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Posted: 14 years ago
siree i will kill ur meow if he dare do this 100 metre romance again.in other show😡😡...mein kya watch karu😕 i need to entertain myself kal se cv ko shoot karne ka man kar raha hai

Arthi..mein kya bathavoon.KB jaise romantic show ke baad..mein Neil ka 5 months wait kiya...patha nahin..kaise spent kiya hai time..but stopped watching TV..for 2 months..n then started star one shows..like PKYEK..thats it.I'm done..n from April what I get to see is..angry,hurted,frustated,banda..nahin tho..full on..jhoru ka gulam..but never romantic..mein kisko jake bholoon..😕me will join u in killing him..if he comes up with a boring story..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: arti07

Chapter 29

Next day kesar got up early in the morning he searched for gulaal but still she was nowhere...kesar'eyes kept looking for her..panba saw kesar and called him in the poojaroom?he went there and touched her feet..panba gave her blessing and wished him happ birthday soon other member of the family wished him too

Haye re sabka laadla.😆.par Tujhe na dekhun to chain mujhe ata nahi hai..ek tere siwa koi aur mujhe bhaata nahi hi..kahin mujhe pyaar hua to nahi hai😉

Kesar seeked everyone's blessing and then asked "gulaal kanha hai"

Rewa said "hospital mein emergency thi isliye gulaal bhabhi aaj subah hi nikal gaayi kah gayi thi aaj bahot kam hai unhe"

Are tune ise meritarah..bana diya..i HATE EMERGENCY CALLS..WHEN i HAVE TO RUSH.😭.ye to subah gayi..taklu makes me run even in the middle of the night😡

Kesar remained silent...just said to himself "par ek phone to karna chahiye"

Haan dil to pagal ho gaya hoga na😆

After he had his breakfast talli came and said "shaam ko meine party rakhi hai tumhari liye...discotheque mein tumahre saare college frns ko invite kiya hai...rewa to nahi aa paayegi tum time se pahunch jaana"

Haan tujhe zaroor beech mein ana hai...😡

Kesar asked "aur gulaal woo aayegi"

Are iski sin to gulaal pe atak gayi hai re😉


Talli brought the cake...though kesar was sad and disappointed he still cut the cake with all his eyes fixed on the door..waiting for her to come?but today it was not his day

Kaate nahi kat te hain lamhe intezaaqr k

nazrein jama k baithein hain raste pe yaar k

😳

Suddenly he recived a sms in his cell

meet me at mumbai port in half an hour- gulaal

Oye hoye..ye tro balle balle ho gayi hai...😳


Kesar said "bahoot jaruri meeting hai client ne abhi bulaya hai jaana padega"

Vicky said "par tu apni hi party chod kar jaa raha hai"

Kesar said "sambhal lena yaar"

Vicky replied "kaise?joote padenge mujhe"

Kesar said "to kha lena mere bday par thode se joote bhi nahi kha sakta hai?"

And he rushed to the door

Vicky shouted from back "par talli"

Kesar replied "talli ko tu chod dena plz"

Dekh a..dekha arti is throwing subtle hints at Villi jodi.🤣.bole to vicky+Talli😉


Talli thought for a sec and dialled his number

Kesar was in his car he didn't anwsered her call

Bahut acha kiya..👏.Lubb you for this arti.🤗..chal bhag Talli.😡.kesu is simply not interested🤢

Kesar reached the desitination and searched gulaal he was searching her impateintly

Tu chupi hai kahan main tadapta yahan😆


Kesar turned around and in the back the sun was setting in the west...amidst it gulaal was standing she wore a light sky blue salwar suit with a light diamond pendat set she was looking like a damsel and the color of sky dropped into kesar's eyes with its own dazzling brightness

Lubbly re.😍.beautifully said..I can just imagine everything..brilliant👏


Gulaal smiled and cheerfully said "mujhe pata tha tumhe pasand aayega tum apna bday hamesha se yacht mein sea k beech mein manana chahete the?..isliye yeh boat hire ki hai tumhare liye"she remebered diaba had said her kesar wanted to celebrate his 21 birthday in the yacht while talking to her in beach

Kesar was little surprised...that was his secret wish but it completely skipped his mind he asked in amusement "tumhe kaise pata"

Gulaal said "bas pata hai...kyu batau tumhe"

She continued "so surprise kaise laga"

Kesar said "bahoot acha"

Tumne arti kya link kiya.😊.its brilliant story telling.👏..me all amazed at your talent👏

⭐️He paused and asked "tumne kal mujhe sabse pehle bday kyu nahi wish kiya"

batao batao..bache ko jawab do😛


Kesar remained silent he just looked at her..after so many hours he has seen her...he wanted the time to stop for the moment so that he can relish her sight

Dil ne kaha dekhe jo jalwe husn yaar ke

laya hain kaun inhe falak se utar k😳


Kesar smiled he took out his cell and then he thought for a sec and then changed his mind

He lied "gulaal koi nahi aa sakta sab bahoot busy kal internal hain sab uski tayyari kar rahe hain"

Gulaal said "to phir talli aur rewa ko bula lo"

Kesar said "yogeshbha k parents aaye hue isliye rewa unke saath dinner legi aur talli bhi nahi aa sakti uske office mein workload jyaada hai isliye busy hai"

Gulaal said "to phir kya kare"

Kesar asked in the low voice "koi nahi hai...kya mein aur tum saath mein bday celebrate karle?"

Gulaal looked at him and gave her consent

Kesar called rewa and made an excuse that he and gulaal are busy in the work..rewa told him to enjoy as she will handle the situation

OMG ye bacha kitna chaal baaz hai.😉.itna gol gol ghumaya sabko k gullu k saath akele bday manaye..😲..badmaash..Oh I lubb this naughty kesuda😳Oye I loved the characterization of Rewa too..bhai k romance ko fultoo support karti hai👏

The yacht proceded out of the slip and into the bay abreast of the ocean...kesar and gulaal were watching the ocean they could smell the ocean breeze..they could see the fish diving and playing in the water from the far distance...they saw other boats that looked like a speck...gulaal and kesar loved ocean they loved to sail the ocean..there was something majestic and romantic to wtiness the sunset from the bow of the yacht...they looked at the ocean and then they looked at each other wih their glowing faces

OMG thats beautiful.👏..lovely,breathtakingly amazing..stuff you've written...⭐️.I can feel the ocean😳


Kesar looked at her and said "mein chahta hum har saal mere bday par sabse pehle tum mujhe wish karo"

Oye he too craves for that special attention na...😳Talli ...shoo ..shoo..he dosen't want you to wish him first..run away...😡



A soft romantic music played

Dil Kho Gaya, Ho Gaya Kisi Ka,

Ab Raasta Mil Gaya, Khushi Ka..

Aankhon Mein Hai Khwab Sa, Kisi Ka..

Ab Raasta Mil Gaya, Khushi Ka..

Rishta Naya Rabba, Dil Chu Raha Hai,

Kheeche Mujhe Koi Dore, Teri Ore..

Gulaal looked at kesar and put her hand forward and asked shall we dance

Kesa put his hand in her and then danced slowly in the tune

Teri Ore, Teri Ore, Teri Ore, Hai Rabba

Khulti Fizaein, Khulti Ghatayein,

Sar Pe Naya Hai Aasaman,

Chaaro Dishayein, Hass Ke Bulaye,

Yu Sab Hue Hai Meharbaan..

Haaan..Hume To Yahi Rabba,

Kasam Se Pata Hai,

Dil Pe Nahi, Koi Zor, Koi Zor

Teri Ore, Teri Ore, Teri Ore, Hai Rabba

Kesar said while dancing"u r fast learner doctor acha dance karne lagi ho...jab saare patient bhaag jaaye to dance school khol lena chal jayega"

Oye thats ...very romantic☺️



Gulaal was drunk..she said "one more"

Kesar said "nahi bilkul nahi tum already teen peg le chuki ho ab bilkul nahi"

Gulaal said in drunken state "to kya hua...mein bahoot strong hun aur mujhe nahi chadi hai ok now give me"

oye she loves challenges na..lovely...😳

And she snatched the wine bottle and ran...gulaal was laughing she felt free and careless...kesar also ran behind her..they were laughing...gulaal stopped and kesar snatched the bottle back..they were breathless so they sat on the deck...after a while kesar looked around the ocean was calm it was the lovely placed night; a full moon floated in the clear sky the moonlight illuminated the ocean and stars were twinkling above them...

Kesar and gulaal looked at the lovely sky above them and lay on the yacht deck..they lay beside each other.. gazing the sky, the dazzling stars and the silvery and calm moon

Kesar looked at wonderful pictersique and said "sabkuch ktina khubsoorat haina...lovely night beautiful sea aur tum...mein apni poori life yanha is yacht mein spend kar sakta hun"

And then he looked at gulaal who was staring the sky with a lovely smile

ye kya keh diya tune...bade ache lagte hain ye dharti,ye ocean,ye raina..aur tum😳


And then she sat on the deck floor and said "yeh chaand hamesha humare pass rehta hai...kanhi par bhi chale jaaye humara saath nahi chodta...har safar mein humare saath saath chalta hai...apni roshni se saare andhere door kar deta hain..."

And then she thought...the loneliness and pain slowly crept in her heart and she said in sadness "par itne paas rehte hue bhi yeh humse kitna door hain...chahe kar bhi hum ise paa nahi sakte" she was pouring her heart out...she was talking about her pain of losing kesar in future...she was talking about her helplessness not to fall in love with him

oye gullu love bahut hua..now we want kesu madness and passion...now we want kesu klove..par yaar this took my breath awy..beautifully done arti..lubbed it re...

madhosh dil ki dhadkan

chup si ye tanhayi

dil liya jaan bhi

lega ye pyaar harjayi

ye teri ashiqui

kar na de meri ruswayi😳

Kesar looked at her...the sarrow the pain and the agony in her heart reflected in her face...kesar was puzzled...gulaal remained silent for a moment in deep grief...she struggled to respress the tears that forced the way from her saddened heart

Are bache ko aur conphusiya mat...uska madness chahiye..now😍

With the deep vulnerability in her eyes she said "kesar...mein...tum..tum mujhe bhool to nahi jaayoge"

Kesar was shocked to hear it he asked "yeh kya kah rahi ho gulaal"

Gulaal looked at kesar for a moment she struggled with the fast raising tears and placing her head on kesar shoulder she wept...she sobbed as if her heart will would break

Kesar was confused...he was clueless he just lock her in his arms...he stood for a while...then looked at her...gulaal had fallen asleep in his warm arms...kesar looked at her and gently lift her and carried to the bed...he laid her on bed and genlty put the blanket on her...for a moment he stood still he looked at the innocent glow of her face..she was sleeping like a baby...he touched her cheeks gently and said "kesar khud ko bhul sakta hai par gulaal ko kabhi nahi"

awww that took my heart awy.😭..loved it⭐️..ye CVs kuch inspiration kyun nahi lete😡..OMG tyou made him play blanket blanket😆


he looked at her and said "kal raat ko kuch nahi...tume thodi si wine pee thi aur tumhe bilkul nahi chadi...i must say bahoot strong ho mein ab tumhe kabhi challenge nahi karoonga"

Maan gaye.bachu.east or west gullu is the best😆


kesar looked at her and asked "waise tum kal kya kah rahi thi chaand...bhul jayoge"


Arti arti.😛.o meri chotu govinda..cum yash chopra.🤗.tu yaar kya chappi layi..bole to my dil all garden garden..happi shappi.😳..tu likhna mat band kar..ur chappi just made my day,,,thank you for incorporating my suggestion... l me your FF ki craziest pankha...lubb you re...Well I think you are asuperb writer.👏.and you deserve to be appreciated⭐️..cannot wait for the next chappi.😍..oops dukhi mat ho😃..now we want kesu madness now..I lubbed this chappi...kesu..love..no more gullu crying..😭..we want kesu madness.LUBB YOUR FF AND YOU TOO..😳🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: chweetu



Mujhe bhi...celebrate karna hai..tho hum kya kare...better to marry a sailor..😆n piu..thank u piu..for d bewadi idea..

Bole to siree me wanted to see a bewadi gullu thats why😉

Edited by manzilmukul - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Bole to siree me wanted to see a bewadi gullu thats why😉


hey..serial mein nahin confess kiya tho kya..hua..Arthi ke FF mein tho bewadi banake..sara grudge nikhalsakthe hai..CV's pe..😆

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😆.😆bole to ekdum correct.siree

..arti...tu ache chappi likh na we are desperately waiting😃

Edited by manzilmukul - 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: manzilmukul



Edited by chweetu - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow that chapter was a surprise Arti! I honestly thought we'd get some angry GK moments if Gullu didn't wish him - but was she a sweetheart or what! The Gulaal in your fiction is so much better aware of what she wants vs what she must do - as opposed to the show, where she knows only what she must do and pushes away even flimsy thoughts of what she wants, for the most!

After every chapter there is so much build up that I apprehend and expect even more for Kesar to know of Gulaal's promise to PB... Can't even imagine his range of emotions in reaction!

But was Gulaal's last dialog an indication? Is the showdown coming? Waiting eagerly for chapter #30!
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW Aarti, what a superb chapter.. padhke mazaa agayaa. just loved it. Oh I loved the yacht scene and your description about the ocean.. Iam really really speechless to see such an amazing and creative write up by you.. Yaar tune tho mujhe bahut kushhh kar diya, I was actually a bit upset.. but after reading your FF am better now. Thanks Aarti for such a wonderful chapter...
The more I read the more I get excited about the next chapter...
Wating for the next chapter..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: prachurya

Yaar meri saari depression durr kr daali iss chappie mein...plzzz Gulaal end hone ka dukh nahi hai re...tere iss ff ko axe krne ki bhavna ka dukh hai...I lovvved it 22 much. Can't wait for the next chappie- Is Kesar gonna barge into Gullu's room and say- "Tune muze bday pe nazar andaaz kyu kr diya, Gulaal??"- I'll keep guessing. Luking forward to another dhasoo chappie frm ur side bcoz aage toh pyaar hi pyaar hai

thanks dear though me too upset with the show...i guess the show is about gloomy lovestory with lots of crying and family drama...and updated the next chapii
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Originally posted by: vinolya

Arti, Very nice chapters... Read both the chapters - 27 and 28... just came online to read your chapters as I wasnt feeling sleepy.

Lovely... lovely and fantastic. Too good. Each and every move of the character is beautifully described. Keep writing and I enjoy reading it...
Now next chapter please...

thanks vino my net is playing hide and seek so couldnt reply in time...thanks u loved it...😳😳

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