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Posted: 14 years ago
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CHAPTER 1

DHAD" noise come with crushing glasses sound from the car, people look around what is it, they found "BODY" on the top of the car people are horrified to see that body faal down from 12th floor of building, people gather around to see

"MERA BACHAPAN CHEEN GAYA TERI VAJAH SE " a voice come from the top of the builging, she came near edge of the bulding to see him and came back immidiatly , she fell dwon on the floor and keep on crying loudly

back ground
"IN REVANGE AS IN LIFE EVERY ACTION HAS IN EQUAL AND OPPOSITE REACTION IN THE END GUILT ALWAYS FALL"

NAMES

GULAAL-KRANTI
KESAR-RAJ
KUNAL
LAHARI
AND SUPPORTING ACTORS

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(flashbach)
Goa beautiful sunset in the evening birds are chirping all around the beach
beautiful golden sun its look like coming out from the sea people are all having

so much fun some kids are playing with baloons and some kids playing with water too

from the croud one girl says
maine suraj ko pakad liya

suraj u mean sun , tu sun ko pakad liya tu mujhe murkh samajh rakha kya?

Ha kesar dekh meri mitti me Suraj hai na

KYa gulaal is tarah se to my chaand ko bhi pakad sakta hu, ye to suraj ka shadow hai na

lekin tab tak hum yaha ruk nahi sakte hai sab log hamara intazaar karte honge

wait karna kuch der baad chale jaayenge dekh abhi paan ba aur poonab ba to tv dekhte honge aurmota ba and revji ba to kuch der baad aayenge aur rewa , vasant ,yogesh ye sabhi abhi abhi apne

apne kamare gaye honge itne bade havali me hume kaun dekhega hum chup ke se chale jayenge
wait karna
teek hai 10 min ke baad chali jayenge tab tak to sabhi aa chuke honge
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after 30 min

G:kesar chalna sab hamara raah dekh rahe honge
K:kabhi dekho tujhe ghar jaane keliye jaldi hoti hai
teek hai chalte hai
dono ek badi wood path with steps also us par chalte huve honge

K:puchta hai ki hamare vila ko SHANTI NIVAS kyo rakha gulaal
G:budhhu hum sab miljhul ke rehate hai hum sabhi kabhi jagada nahi kiya
hum sab ko pyar se rahne ke liye
K: hum dono ko bhi pyar se rehana hai na
G: ha hum bachpan se hi best friends hai aur...
uske baad nahi bolti hai gulaal
K:aur kya?
G:jab tu bada ho jayaga to kudh hi maalum pad jaayega tujhe
K:hum kabhi juda nahi ho sakte gulaal
G:hame koi bhi juda nahi karenge
dekhna sab hamari pitai karne ke liye tiyar hogye haonge aur my tujhe nahi bachavungi un sab se
baate karthe karthe haveli ke paas phunchte honge

suddenly

when they reached infront of the building, they saw police van parked over there, unki heartbeat jyada badh gaati hai

they both get shochked and they both look at each other like stunned

haveli ke saamne logo ka bheed aur polices and ambulences hai, vaha jamai hui logo keh rahe hai ki isa kaise ho sakta hai itne logo ko ek baar

they rushed through the crowd and questioned what happend?
but nobody answerd

tey run so fast towards the crowd dono logo ko apne hatatho se hatathe hue andar ghus kar jaate hai aur dekhte hai ki
paan ba,poonmba.revji,mota ba,vasant rewa aur yogesh ba sabhi logo ki laashe ambulance me lekar jaate hue honge

they shocked looking at the scene

dono rote hue apne apne maa baap ko paas jaane ki khoshish kar hai, lekin police
un dono ko apne haatho me lekar vaha nahi jaane dete hai


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Posted: 14 years ago
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HAPPY DIWALI ALL
this is my diwali gift for all
maine socha
rimjhim,kiran,arti ,prachu, manzu ye sabhi mera idea chori karne se pahele hi new ff shuru kar diya 😆😆😆😆
i am learining to write stories so u guys u can throw whatever u want to me i will take it without questions no return policy
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Killer starting hai! Dnt worry tumhara idea chori nahi karungi. My curiousity has increased, both lost their family wen they wer small, so who took the revenge and who died? Nyc story, sneha!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yeh kya diwali gift mei koi murder,revenge FF dethi hai 😲 ya u r right wait searching to throw at you haan milgayi yeh kya 😲 mere haath me kya milgaya 😔 sweets hai mere haath mei chalo kya karthe happy diwali 🥳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Good suspense hai yaar...nice one...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ahahah main bhi nahi chori karoongi.
cool start, and nice title :).
Update soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: prachurya

Killer starting hai! Dnt worry tumhara idea chori nahi karungi. My curiousity has increased, both lost their family wen they wer small, so who took the revenge and who died? Nyc story, sneha!


AGAR KIYA BHI TO BURA NAHI HOGA😆THANK YOU FOR LIKING DEAR

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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow another one Congo shongo jee
aap ko bohot bohot badayaan ho Diwali ki
i luved it the suspense at the end loved it
doo update soon b4 u know what 😕
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: prachurya

Killer starting hai! Dnt worry tumhara idea chori nahi karungi. My curiousity has increased, both lost their family wen they wer small, so who took the revenge and who died? Nyc story, sneha!


THANK YOU PRACHU
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Savz_uniqueblis

yeh kya diwali gift mei koi murder,revenge FF dethi hai 😲 ya u r right wait searching to throw at you haan milgayi yeh kya 😲 mere haath me kya milgaya 😔 sweets hai mere haath mei chalo kya karthe happy diwali 🥳


MUJHE NA SWWETS KE SAATH NA HOT BHI CHAHIYE KYO KI SWEETS JYADA PASAND NAHI KARTI
HAPPY DIWALI TO U YAAR

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