FFKya mujhe pyaar hai part 35 updt pg 143

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Keithuu

@Keithuu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1031

me again...

oye...kya likhun...superb chappie...😳

gullu chammak challo bani red saree mein ghooming...n kesuda ko lattu banaing...😳

yaar...i loved ur description of the mansa devi mandir n that place...😳

n last scene...superb...👏

kesu ne smoking bhi chod diya for chammak challo...me happy...

yaara...chotu comment hai..maaf kar de...😛

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kiran_trudecent

@kiran_trudecent

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#1032

res 😃 piyu tera chapi aya, me mad with happiness now, all jumping here

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unreserved at page 146 😆

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Rimjhim

@CertifiedBabe

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#1033

Res :)

Edit: that was beautiful man, wow kitni sunder jaga hai, i want to go there badly.

Great idea's yaar, really great idea's👏.

vaah kya chapter thaa, really nicely written😃.

And kesar will leave smoking now?, itni jald, i expected him to fight back a bit😆.

Chalo lovely chapter yaar, when i come back from college tired, i find solace in your FF only😆.

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prachurya

@prachurya

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#1034

Oye hoye...jo haal dil ka idhar ho raha hai...Kesar full on paapi nazaron se Gullu ko dekh rha tha☺️

ab Gullu ke dimaag mein locha ho raha hai...thoda thoda ehsaas ho raha hai.

The best scene was the last one

Kesar walked away from Gulaal and when he had attained a safe distance from her he lit a cigarette and started smoking.Gulaal frowned and walked in anger towards him,Extended her hands and threw away the cigarette, and cried, "Tu ye buri adat chhod kyun nahi deta…"

Kesar was annoyed and startled and said, "Main kyun tumhari har baat sunu.."

G: "sunni padegi ..maine kaha na bas…"

K: Jaise tum meri har baat manti ho..'

G:"Behas kar ke faltu k logic mat de...Tu samjhta kyun nahi hai ..."

K: "tum bhi to kuch nahi samjhti ..Gulaal ya fir samajh k bhi anjaan bani rehna chahti ho".Kesar gave her a piercing look.

G: "Dekh tu baat ..ko ghuma mat.Tujhe jo karna hai..kar main kaun hoti hun rokne wali.."Gulaal fumed and was about to walk away..

Kesar grabbed her hand and said, "Acha ab gussa mat ho…Ye lo aaj se humesha k liye chhod di..bas ab to khush"He threw away his packet from the edge.

G: "Kha meri kasam.."

K: "tumhari kasam…"

Kesar looked with affection at Gulaal .She lowered her eyes and said,"ab humein chalna chahiye..bahut der ho gayi hai..And they both walked back towardsthe temple premise.

Kesar loves her so much!😳

Lovely chappie, Piyu! Looking forward to da next chappie!

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snehasri

@snehasri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1035

so lovely chapi and so romantic tooo👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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EXOL

@EXOL

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#1036

the chappi is heavenly beautiful..loved all the nice description u gave about the mansa devi temple..
wow piu u r a rockstar..kithna acha likh thi ho...

i loved kesar's response to gulaal's monkey line..night mai room ka temp ek dum high ho jaata hai..and morning they are back to square one...😆 jaise kuch hua hi nahi..too good

cant wait for the next chappi...

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--Minks--

@--Minks--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1037

Yeee... I have been to Mansa Devi Mandir ... LOL, that's the first thought that came into my mind when I read the preface... and that too like 2 years ago, hence my brain still retained some of the info of the place... I remem the cable car ride, and a long queue to get into it... then, lots n lots of monkeys, chanting n prayers... and a very scenic location... it was beautiful...😊

And coming back to our dear Kesar and Gulaal... poor Gulaal yar, in a fix now... head says something, while heart demands something... pyar kya na karaye... bechare Kesar had to also quit smoking.. seriously, all this lowe can really change a man...

I can well imagine Gulaal kaisi lag rahi hogi... pretty pretty in red, with all her married ornaments / accessories 😍... and bechare Kesar ka kya haal huya hoga... they both realise that there is something between them, yet Gulaal is scared as usual... and poor Kesar gets frustrated... its so true that she is just trying to delay the inevitable, and face the situation... this whole head causes all sorts of confusions and problems for love... finally jab dono confront karenge apni lowe story ko, then it shall be fireworks all around I guess... lets see...

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Incense

@Incense

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#1038

yeah what a beautiful chapii first loved the inner sturggle of ostrich mata bechari is so vulnerable kanya mohe bhaaye na kanha bina chain mohe aaye naa in galool words...and the song was so apt bacha is true brat seedhe patak dia gullu ko i thought aaj slap khayega but bach gaya morning scene lovely i could literally imagine gulaal looking gorgeous in red saree haridwar visit is awesome ok now i m gonna marry a dehradun boy itne saare places dekhne ko milte hain...but me little suspicious sindoor rakhsha ...kya kesu ka bhi sir photega aur will he jump from pahadi😲😭...aisa mat karna kitna sonna munda hai and now kesar is slightly giving her hint and she is all ignoring lovely now waiting for the next chapii jaldi jaldi