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Raunika

@rsk16

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Really nice chapter .very well expressed.

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vinolya

@vinolya

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Alanta, Wow... like it so much. Very eager to know what will happen in the next chapter... pls update it soon... 😊

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sauris

@sauris

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Alanta,when ru going to update???????

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Faryal-Makhdoom

@Faryal-Makhdoom

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Jaldi Jaldi update lavo na jeeALANTAAA!!!!

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Faryal-Makhdoom

@Faryal-Makhdoom

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Finally. Finally, you knocked some sense into that brain of yours and wrote a chappie! Weee :D Seriously dude, it's about time. I've been telling you since FOREVER :|it was okai just average 😕

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Sree

@Katyayani_devi

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

very nicely written.while reading can visualise it. so beautifully written really good job 👏.nice going story waiting for ur next one bring it soon 😳

Edited by Savz_uniqueblis - 13 years ago

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Piu Chatterjee

@Transference

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Alanta..thank you so much for the chotu sa update.🤗..I must say I am in awe of your writing dear👏..the style is very soulful..and blissful...eagerly waiting for the next one😳

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Incense

@Incense

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#78

lovely ss i loved it it reminds of virgina wolf mrs dolloway

i love how the ss is travelling forwards and back in time and in and out of the characters' minds...this kind of style is too tough to pen down we know gulaal and kesar are already leading the happy life we know they both love each other now ts the past that has to revealed so intersing and loved how u sketch the character nice job alanta