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Posted: 13 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: MR21

Good suspense hai yaar...nice one...


THANK YOU YAAR
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Kesar04

wow another one Congo shongo jee

aap ko bohot bohot badayaan ho Diwali ki
i luved it the suspense at the end loved it
doo update soon b4 u know what 😕


TUJHE BHI HAPPY DIWALI YAAR ,THANK YOU FOR LIKING THE SUSPENCE
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: snehasri


TUJHE BHI HAPPY DIWALI YAAR ,THANK YOU FOR LIKING THE SUSPENCE

happy shappy hogi tab jab mein gharr laut aungi hahaha
your wellcome for creating some suspense do you want me to help you at all with the hindi or not just saying 😳😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Revange 2


Gulaal as Kranti
Kesar as Raj


AFTER 12 YEARS

"Chod de mujhe" Talli Chod na mera haath

Kyo?, Baarish me bheegne ke liye vo bhi beech raaste par,gaadi park kar ke bheegne ki kya?jaroorat hai, chal te chalte...Talli ki baath beech me hi kaat deti hai Kranti( Gulaal )

Gaadi ko nahi mujhe bheegna hai Talli, kehake hasti hai

Vo to pata hai, Agar tu bheeg gayi to Goa kaise jaayenge aur ek ghanta safar karna hai hume chal te chal te late hogaye to

"SORRY" bhool gayi thi my

Mujhe pata hai baarish ko dekhte hi tu sab kuch bhool jati ho isliye rok raha hu ab chalo, Goapahunchne tak koi aur kaam nahi samjhee

Teek hai, Teek hai sad se kehati hai

dono goa ki taraf nikal padte hai aur ek ghante ki baad goa pahunch jaate hai

Kranti tujhe pata hai" GOA PARADISE VILAAS" kaha hai?

Abhi to hum citi ke Entrance me hai na 15 ya 20 min me pahunch jaayenge

After 20 min
"wow is Vilaas ko dekh ke mujhe isa lagta hai ki hum aur ek citi me hai" hai na kranti

Kranti nodded her head with dard bhari aankho se

Ye badi badi raaste, gated community aur coconut trees colorful flowers all surroundings and parkinglots for cars grass area mujhe isa lagta hai ki hum koi aur desh me to nahi hai na..

Talli entrance me security check place aa rahi hai use andar entrace hone ke liye papers dhikana hai dikhado

Teek hai

security check point pe pahunchte hai Talli use papers dhikaati hai aur security guard se puchti hai
ki "ye to toll booth nahi hai na entrance ke liye kuch money..." vahai pe ruk jaati hai

Kya?madam security guard asked her

kuch nahi my mazak kar rahi thi

Teek hai madam, ab aap andar jaa sakte hai

Dono andar jaakar club house ke saamne car park karte hai

Talli kehati hai Kranti se Tu andar jaa my lady se baath kar ke my use lekar aati hu

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Kranti chalte chal te pool side pahunch jaati hai
Vaha pool ke area ko dekhte hue ek pillar ke saath khadi hoti hai aur kids ko dekhkar muskuraati hai aur ye sochne lagti hai ki ye bachho ki umr me hi sabhi kush reh paate hai na kaash my bhi...

She inclined her head and glanced to her left Atingle awareness took hold
as she realized she was being watched studied intently by an intriguing man with dark glasses even darker hair Awell toned man in swim trunks towel around the neck and nothing more she swallowed hard.

He lifted his glasses and met her gaze. Her body grew hot from the inside out in feminine way that had nothing to do with humidity surroundings her.

"you are all set" Talli voice surprised her
We got everything what we need tu finalize karne ki baaki hai ek baar ghar
dekh ke khareed sakte hai

Kranti regretfully with drew her gaze from strangers compailing one
She glanced back again but he was gone.
Disppontment settled inside her

"Not to worry". I have hunch you will see him again Talli said lightly,
See who

Kranti knew she was playing dumb and Talli laughed.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sneha,yeh kab hua😕I completely missed this one.found it today.anyways good start.please continue soon.hope you are feeling ok now😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: minizz

Sneha,yeh kab hua😕I completely missed this one.found it today.anyways good start.please continue soon.hope you are feeling ok now😊


thank you. ab mera tabeeyat thoda teek hai

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