining gulaal's life for sake of everone's happiness...wat an emotional black mailing that was..gulaal sure is a woman of strength..but as u said this will be blessing in disguise...i was thinking kab aayega Kesar babua..thank god last line tak tho aa hi gaya...am super excited for this FF..agle baar isse bhi long chappi chahiye mini

Originally posted by: prachurya

hayyye hayye yeh kaisa intro...Kesu thinks dat Gullu ruined her bro's life- beta tereko idea nahi hai tera bhai %$&^(&%^&^ insaaan hai.Kesar ke aisa sochne ke peeche ek reason hai aage patha chal jaayega.I hope yahan koi bahut bada Vasant fan nahi hai varna meri tho shaamat aa jaayegi by the time I end this story😆 I mean seriously there is no reason to justify what Vassy did to her and her family. Paan Baa doing emotional attyachaar on Gullu- I mean seriously does any body even think how can a person live like dat- seriously dis is worse dan being a widhwa- feeling so bad for Gullu.bechaari she is trapped but don't worry this will turn out to be the best thing for her.Brilliantly written. Mini- luking forward to the next chappie!thanks a lot Prachurya😊

Originally posted by: arti07

h how cruel PB is selfish and rest members are sweet ...vasant is an idiot and kesar boy u deserve a slap koi aise greet karta hai new family member ko kab thapad padega use😳😳😳..lovely chapii minizz 😳

Res for two chappis😛

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Okies...So my comments for the last two chappis...

Chapter 2..and 3

Both were very good and interesting chapters 👏where we got to know various facets and actions..Gulaaal's bridal beauty and her feelings have been excellently potrayed..So she also senses the anxiety of Vasant after the wedding..and Pb what kinda lady is she...Age kya hoga..For how long can she fool everyone like this..Seeems like Gulaal is a very sensitive person..And Omg Kesar What a rockstar entry...so this gussail khadoos avtaar is back..😆Oh he already hates her..I am super duper excited to see the fireworks bw these two...😳.And forgot to mention a special applause for the title...👏Truly pyaar ka rishta is something beautiful.Already waiting for the next one...🤗

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Res for two chappis😛

OK guys here is the new one.I am not very happy with it but kya karein dimaag kaam nahi kar raha

thanks all you guys for your comments and likes.I appreciate it a lot.😊

Chapter 4

Kesar was just about to ring the door bell when the door opened with a whoosh and a girl almost stepped into him. When she took a step back, he took a good look at her. She was an average looking girl, about the same age as him, dressed in a simple pink salwar kameez and a bag on her shoulder. Her face looked tired and rather sad but it was her eyes that surprised him. They were clear and bright.so full of life. Her eyes mesmerized him instantly. She was looking at him wide-eyed with a confused expression and then she smiled. The smile stunned him-it was a warm,open smile that brightened up her whole face and right then she looked like the most beautiful girl in the world . Suddenly he realized who this was and he snapped back to reality, removed his sunglasses "acha tho tum ho woh ladki jiski wajah se mere Vasant bha ki zindagi barbaad ho gayi"and then he moved past her into the house.

"Kesar"Panba screams, "tu kab pahuncha khabar kar deta tho hum lene aate na."She says hugging him "Arre main bas aap logon ko surprise karna chahta tha…isliye" By now everyone came to the living room , "Kesar beta,tu vaapis aa gaya acha hai ab main apni zimmedaari tujhe sonp sakta hoon.ab in boodhi haddiyon mein itni jaan nahi ki yeh sab sambhaal sakoon"Motaba speaks in a frail voice. Kesar had never before seen his father like this and is taken aback to see him so emotional and weak "yeh aap kya keh rahe hain Motaba abhi tho main aaya hoon,aur mujhe aapse kitna kuch seekhna hai.isliye aap aisi baatein mat kijiye". He takes blessings from Giga Kaka and he went on to Jamna Kaki and gave her a tight hug "Kesar,jaa main tujhse baat nahi karoongi,arre jab London mein tha tab tho kabhi phone nahi karta tha aur ab intna naatak.." She complains . "Kaki, main tho roz aapko bulaata rehta lekin aap tho hamesha busy rehti thi kabhi kitty parties mein aur kabhi kisi page 3 party mein,gussa tho mujhe hona chahiye na ki aapne gossip ke liye apne laadle ko bhula diya" replies Kesar mischeviously. "chal shaitaan,apni kaaki ka majaak udaata hai"Jamna Kaki goes to twist his ear instead she ruffles his hair lovingly. Kesar hugs Dushyant and Raman. Dushyant gets emotional and he tries to hide his tears saying "aaj se is ghar mein shanti nahi rehegi,toofan jo waapis aa gaya hai" "ab yeh shanti kaun hai Dushyant bha,aapki koi nai girlfriend"teases Kesar. Dushyant blushes and the whole family laughs. By now Gulaal had come out of her shock and entered the room. Standing in a corner she witnessed the family's interaction and Kesar's naughtiness and she could not help but smile. Rewa hugs him excitedly "jo maine list diya tha sab leke aaye ho na" Kesar laughs at her excitement " tere liye kitne embarrassing situations se guzra hoon" Rewa gives him a deadly stare "haan baba, sab le aaya hoon lekin tu itne make up items ka kya karegi,bhagwaan ne jo daraawni si shakal di hai use tu badal tho nahi sakti na" Rewa hits him but her smile is intact on her face and Kesar continues "aur sirf tere liye nahi ghar ke sabhi logon ke liye kuch na kuch laaya hoon." "Gulaal bhabhi ke liye kya laaye ho?"she asks innocently genuinely curious to know what he got her. Suddenly his face hardens and turns away from Rewa.He finds Gulaal standing in a corner and looking at her straight in the eye he replies "main ajnabiyon ke liye tohfe nahi leta" Gulaal is shocked by his anger and her smile is wiped off her face in an instant. Kesar saw her reaction and to his surprise it bothered him a little. "Kesar" Motaba raises his voice. Suddenly Kesar's demeanour changes and his face breaks out in a smile "arre kya aate hi sab log mere peeche pad gaye hain. Main tho ab yahin hoon tho aaram se meri khabar lena ,theek hai. chaliye baa mujhe bahuk bhook lagi hai.apne haath se mujhe khilayiye na" The tense atmosphere is forgotten and Panba ruffles his hair lovingly "tu bilkul nahi badla Kesar, kab bada hoga" Kesar laughs and holding Panba by the shoulders follows her into the kitchen but not before stealing a quick glance at Gulaal. Before Gulaal could think about Kesar's harsh behaviour to her,Rewa comes to her with a huge smile on her face "ab dekhna Gulaal bhabhi,Kesar aa gaya haina bahut mazaa aayega.main aaj itni khush hoon,aaj tho college bunk kar rahi hoon aur aap" "nahi…mujhe jaana padega Rewa,kuch zaroori project work hai" she wanted to get away from the intense anger she experienced just moments ago and soon leaves for college with a heavy heart.

After spending some time with the entire family Kesar goes up to his room which looked just the same as it was 2 yrs ago. "chalo acha hai is room mein tho kuch nahi badla" He walks around and finally stops in front of a picture frame on the wall. It was a photo of him and Vasant. His expression hardened. Even though Vasant had been older to him by 4 yrs they had been the best of friends. He had always been closest to his Vasant bha and shared his every secret with him. Kesar knew about Vasant's relationship with Jenny,who was Kesar's good friend from college. Actually Kesar had been the one who had introduced Vasant to Jenny. And he was very happy when Jenny and Vasant had told him about their love because he knew they were perfect for each other. The relationship had been going on strong for the past 3 years and Kesar had advised him long back to speak to the family about it. Two months back Vasant had come to meet him in London and talk to him about his situation. He looked forlorn and dejected. Vasant explained to him that his marriage has been fixed. Kesar was shocked to learn that his brother had not yet talked to Motaba about Jenny but he also knew the reason why. From childhood Vasant had been the perfect son-the ideal one who would do no wrong and who would never dare to go against his family. And now the relationship with Jenny would be tough for them to understand and accept. But Kesar is angered at Vasant bha's weakness and tries hard to make him understand that he needs to fight for his love "Vasant bha abhi bhi waqt hai. Aap ab bhi Motaba se baat kar sakte hain aur agar Panba ,Motaba aapko nahi samajh paate hain tho woh unki problem hai. Shaadi koi bachon ka khel tho nahin haina.yeh decision sirf aapka hona chahiye ki aapka jeevan sathi kaun banega.Vasant bha aapne Jenny se pyaar kiya hai aur pyaar mein dhokha dena kaayarata hai.apne pyaar ko paane ke liye poori duniya se ladna bhi pade tho koi badi baat nahi.bas aap uska saath kabhi mat chodna.woh ek bahut achi ladki hai aur usne aapse sacha pyaar kiya hai aur phir kisi doosri ladki se shaadi karke aap uski bhi life kharaab kar denge na". Vasant with a smile on his face says "haan tu theek keh raha hai,par darta hoon agar baa ne.." "aap bilkul mat dariye main hoon na aapke saath"replies Kesar with determination. "kitni badi,badi baatein karne laga hai tu Kesar.kabhi-kabhi tho lagta hai ki tu mera bada bhai hai…." "Vasant bha,aap bhi na kabhi tho mujhe seriously lijiye na….."Kesar complains. "theek hai Kesu,main aisa hi karunga kyunki main Jenny ke ilava kisi aur ko apni patni nahi bana sakta"Vasant gives him a hug and Kesar smiles back.

After that conversation Vasant bha never contacted him. And though Kesar had gotten busy with his exams he had tried calling Vasant several times, but he never got through to him. And his brother never returned his calls which hurt him a lot. He could not believe his ears when he heard about the marriage and the subsequent drama. He even tried calling up Jenny but she never returned his calls either. He could not understand why Vasant bha was ignoring him. It was as if they had both decided to cut him off from their lives. This angered him, frustrated him. Vasant had hurt him a lot and he felt betrayed and abandoned.

Suddenly the picture of Gulaal smiling at the door popped in his mind and he felt guilty. If he was being honest to himself he had just taken out that frustration on Gulaal. In his heart he knew that she was not responsible for anything, she was in reality a victim. But at that precise moment at the door when Kesar realized who she was, she reminded him of his Vasant bha who had left him far behind. That thought angered him and made him say that cruel thing to her which she did not deserve to hear in the least. He had put the blame conveniently on Gulaal so that he could hide his own pain. Kesar sits on the bed with a thud and holds his head in his hands "oh God,what did I do?"

He remembers his rude behaviour to her and curses himself"yeh maine kya kiya.maine uspar apna gussa kyun utaara.uska tho koi dosh hi nahi isme. Maine sirf apne dard ke baare mein socha lekin uska kya-Vasant bha ki wajah se uski life kharaab ho gayi.main itna selfish kaise ho gaya".Kesar paces the room getting all restless muttering to himself "Kesar teri yehi problem hai hamesha gussa naak pe rehta hai. woh tho tujhse smile karke baat karna chahti thi aur tune…."he grimaces when he is reminded of her sad,heartbroken face."nahi, yeh maine bilkul theek nahi kiya.aur isse pehle ki baat aur bigad jaaye mujhe usse maafi maang leni chahiye" he quickly takes a package from his suitcase and goes to Vasant's old room. Kesar hesitates for a second and knocks on the door and he hears a very sweet voice calling out "kaun?" he replies in a low voice "main hoon,Kesar-mujhe tumse kuch baat karni thi". Kesar hears nothing for a few seconds. There's complete silence. Kesar is dejected "jis tarah se maine uske saath behave kiya uske baad woh mujhse baat kyun karegi…" he turned back and was about to leave when the door opened and he saw Gulaal standing with a resigned expression on her face